Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting reason with a short example. Avoid repetition and small grammatical errors (use 'on a computer' and 'than handwriting'). Use a linking word for coherence.

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting. It's much faster for long essays, and on a computer I can quickly correct mistakes with spell-check — for example, when I write reports for university I can revise drafts easily.

Sugestão: Clarify which device you mean and avoid confusing or contradictory statements. Give a direct answer (desktop or laptop), explain one clear reason, and use linking words. Correct vocabulary (e.g. 'desktop keyboard' vs 'laptop keyboard') and concise phrasing will help.

Exemplo: I usually use a desktop keyboard because it's more comfortable. The keys are larger and better spaced, so I can type faster and with fewer errors when I'm doing long work.

Sugestão: Give a clear time frame and avoid repeating phrases. Start with a topic sentence stating an approximate time, then add a brief supporting detail (e.g. how or where you learned). Remove fillers like 'uh' and correct grammar (use 'I don't remember' and 'I started').

Exemplo: I don't remember the exact time, but I think I started learning to type at school when I was about ten. We used computer lessons, and practising games and exercises helped me build speed.

Sugestão: Be concise and use parallel structure. Start with a clear recommendation, then give two specific methods with linking words ('for example' or 'or'). Fix grammar and phrasing (e.g. 'on a website' and 'in Word').

Exemplo: I think the best way to improve typing is daily practice. For example, you can use free typing websites to do timed drills, or practise by typing short essays in Microsoft Word and focusing on accuracy before speed.

× Well, I prefer typing over handwriting because it is easier for me to type a long essay than handwriting.

✓ Well, I prefer typing to handwriting because it is easier for me to type a long essay than to handwrite.

Use of article not main issue; primary problems are preposition choice and parallel verb form. 'Prefer ... to' is the correct collocation (Grammar problem type ID 22). Also when comparing actions, use parallel forms: 'to type' ... 'to handwrite' or 'type' ... 'handwrite'. 'Handwriting' is a noun referring to style, so use the verb 'handwrite' or 'write by hand' to match 'type'. Suggestion: say 'prefer typing to handwriting' or 'prefer to type rather than write by hand.'

× Also I can easily edit my mistakes on computer.

✓ Also, I can easily edit my mistakes on the computer.

Missing definite article before 'computer' when referring to the general device used (Grammar problem type ID 22). In English we usually say 'on the computer' rather than 'on computer.' Add a comma after 'Also' for clarity. Suggestion: 'edit my mistakes on the computer' or 'on a computer.'

× In my daily routine, I prefer to work on keyboard because it is easier and more convenient than laptop keyboard.

✓ In my daily routine, I prefer to work on a keyboard because it is easier and more convenient than a laptop keyboard.

Missing articles before 'keyboard' and 'laptop keyboard' (Grammar problem type ID 11). Use 'on a keyboard' and 'a laptop keyboard' to refer to one of that type. Also comparing 'a keyboard' to 'a laptop keyboard' requires articles. Suggestion: include 'a' before both nouns for correctness and clarity.

× Also the laptop has key space more than keyboard of laptop.

✓ Also, the laptop's keys have more space than those on a laptop keyboard.

Awkward word order and incorrect noun phrase structure (Grammar problem type ID 13). Original lacks articles and uses 'key space' unnatural; 'the laptop's keys have more space' or 'its keys are spaced more widely' is clearer. Prefer 'those on a laptop keyboard' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: rephrase to 'the laptop's keys have more space than those on a laptop keyboard.'

× Actually I have not remembered when I have learned typing on keyboard because uh for for many years I was typing on computer and I have not remember such idea when I have started typing.

✓ Actually, I don't remember when I learned to type on a keyboard because, for many years, I was typing on a computer and I don't recall when I first started typing. Maybe I started at school.

Multiple tense and form issues: incorrect use of present perfect 'have not remembered' and 'have learned' where simple past or present simple is appropriate (Grammar problem type ID 6 and 5). Use 'I don't remember' (present simple) for a current state of not remembering. Use 'learned' or 'learnt' (simple past) for a past event. 'Typing on keyboard' needs article 'a keyboard' and 'typing on a computer' needs 'a computer' (also article errors). 'I have not remember' is ungrammatical; use 'I don't recall.' Suggestion: simplify to 'I don't remember when I learned to type; I probably started at school.'

× Maybe I have started in my school time.

✓ Maybe I started during my school years.

Incorrect use of present perfect 'have started' for a past possibility and awkward time expression 'in my school time' (Grammar problem type ID 4). Use simple past 'started' for finished past events and natural expression 'during my school years' or 'when I was at school.' Suggestion: 'Maybe I started when I was at school.'

× While there are many ways to improve typing, but as per my opinion, the best way to improve typing speed is daily practice.

✓ Although there are many ways to improve typing, in my opinion the best way to increase typing speed is daily practice.

Using both 'while' (or 'although') and 'but' together is redundant (Grammar problem type ID 16). 'As per my opinion' is non-idiomatic; use 'in my opinion.' Also prefer 'increase' or 'improve' typing speed. Suggestion: use 'Although... , in my opinion ...' or simply 'In my opinion, the best way ...'.

× I Either you can do it on a website which is free or you can type an essay in the word.

✓ Either you can do it on a free website, or you can type an essay in Word.

Multiple issues: word order and extraneous 'I' at start, and awkward phrasing 'in the word' (Grammar problem type ID 12). 'Either' should start the choice: 'Either you can... or you can...' 'a free website' is idiomatic; 'Word' (Microsoft Word) is capitalized and does not need 'the'. Suggestion: 'Either you can practice on a free website, or you can type an essay in Word.'