Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and direct in your topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, like), and add a brief specific reason or example. Use one linking phrase to connect idea and keep within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because I grew up using computers and smartphones. For example, I type notes and messages on my phone every day, which is faster and more convenient than writing by hand.

Sugestão: Answer directly first (desktop or laptop), then clarify with a brief example. Remove hesitation and correct grammar (it counts). Keep it to 1–2 sentences and use a linking word if adding detail.

Exemplo: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day. For instance, I play Counter-Strike 2 and use the laptop keyboard for gaming and chatting with friends.

Sugestão: Start with a clear time reference and avoid repeating fillers. Use one or two concise supporting details to explain context. Correct article and noun phrases (a computer, birthday). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was about six or seven years old. My parents gave me a computer for my birthday, and I practised typing while playing games and learning basic computer skills.

Sugestão: Give a clear, actionable method first and follow with one specific example. Avoid vague phrases (‘something else’) and keep sentences grammatical and concise. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also'.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practising on a computer every day. For example, I type messages to friends and use online typing exercises to build speed and accuracy.

× Well, I guess I'm more likely prone to typing rather than writing because, uh, since I was young I've been using like digital technology like cell phones or playing computer.

✓ Well, I guess I'm more prone to typing rather than handwriting because since I was young I've used digital technology like cell phones and computers.

This sentence mixes continuous and simple present forms awkwardly and uses incorrect collocations: 'more likely prone' is redundant; 'writing' better as 'handwriting' in this context; 'I've been using' can be simplified to 'I've used' to match 'since I was young' and present perfect; 'playing computer' is incorrect — use 'computers' or 'playing computer games'. Suggestion: remove redundancy, choose correct nouns, and use consistent tense (present perfect) for actions from past to present.

× I do play counter strike two every day, so I guess it that counts typing on a keyboard every day.

✓ I play Counter-Strike 2 every day, so I guess that counts as typing on a keyboard every day.

Problems: unnecessary auxiliary 'do' when simple present suffices; game title should be capitalized and use correct punctuation; 'it that counts' is ungrammatical — correct phrase is 'that counts as'; missing article 'as' after 'counts'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions, correct word order, and include 'as' in 'counts as'.

× I think it was when I was six or seven years old, uh, for my birthday, my parents, uh, gifted me a set of computer as an birthday gift.

✓ I think it was when I was six or seven years old; for my birthday my parents gifted me a computer set as a birthday present.

Errors: 'gifted me a set of computer' has noun number and article errors — should be 'a computer set' or 'a set of computers' depending on meaning; 'an birthday' incorrect article before consonant sound — should be 'a birthday'; 'present' is more natural than repeating 'gift'. Suggestion: fix noun phrase order, correct articles, and use consistent past tense 'gifted'.

× So since then I've been, uh, playing computer games, uh, actually, which involved.

✓ So since then I've been playing computer games, actually, which involved using the keyboard a lot.

Original ends with a dangling clause 'which involved' that lacks an object, making sentence incomplete. Also filler words interrupt clarity. Suggestion: complete the relative clause with what was involved ('using the keyboard a lot') and remove unnecessary fillers.

× I guess the best way to learn how to type fast is you use computer or a laptop every day.

✓ I guess the best way to learn to type quickly is to use a computer or a laptop every day.

Issues: 'learn how to type fast' is grammatical but 'learn to type quickly' is more natural; missing infinitive marker 'to' before 'use'; article missing before 'computer' — should be 'a computer'; 'fast' is an adverb so 'quickly' preferred. Suggestion: use infinitive 'to' for purpose, include articles, and use appropriate adverb.

× On a daily basis you try to type to your friends.

✓ On a daily basis you should try to type to your friends.

'Type to your friends' is odd — one 'types to' someone usually in messaging; adding modal 'should' makes suggestion clearer. Also could use 'type messages to your friends' for clarity. Suggestion: include object 'messages' or use 'message' and consider adding 'should' to express recommendation.

× Maybe search for something from Google browser like something else.

✓ Maybe search for something using a web browser like Google or similar services.

Problems: 'from Google browser' is unnatural; 'Google' is a search engine, not a 'browser' necessarily; 'like something else' is vague. Suggestion: use 'using a web browser' or 'on Google' and specify alternatives ('or similar services').