Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce hesitations and give a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific reasons. Use linking words (because, so) and precise vocabulary (efficient, save time). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more efficient and helps me save time. For example, I can type long messages or notes quickly and edit them easily, so I can finish tasks faster.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear preference and give specific reasons using linking words (because, so, therefore). Avoid repetition and filler words. Mention frequency if possible.

Exemplo: I usually type on my iPad or mobile phone because they are portable and convenient for messaging. Since I commute daily, I often reply to emails and texts on my phone rather than using a desktop.

Sugestão: State the time clearly (e.g., at age six or seven) and describe briefly how you learned, using linking words (so, and then). Use correct tense and clearer phrasing (learned on my mother's phone).

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was about six or seven years old. I practiced on my mother's phone by sending messages to my father and playing typing games, which helped me improve quickly.

Sugestão: Give a concrete method for improvement (practice, use typing apps, take lessons) and use clear linking words (for example, because). Avoid vague repetition and use present tense for ongoing habits.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing apps and setting daily goals for speed and accuracy. For example, I spend 15 minutes a day on a typing tutor which has increased my words-per-minute and reduced errors.

× Actually, uh, typing is more effective and easy, uh, I can save umm, many time, umm, by it, umm I only umm.

✓ Actually, typing is more effective and easier; I can save a lot of time by typing.

The original sentence has quantifier and adjective form errors. 'many time' is incorrect; the correct quantifier is 'a lot of time' or 'much time.' Also 'easy' should be comparative 'easier' to compare typing with handwriting. Use 'typing' as a noun and a clear clause structure: 'I can save a lot of time by typing.' Use punctuation to separate ideas. Suggestions: replace 'many time' with 'a lot of time' and 'easy' with 'easier', and simplify filler words.

× I sometimes use, uh, a desktop or laptop keyboard, but actually I prefer using iPad or just mobile phone.

✓ I sometimes use a desktop or laptop keyboard, but I actually prefer using an iPad or a mobile phone.

The original sentence omits articles before 'iPad' and 'mobile phone' and uses inconsistent noun forms. Add the indefinite article 'an' before 'iPad' (vowel sound) and 'a' before 'mobile phone' for correct noun phrase structure. Also remove unnecessary commas and fillers for clarity. Suggestions: include appropriate articles and maintain parallel structure: 'prefer using an iPad or a mobile phone.'

× Uh, it's easy to carry or just type, uh, messages for messages.

✓ They're easy to carry and convenient for typing messages.

The original repeats 'messages' and uses 'easy to carry or just type' awkwardly. 'It's' unclear whether referring to devices (plural). Change to 'They're' (devices) and use 'convenient for typing messages' for natural phrasing. This fixes adjective/adverb choice and redundancy. Suggestions: use 'convenient' instead of 'easy' when referring to usability and avoid repetition.

× If I'm not mistaken, when I am six or seven years old, I learned it by on my mom's phone.

✓ If I'm not mistaken, when I was six or seven years old, I learned on my mom's phone.

Tense inconsistency: the clause refers to a past time so 'am' should be 'was.' Also 'learned it by on my mom's phone' is ungrammatical; 'learned on my mom's phone' is sufficient. Remove unnecessary prepositions and pronoun 'it.' Suggestions: use past tense 'was' and simplify to 'learned on my mom's phone.'

× I like to send messages to my dad's phone and play it some.

✓ I liked sending messages to my dad's phone and sometimes played games on it.

The original mixes present and past and uses 'play it some' which is ungrammatical. Context suggests past habit when young, so use past tense 'liked' and 'played.' Clarify what 'play' refers to (e.g., games) and proper object pronoun placement 'on it' for the phone. Suggestions: match tense to 'when I was six or seven' and specify the activity: 'played games on it sometimes.'

× As I have grown older, I had to type more quickly and by this I can easily learn how to type more easily and save my time, especially type even.

✓ As I have grown older, I have had to type more quickly, and this has helped me learn to type faster and save time.

Tense and redundancy errors: mixing 'have grown' with 'had to' is inconsistent; use present perfect 'have had to.' 'By this I can easily learn how to type more easily' is repetitive ('easily' twice) and awkward; use 'this has helped me learn to type faster.' 'Save my time' is unnatural; use 'save time.' Remove 'especially type even' which is ungrammatical. Suggestions: maintain consistent perfect aspect, avoid redundant adverbs, and use natural collocations like 'learn to type faster' and 'save time.'