Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons with smoother linking words. Avoid awkward phrasing and redundancy (e.g. “as so”). Use precise vocabulary like “eco-friendly” and correct grammar (e.g. "because paper comes from trees").

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s faster and more eco-friendly. For example, typing reduces paper use, which helps save trees, and digital notes are easier to organize and edit.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first (Yes/No and device), then briefly explain with clearer vocabulary and grammar. Avoid filler words and long confusing clauses. Use linking words like "so" or "therefore" correctly.

Exemplo: I usually type on an iPad with a keyboard case. I bought a detachable keyboard which turns the iPad into a laptop, so I can type comfortably wherever I am.

Sugestão: Provide a clear time reference or say it developed gradually, and correct phrasing: "over time" not "with overtime"; avoid "learn to type it." Use linking phrase like "so" or "since" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I don’t remember an exact year; I started using computers as a child, so my typing skills developed gradually over time as I used gadgets and the internet more often.

Sugestão: Start with a concise topic sentence describing your main method, then give one or two specific details (website name, exercises, frequency). Avoid redundant phrases like "I think I believe" and incorrect collocations such as "practice my type."

Exemplo: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice on a website called whichistypo.com. I do 20–30 minutes of timed exercises every day to increase speed and focus on accuracy drills to reduce errors.

× Also because paper is made from trees as so.

✓ Also, paper is made from trees.

The original sentence uses an unnecessary and incorrect conjunction phrase 'as so' and redundant 'because' after 'Also'. Remove 'because' and 'as so' and add a comma after 'Also' to form a concise clause: 'Also, paper is made from trees.' This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× Will I have a iPad and I have bought it's necessities like it is kind of access accessory that attaches to iPad and make it like a laptop so I type on that thing.

✓ I have an iPad and I bought its accessories, such as a keyboard attachment that connects to the iPad and makes it like a laptop, so I type on that.

Errors: incorrect auxiliary 'Will' and article 'a' before a vowel sound (should be 'an iPad'), wrong use of contraction 'it's' (means 'it is' instead of possessive 'its'), awkward phrasing 'access accessory' and verb agreement 'make' should be 'makes'. Fix by removing 'Will', using 'I have an iPad', 'its accessories', clearer phrase 'a keyboard attachment that connects to the iPad and makes it like a laptop', and adjust verb to third-person singular 'makes'.

× As long as I remember, I have been into gadgets and Internet from my childhood, so there is no specific year in which I learn to type it.

✓ As far as I remember, I have been into gadgets and the Internet since my childhood, so there is no specific year when I learned to type.

Problems: phrase 'As long as I remember' should be 'As far as I remember'; missing article before 'Internet'; incorrect preposition 'from my childhood' should be 'since my childhood' to indicate a starting point continuing to present; verb tense 'learn' should be past simple 'learned' because referring to a past event. Also remove unnecessary 'it' after 'type'.

× My typing skills developed gradually with overtime.

✓ My typing skills developed gradually over time.

'With overtime' is incorrect; the idiomatic expression is 'over time'. No article needed. This corrects adverbial phrase placement and uses the standard collocation.

× I think I believe in the theory that practice makes a man perfect and for improving my typing speed and accuracy I use a specific website whichistypo.com in which you can practice your typing and reduce errors.

✓ I believe in the saying 'practice makes perfect', and to improve my typing speed and accuracy I use a website called whichistypo.com where you can practice typing and reduce errors.

Redundancy: 'I think I believe' should be simplified to 'I believe'. Phrase 'practice makes a man perfect' is non-idiomatic; standard is 'practice makes perfect'. Use 'to improve' (infinitive) rather than 'for improving' for intent. Use 'a website called whichistypo.com' and 'where you can practice typing' (no possessive 'your' necessary). This fixes article usage and more natural phrasing.

× So this is the primary thing by which I practice my type.

✓ So this is the main way I practice my typing.

Awkward phrase 'primary thing by which' should be 'main way'. 'Practice my type' is incorrect; use noun 'typing'. This corrects pronoun/article awkwardness and provides natural collocation.