Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct minor grammar and word-choice errors. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Replace vague phrases like "it depends on the contexts" with "it depends on the context" and say "formal occasions" or "invitations" instead of "formal introduction". Avoid filler words such as "uh."

Exemplo: I prefer typing for everyday chats but handwriting for formal invitations. For example, I use messaging apps like WhatsApp for quick conversations, whereas I write wedding invitations by hand because they feel more personal and respectful.

Sugestão: Fix tense and grammar mistakes and make the answer more direct. Start with a clear topic sentence stating which you use daily. Then give one short reason using a linking word. Remove redundant phrases like "when I was at work" and incorrect forms such as "my off my company."

Exemplo: I use a laptop keyboard every day at work because my company provides me with a laptop. Although desktop keyboards are available, I prefer the laptop since it is portable and suits my workflow.

Sugestão: Correct factual word choice and grammar, and provide a clear time reference. Avoid errors like "primary sex student" (likely meant "primary school student") and simplify sentences. Use linking words to connect cause and effect and be specific about the age or school stage.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was in primary school, around age ten. Because I played online games with friends, I needed to type quickly to communicate during gameplay, which helped me improve my typing skills.

Sugestão: Be more concise and use correct collocations. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one clear method with a linking word. Replace phrases like "demands a quick communication with the friends" with "requires quick communication with friends." Also avoid repeating "I type every day" if you already explained how practice helped.

Exemplo: I improved my typing mainly by playing online games, which require quick messages during gameplay. As a result, I practiced typing daily and gradually became faster and more accurate.

× It depends on the contexts.

✓ It depends on the context.

'Context' in this general sense is uncountable; using the plural 'contexts' sounds odd. Use the singular 'context' to refer to the overall situation or circumstances. Suggestion: say 'It depends on the context' or specify 'different contexts' if you mean multiple situations.

× I prefer typing when it comes to daily conversation on WhatsApp, WeChat, uh.

✓ I prefer typing for daily conversations on WhatsApp or WeChat.

Use 'for' to indicate purpose and the plural 'conversations' since you mean many instances. Also use 'or' (not a comma) to list alternatives. Remove filler 'uh' in formal speech. Suggestion: 'I prefer typing for daily conversations on WhatsApp or WeChat.'

× However, I prefer handwriting when it comes to formal introduction like wedding dinner invitation.

✓ However, I prefer handwriting for formal introductions, like wedding dinner invitations.

Use 'for' to indicate purpose, pluralize 'introductions' and 'invitations' when speaking generally, and add a comma before the example. Use the definite/indefinite article appropriately: 'a wedding invitation' or plural 'wedding invitations.' Suggestion: '...for formal introductions, like wedding invitations.'

× I type on the laptop keyboard every day when I was at work because I am an office worker and my off my company offers me a laptop for work.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day at work because I am an office worker and my company provides me with a laptop for work.

Tense mismatch: 'every day' and present identity require present simple ('type') and location 'at work' rather than 'when I was at work.' Remove duplicated words ('my off my'). Use 'a laptop' or 'the laptop' depending on context, and 'provide someone with something' or 'offer me a laptop.' Suggestion: 'I type on a laptop keyboard every day at work because my company provides me with a laptop.'

× They also provides the desktop keyboards but I do prefer the laptop one.

✓ They also provide desktop keyboards, but I prefer the laptop.

Subject-verb agreement: 'They' requires 'provide' (not 'provides'). 'Desktop keyboards' is fine as plural; 'the laptop one' is wordy—use 'the laptop' or 'the laptop keyboard.' Also add a comma before 'but.' Suggestion: 'They also provide desktop keyboards, but I prefer the laptop.'

× I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was a primary sex student.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was a primary school student.

The word 'sex' is incorrect here—likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'school.' Keep past simple 'learned' and clarify the correct noun 'primary school student.' Suggestion: 'I learned how to type when I was a primary school student.'

× It is because I had to type on a keyboard to chat with my friends when I was playing online games.

✓ This is because I had to type to chat with my friends while I was playing online games.

Start with 'This is because' to refer back to previous sentence. Use 'type to chat' (not 'type on a keyboard to chat' which is redundant) and 'while' to indicate simultaneous actions. Tense 'had to' is acceptable if explaining necessity in the past. Suggestion: 'This is because I had to type to chat with my friends while I was playing online games.'

× So that typing makes me easier to communicate with my friends.

✓ So typing makes it easier for me to communicate with my friends.

'So that' is used to express purpose and is not correct here. Use 'So' or 'Therefore' to indicate result. The construction 'makes me easier' is incorrect; use 'makes it easier for me' or 'makes communication easier.' Suggestion: 'So typing makes it easier for me to communicate with my friends.'

× I think I have improved my typing a lot while playing video games with my friends because it demands a quick communication with the friends during the gameplay and practice makes perfect.

✓ I think I have improved my typing a lot by playing video games with my friends because it demands quick communication during gameplay, and practice makes perfect.

Use 'have improved' (present perfect) to describe an unspecified time improvement; use 'by playing' or 'while playing' consistently. 'Demands a quick communication' is incorrect: use 'demands quick communication' (no article) and remove 'the' before 'friends' if generic. Slight punctuation improves clarity: add a comma before 'and practice makes perfect.' Suggestion: 'I have improved my typing a lot by playing video games with my friends because it demands quick communication during gameplay, and practice makes perfect.'

× I type every day.

✓ I type every day.

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the present simple tense to describe a habitual action, so no change is needed. Suggestion: Keep as is or expand with context if desired.