Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting reasons with precise language and correct grammar. Avoid redundancy (e.g., "everyday" vs "every day") and incorrect phrasing (e.g., "I feel more convenient" should be "it's more convenient for me").

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and makes editing easy. For example, when I write essays on my laptop I can quickly correct mistakes and reorganize paragraphs, which saves me time and improves the final result.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and coherence: begin with a direct topic sentence, then use linking words (for example, 'for tasks such as') to list reasons. Correct small errors ("everyday" → "every day", capitalize proper nouns, and remove redundancy like "or somewhere else").

Exemplo: I usually type on my laptop every day because it's portable. For example, I use it for studying, doing assignments, browsing the internet and chatting with friends, and I can easily take it to school or a café when I need to work outside.

Sugestão: Focus on accuracy and clarity: give a clear time reference and describe the learning process with correct grammar and logical linking (use 'at first', 'then', 'after a while'). Avoid ungrammatical phrasing ("learned how to tie" → "learned to type", "age of 10s" → "around ten"). Use comparatives correctly ('faster', 'the fastest').

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was around ten, in primary school. At first I typed very slowly because I had to look at the keys, but after practising on the computer for schoolwork and chatting with friends, I gradually became much faster.

Sugestão: Be relevant and specific: answer directly with practical methods for improvement (for example, practice exercises, typing software, posture, and touch-typing drills). Correct grammar ("everyday" → "every day", "gets" → "get") and avoid irrelevant statements like 'breathing regularly' unless explained. Use linking words to organize steps ('first', 'then', 'finally').

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practising regularly and using online typing programs to build speed and accuracy. For example, I spend 15 minutes a day on typing exercises, focus on touch-typing without looking at the keyboard, and monitor my progress with weekly speed tests to track improvement.

× I prefer typing over handwriting because it's much faster and easier to edit my work if I made a mistake, and I also use a computer everyday for studying and communicating so I feel more convenient.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because it's much faster and easier to edit my work if I make a mistake, and I also use a computer every day for studying and communicating, so it is more convenient for me.

Errors: 'prefer typing over handwriting' is acceptable but 'prefer X to Y' is more idiomatic; 'if I made a mistake' mixes conditional time and should be 'if I make a mistake' (present real conditional); 'everyday' is an adjective but needs the adverb 'every day'; 'I feel more convenient' incorrectly uses an adjective with 'feel' and the wrong subject — use 'it is more convenient for me' or 'I find it more convenient'. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y', use present tense in real conditionals, use 'every day' as two words for frequency, and rephrase 'feel more convenient' to 'it is more convenient for me'.

× I usually type on my laptop everyday and use it for my studying, during assignments, browsing the Internet and chatting with my friends. I prefer a laptop because it's portable so I can take it to school or Cafe if I need to work or somewhere else.

✓ I usually type on my laptop every day and use it for studying, doing assignments, browsing the Internet, and chatting with my friends. I prefer a laptop because it's portable, so I can take it to school, a cafe, or elsewhere if I need to work.

Errors: 'everyday' should be 'every day' (frequency adverb); 'use it for my studying' is awkward — use 'use it for studying'; 'during assignments' is wrong preposition — use 'doing assignments' or 'for assignments'; 'Cafe' should be lowercase 'cafe' and idiomatically include article 'a cafe'; 'somewhere else' is informal—'elsewhere' fits better. Suggestion: use correct prepositions and forms: 'for studying', 'doing assignments', and use articles with countable nouns like 'a cafe'.

× I learned how to tie when I was in primary school around the age of 10s. At first I tried quite so slowly because I had to look at the keyboard all the time, and however, after using the computer usually for schoolwork and chatting with friends, I gradually become most fastest.

✓ I learned how to type when I was in primary school at around the age of 10. At first I typed very slowly because I had to look at the keyboard all the time; however, after using the computer regularly for schoolwork and chatting with friends, I gradually became much faster.

Errors: 'learned how to tie' is a spelling error ('type'); 'around the age of 10s' is incorrect — use 'around the age of 10' or 'when I was 10'; 'tried quite so slowly' is ungrammatical — say 'typed very slowly' or 'was very slow'; 'and however' is redundant — use one connector like 'however' or use a semicolon; 'after using the computer usually' has wrong adverb order — 'using the computer regularly' or 'usually using'; 'gradually become most fastest' mixes forms: past tense required 'became', and 'most fastest' is wrong — use 'much faster' or 'the fastest'. Suggestion: correct spelling, use simple past consistently for past events, place adverbs correctly, and use comparative 'much faster'.

× I improve my typing by breathing regularly. Since I use my laptop everyday for studying and chatting, I naturally gets faster over time and I also try to type without looking at the keyboard with having improved both my speed and acquiring.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing regularly. Since I use my laptop every day for studying and chatting, I naturally get faster over time, and I also try to type without looking at the keyboard, which has improved both my speed and accuracy.

Errors: 'breathing regularly' is semantically wrong — likely intended 'practicing regularly'; 'everyday' should be 'every day'; 'I naturally gets' has subject-verb agreement error — 'I get'; 'with having improved both my speed and acquiring' is ungrammatical: 'acquiring' is incomplete and wrong; use 'which has improved both my speed and accuracy' or 'which improves my speed and accuracy'. Suggestion: use appropriate verb ('practice'), correct subject-verb agreement, and use clear nouns like 'accuracy' instead of vague gerunds.