Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more coherent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations and repetition, and give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Use correct grammar for clarity (e.g. subject-verb agreement, pronouns).

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is hard to read. Moreover, I think and write quickly, so typing helps me express my ideas accurately and faster.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence, correct tense and word order, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain reasons and include a brief specific example of when you type on the laptop.

Exemplo: I usually type on a laptop rather than a desktop because it’s portable. For example, I often reply to work emails while commuting or at a café, which would be difficult with a desktop.

Sugestão: Provide a clear time reference and a concise sequence of events. Use past tense consistently and avoid unfinished sentences. Include a specific moment and how you improved over time.

Exemplo: I learned to type properly in college when I bought my first laptop to complete a major project. At first I typed slowly, but with regular practice I gradually became much faster.

Sugestão: Answer directly with present strategies you use to improve. Use clear linking words (e.g., since, after, so) and give specific activities or tools you use to practice. Keep sentences complete and grammatical.

Exemplo: I improved my typing by practising daily—typing assignments and emails in college and later at work. I also used online typing exercises and timed tests to increase my speed and accuracy.

× Actually, I prefer typing because my handwriting is horrible and it is, it is very difficult for me to read the other person.

✓ Actually, I prefer typing because my handwriting is horrible and it is very difficult for other people to read.

The phrase 'to read the other person' misuses the pronoun and preposition; it should refer to 'other people' as the readers. Use plural 'people' and eliminate the unnecessary infinitive 'to' before 'read.' Use simpler structure for clarity.

× And it's because I think fast.

✓ This is because I think quickly.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal; replace with 'This is because' for clarity. 'Think fast' should use the adverb 'quickly' to modify the verb 'think.'

× So I write fast.

✓ So I write quickly.

Use adverb 'quickly' instead of adjective 'fast' to modify the verb 'write' for more standard formal English.

× That's why it's uh, make really hard for to read and it's easy for me to type.

✓ That's why it is really hard for others to read, and it's easy for me to type.

The original has incorrect verb form 'make' and extraneous 'to'. Correct structure: 'it is hard for others to read.' Also replace 'uh' and add comma for clarity.

× It's because I can convey my message through typing very easily.

✓ I can convey my message very easily by typing.

Move 'very easily' closer to the verb 'convey' and prefer 'by typing' as a clearer prepositional phrase. Remove redundant 'It's because.'

× I'm always preferred to type on a laptop keyboard and as a working person I use always laptop more than desktop because it's easy for me to carry everywhere so I can type any emails anything anywhere like I can carry my laptop so it always.

✓ I have always preferred typing on a laptop keyboard, and as a working person I use my laptop more than a desktop because it is easy to carry everywhere so I can type emails anywhere.

Use present perfect 'have always preferred' for a past preference continuing to present. 'Preferred to type' becomes 'preferred typing' or 'preferred to type on.' Add possessive 'my laptop' and article 'a desktop.' Remove redundant phrases and correct word order: 'use always' -> 'have always preferred'/'use my laptop more.' End sentence properly.

× Actually when I was in my college I had to complete a project on my studies best so I bought 1 laptop for myself and that time I was horrible for in case typing and after that I use keyboard eventually and gradually I.

✓ Actually, when I was in college I had to complete an important project for my studies, so I bought a laptop for myself. At that time my typing was horrible, but after that I used the keyboard more and gradually improved.

Use 'in college' not 'in my college.' Clarify purpose 'important project for my studies.' Use 'a laptop' not '1 laptop.' 'I was horrible for in case typing' is ungrammatical; correct to 'my typing was horrible.' Use past tense 'used' and add 'improved' to complete the idea.

× I type quite a lot when I was in college so eventually I learned typing really fast and after I got job so it's also help me to learn or get more practice in typing so it's make me more.

✓ I typed a lot when I was in college, so eventually I learned to type quickly. After I got a job, it also helped me get more typing practice and improved my speed.

Maintain consistent past tense for past events: 'typed' and 'learned.' Use 'learned to type' not 'learned typing.' Add article 'a job.' Change 'it's also help me' to past 'it also helped me.' Replace 'so it's make me more' with 'improved my speed' to complete the meaning.