Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and grammatically correct: state preference directly, avoid filler words, and give a specific reason with a linking word. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because I use a computer for most of my schoolwork. For example, I type notes and essays every day, which is faster and easier to edit.

Sugestão: Answer directly, correct word order and reduce repetition. Use a linking word to provide specific detail (what you do on the laptop). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually type on a laptop every day because I do most of my schoolwork online. For instance, I write assignments, attend classes, and take notes on my laptop.

Sugestão: Give a clear time frame and avoid fillers. State when and briefly how you learned, using linking words to explain the process. Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I never had formal lessons; I learned to type gradually during primary school. Over time, I practised by doing homework and chatting online, which improved my speed.

Sugestão: Provide concrete methods and use linking words to organize ideas. Give 2–3 specific actions you take to improve (practice, online courses, exercises). Avoid vague statements and fillers.

Exemplo: I haven't focused on it much, but to improve I practice daily with online typing exercises and use typing games to build speed. Also, I try to type assignments without looking at the keyboard to increase accuracy.

× I more prefer to typing because, uh, most of my life I use the typing instead of handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing because, for most of my life I have used typing instead of handwriting.

The phrase 'more prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' already conveys comparison (Grammar ID 14). 'to typing' mixes 'prefer to do' and 'prefer doing' structures; use 'prefer typing' or 'prefer to type'. 'the typing' is unnecessary article use (Grammar ID 22) and present perfect 'have used' fits 'for most of my life' to indicate an action continuing to the present (Grammar ID 6). Suggestion: use 'I prefer typing' or 'I have preferred typing' for ongoing preference.

× Yes, because these days are so many thing to do by using laptop for my for my uh school. School works so yeah, I often use it.

✓ Yes, because these days there are so many things to do using a laptop for my school work, so I often use it.

Multiple errors: 'these days are so many thing' has wrong word order and count (Grammar ID 26 and 1): correct is 'there are so many things' using 'there be' structure (Grammar ID 3) and plural 'things' (Grammar ID 1). 'by using laptop' misses an article: 'a laptop' (Grammar ID 22). 'for my for my uh school. School works' is redundant and wrong: 'for my school work' combines noun and modifier correctly (Grammar ID 26). Use present tense 'I often use it' is fine (Grammar ID 6). Suggestion: restructure sentence to 'There are so many things to do on a laptop for my school work.'

× Uh, actually I didn't learn specifically, uh, to, it's not more like, uh, learning. It's kind of naturally in, in, uh, getting to me, uh, during my lifetime.

✓ Actually, I didn't learn specifically; it's not really learning. I picked it up naturally during my life.

The original mixes tenses and awkward phrasing. 'Didn't learn specifically' correctly uses past tense (Grammar ID 5) but 'to, it's not more like' is ungrammatical (Grammar ID 26). 'Picked it up' is a clear past tense phrasal verb appropriate for acquisition in the past. 'During my lifetime' is acceptable, but 'in my life' or 'during my life' is more natural. Suggestion: simplify to two clear sentences using past tense for the acquisition event.

× I never thought about that before, but I think, uh, there are many, there needs many pro practice. Uh, this is, uh, different because this is a different type of things that we used to.

✓ I never thought about that before, but I think you need a lot of practice. This is different because it is a different type of thing than what we are used to.

Errors include 'there needs many pro practice' which mixes dummy there construction and incorrect quantifier/adjective order (Grammar ID 3 and 14). Use 'you need a lot of practice' or 'a lot of practice is needed' to be grammatical. 'Different type of things' should be 'different type of thing' or 'different type of things than what we are used to' for correct comparison (Grammar ID 19 and 26). Also 'we used to' needs present perfect or continuous 'we are used to' to indicate current familiarity. Suggestion: use 'a lot of practice' and 'what we are used to' for clarity.