Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and avoid filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking phrase. Reduce repetition and finish the sentence clearly.

Exemplo: I prefer typing. Firstly, it's faster than handwriting, so I can finish writing tasks more quickly. Secondly, typing avoids messy handwriting, which makes my work neater and easier to read.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence naming the device, then support with two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "beautiful" without explaining why, and remove fillers.

Exemplo: I use a desktop keyboard every day because I can customize it to suit my typing feel and look. For example, I can change the key switches for better feedback, and I can modify the keycaps and lighting to make it unique.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct time reference, then add one or two specific supporting details in order using linking words. Correct tense and avoid repeated words.

Exemplo: I learned to type in junior high school. At that time we had regular computer classes, and I practised a lot because my school held typing competitions, which motivated me to improve.

Sugestão: Start with a clear method, then explain steps you take using linking words. Remove hesitations and finish ideas. Mention specific practice techniques and measurable improvements.

Exemplo: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I used online typing lessons and daily drills for 20–30 minutes, which helped me stop looking at the keys and increase my speed to around 60 words per minute.

× I prefer typing, that's why I choose computer based IELTS test and I think it's really faster than handwriting and you don't have to consider your, uh, your type of handwriting and you just type on the computer or on the.

✓ I prefer typing; that's why I chose the computer-based IELTS test. I think it's much faster than handwriting, and you don't have to worry about your handwriting; you just type on the computer.

Errors: missing definite article before 'computer-based IELTS test', incorrect tense 'choose' (should be past 'chose' to match context), awkward ending 'or on the.' and repetition. Use of comparative 'much faster' is more natural than 'really faster'. Suggestions: add 'the' before a specific test, use hyphen for 'computer-based', change 'choose' to 'chose' to indicate decision already made, remove trailing fragment and combine clauses for clarity.

× I prefer a desktop keyboard because it's really beautiful that you can DIY them by yourself and it's different from others.

✓ I prefer a desktop keyboard because it's really nice; you can DIY it yourself and it's different from others.

Error: pronoun number mismatch 'a desktop keyboard' (singular) with 'them' (plural). Also 'beautiful' describing a keyboard is odd; 'nice' is more natural. Suggestions: use singular pronoun 'it' to match 'a desktop keyboard' and remove redundant 'by yourself' when using 'yourself' or keep only one.

× And you can, uh, choose the voice when you tap the keyboard and the appearance of it.

✓ And you can choose the sound when you press the keyboard and change its appearance.

Errors: preposition 'when you tap the keyboard' is acceptable but 'choose the voice' is unnatural; 'sound' fits better. 'Appearance of it' is awkward; use 'its appearance'. Also 'press' fits keyboard action. Suggestions: use 'sound' and 'its' to create natural phrasing.

× It's a long time ago when I was in my junior high school and I and we have a computer class at that time and I learn from that and we also have a computer typing competition in school and I try hard.

✓ That was a long time ago when I was in junior high school. We had a computer class then, and I learned from it. We also had a computer-typing competition at school, and I tried hard.

Errors: mixed tenses and incorrect present tense forms ('have', 'learn', 'try') for past context. Use past tense consistently: 'was', 'had', 'learned', 'tried'. Also remove duplicate 'I and we' and improve sentence segmentation. Suggestions: split into sentences and use past tense for past events.

× Practice makes perfect I guess because at first I I cannot type without saying the keyboard, see the letters on it and when I practice a lot I can I can just type very quickly and haven't looked at the.

✓ Practice makes perfect, I guess. At first I could not type without looking at the keys to see the letters. After a lot of practice, I could type very quickly without looking at the keyboard.

Errors: run-on sentence, tense inconsistency (present 'cannot' should be past 'could not' for past learning process), awkward phrasing 'saying the keyboard' and 'haven't looked at the.' incomplete fragment. Suggestions: break into sentences, use past tense to describe past ability, replace 'saying' with 'looking at' or 'reading', and finish the idea 'without looking at the keyboard'.

× I prefer typing, that's why I choose computer based IELTS test and I think it's really faster than handwriting and you don't have to consider your, uh, your type of handwriting and you just type on the computer or on the.

✓ I prefer typing; that's why I chose the computer-based IELTS test and I think it's much faster than handwriting. You don't have to consider your handwriting; you just type on the computer.

Note: also addressed third-person singular consistency: contraction 'it's' (it is) is correct but ensure verbs match subjects. Main corrections focused on tense and articles; ensure 'it is' is appropriate. Suggestions: use consistent verb forms and split long sentence for clarity.