Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more coherent and avoid contradictions and hesitations. Give a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two concise supporting details. Remove filler words ("uh") and correct the logic: if you have a computer you usually have a keyboard, so clarify what you meant (e.g. you meant you don't have access to a computer at home).

Exemplo: I usually prefer typing, especially on my phone because it's faster and more convenient. However, when I need to take notes or draw diagrams I sometimes choose handwriting because it helps me remember information better.

Sugestão: This answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by tightening the structure and adding a short linking phrase to connect ideas. Avoid repeating the same reason twice; use a specific example of what you type on your phone to add detail.

Exemplo: No, I don't use a desktop or laptop every day because I don't own one. Instead, I type on my phone daily for messages, emails and study notes, which I find quicker and more convenient than writing by hand.

Sugestão: Start with a direct time reference (e.g. "At school" or "When I was X years old") and avoid vague phrasing. Use correct article usage and grammar ("the keyboard", "these lessons"), and give one specific detail about what you practiced to make the answer more concrete.

Exemplo: I learned to type at school during my ICT and computer science lessons when I was about 12. We used the keyboard every lesson to write C++ and Python code, which helped me become more accurate and faster.

Sugestão: Use present tense consistently for routines and simplify wording. Be specific about methods you use to improve (e.g. practice drills, typing websites, timed exercises) and give one concrete result (speed or accuracy).

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practising on my phone and using online typing tests for 10–15 minutes each day to learn key positions and increase speed. As a result, my accuracy has improved and I can type faster during timed writing tasks.

× However, if I'm using a computer I would rather hand write because I don't have. Uh. Keyboard to practice typing.

✓ However, if I'm using a computer I would rather handwrite because I don't have a keyboard to practice typing.

Original has fragmented clauses and an unnecessary pause 'Uh.' 'Hand write' should be one word 'handwrite' in this context and the clause 'because I don't have a keyboard to practice typing' should be continuous. Improve by combining fragments and removing filler words; ensure 'keyboard' is linked to 'don't have'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× No, since I don't have a laptop or desktop, I am not practicing typing on the keyboard.

✓ No, since I don't have a laptop or a desktop, I am not practicing typing on a keyboard.

The original 'the keyboard' implies a specific keyboard; general reference requires indefinite article 'a keyboard'. Also parallel structure benefits from 'a laptop or a desktop'. Use 'a' when speaking about any one of that class rather than a particular item. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I learned typing on keyboard during my ICT and Computer science lessons because we are using computers every day for C++ and Python languages.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard during my ICT and Computer Science lessons because we used computers every day for C++ and Python.

Problems: 'learned typing' should be 'learned to type'; 'on keyboard' needs 'the keyboard' for the instrument; 'Computer science' should be capitalized consistently; tense should be past 'we used' because learning occurred in the past; 'languages' is redundant after naming languages. Fix by using infinitive, correct article, consistent capitalization, and past tense. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Moreover, it's much convenient to use keyboards for this lessons.

✓ Moreover, it's much more convenient to use keyboards for these lessons.

'Much convenient' is incorrect; comparative requires 'more convenient'. Also 'this lessons' is ungrammatical; 'these lessons' is correct for plural. Improve by using comparative form and correct demonstrative for plural noun. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I tried to use keyboard and other digital devices on a daily basis and remembering letter positions can help me to amplify my typing skills and make it much faster.

✓ I try to use a keyboard and other digital devices on a daily basis, and remembering letter positions can help me improve my typing speed and make it much faster.

Tense inconsistency: 'I tried' (past) conflicts with general habitual meaning; use present 'I try'. 'Use keyboard' needs article 'a keyboard'. 'Amplify my typing skills' is awkward; 'improve my typing speed' is clearer. Also 'help me to amplify' should be 'help me improve' (omit 'to'). Use gerund 'remembering' is fine. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I believe it is important for time efficiency and for my IELTS writing experience.

✓ I believe it is important for time efficiency and for my IELTS writing performance.

'IELTS writing experience' is odd; 'performance' fits the intended meaning about exam results. The sentence is otherwise in correct present tense; adjust noun choice for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:6