Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words.

Exemplo: I prefer both, but I tend to handwrite more. For example, I write a short diary at the end of each day because handwriting helps me organize my thoughts and feel more relaxed.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence naming which you use daily, then add a specific reason and one brief example. Remove hesitations and repeated words.

Exemplo: I usually type on a desktop rather than a laptop. For instance, I use my desktop for homework and study notes because it has a bigger screen and a comfortable keyboard.

Sugestão: Correct factual slips and unclear words (e.g., 'jailed' likely wrong). Give a clear time reference, one concise reason, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was a child, around age ten. I practiced a lot on my brother’s laptop by playing games and using social media, so regular use helped me improve.

Sugestão: Provide a clear method with specific actions and examples. State one or two practical strategies and link them logically. Reduce hesitations and repetitive phrases.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing every day. For example, I spend 10–15 minutes on typing practice websites and use touch-typing exercises, which has steadily increased my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer both of them, but I really tend to handwriting especially when when I write my daily or some thoughts during the the end of the day.

✓ I prefer both of them, but I really tend to handwrite, especially when I write my daily thoughts or some ideas at the end of the day.

The verb 'handwriting' is incorrectly used as a noun where the verb 'handwrite' is needed (verb form issue linked to preposition/usage). 'Write my daily or some thoughts' is awkward; use 'daily thoughts or some ideas'. 'During the end of the day' is incorrect preposition; use 'at the end of the day'. Remove duplicate words 'when when' and 'the the'. Suggestion: use the verb 'handwrite' and correct prepositions: 'handwrite... at the end of the day.'

× Actually, uh, most of the time I write on the desktop, especially when I, when I have some, some homework or some studies or some notes.

✓ Actually, most of the time I write on the desktop, especially when I have homework, study, or take notes.

Redundant fillers and repeated words should be removed. 'Some homework or some studies or some notes' uses 'some' unnecessarily and 'studies' as a noun is awkward here; use 'study' (verb) or 'study materials'. Also 'write on the desktop' is acceptable but simplifying to 'write on the desktop' remains. Suggestion: eliminate repetitions and choose consistent verb/noun forms: 'have homework, study, or take notes.'

× But most of the time I prefer handwriting, so I don't use so much the laptop, especially in.

✓ But most of the time I prefer handwriting, so I don't use the laptop much, especially for that purpose.

'Prefer handwriting' should be 'prefer handwriting' or 'prefer to handwrite' (verb/noun choice). 'Use so much the laptop' has incorrect word order; correct is 'use the laptop much' or better 'use the laptop much' -> 'use the laptop much' is awkward, so 'use the laptop much' changed to 'use the laptop much' replaced by 'use the laptop much, especially for that purpose.' The fragment 'especially in.' is incomplete and needs an object; clarify with 'for that purpose.' Suggestion: fix word order and complete the fragment.

× Actually, I I learned to type in the keyboard since I was jailed.

✓ Actually, I learned to type on the keyboard when I was a child.

'Since I was jailed' is likely a wrong word choice; context implies childhood. If 'since' with a past point requires present perfect ('have learned since'), but here simple past with 'when' is appropriate. Also preposition should be 'on the keyboard' not 'in the keyboard'. Suggestion: use 'on the keyboard' and a correct time expression: 'when I was a child.' If the speaker meant 'since I was X', use present perfect: 'I have been typing since I was a child.'

× I used to use my brother's laptop to play games and scrolling on social media and uh, the constant using of the keyboard I I learned to to type in.

✓ I used my brother's laptop to play games and scroll on social media, and by constantly using the keyboard I learned to type.

Mix of gerund and infinitive forms: 'scrolling' should be parallel to 'play' as 'scroll'. 'The constant using of the keyboard' is awkward; use 'constantly using the keyboard' or 'by constantly using the keyboard.' Preposition 'to type in' is wrong; use 'learned to type' (no preposition). Suggestion: make verbs parallel and use 'by' to indicate cause: 'by constantly using the keyboard I learned to type.'

× Actually I don't, I don't think too much too much to improve my typing, but I think the most significant uh, tips is to the constant using of the laptop or like you, you must type everyday constantly to improve your skill.

✓ Actually, I don't think too much about how to improve my typing, but I think the most significant tip is constant use of the laptop, or you must type every day to improve your skills.

'Think too much too much to improve' is ungrammatical; use 'think too much about how to improve.' 'The most significant uh, tips is' has subject-verb agreement and number errors: use 'the most significant tip is' (singular) or 'tips are' (plural). 'the constant using of the laptop' should be 'constant use of the laptop.' 'everyday' (adjective meaning common) is incorrect here; use 'every day' (adverbial phrase). 'constantly' redundant with 'every day'; choose one. 'skill' should be plural 'skills' or 'your typing skill.' Suggestion: correct prepositions, number agreement, and use 'every day'.