Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and a brief example. Avoid redundancy and fix article and verb mistakes (e.g. “because I'm proficient” not “because it I'm”).

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because I can type much faster on my laptop. For example, when I take notes in lectures I finish faster and can review them easily on my phone.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence and one clear reason with improved grammar. Avoid repeating ideas and correct collocations (e.g. “every day” separated, “I prefer laptops” or “I use a laptop”).

Exemplo: I usually type on a laptop every day because I don't own a desktop computer. As a result, I'm more familiar with the laptop keyboard layout and shortcuts.

Sugestão: Provide a clear timeline and a concise reason. Correct tense and word choice (e.g. “when I was admitted to university” and “my father bought me a laptop”). Remove fillers and explain briefly how you practised with specific detail (e.g. timed exercises).

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was admitted to university because my father bought me a laptop then. I practised daily with timed typing tests to improve my speed.

Sugestão: Be specific about methods and use correct grammar. Start with a topic sentence, then list 2–3 concrete strategies using linking words (e.g. “for example,” “also”). Avoid vague phrases like “a lot” and incorrect noun forms (“advice” not “advises”).

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practising daily with online typing exercises. For example, I spend 20 minutes on timed tests and also watch tutorial videos from professional typists to learn better finger placement and shortcuts.

× I prefer typing rather than handwriting because it I'm proficient at writing whenever I use my laptop's keyboard, and it also saves a lot of time for me to write.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because I'm proficient at it whenever I use my laptop's keyboard, and it also saves me a lot of time.

Errors: redundant 'it' and wrong comparative structure 'prefer ... rather than' (acceptable but 'prefer ... to' is more natural). 'because it I'm' is ungrammatical; subject contraction 'I'm' should directly follow 'because'. Also 'saves a lot of time for me to write' is awkward; use 'saves me a lot of time'. Suggestion: remove the extra 'it', use 'prefer ... to', place 'I'm' correctly, and use 'saves me a lot of time'.

× I usually type on a laptop keyboard everyday because I don't have any desktop so I always prefer laptop and I learn to get done skills for my laptop keyboard.

✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because I don't have a desktop, so I always prefer using a laptop and I learned the skills needed to use the laptop keyboard.

Errors: 'everyday' (adjective) vs 'every day' (adverbial phrase) — should be 'every day'. 'any desktop' is unnecessary; use 'a desktop'. Run-on sentence lacking conjunction punctuation: add a comma before 'so'. 'I always prefer laptop' needs 'using a' or 'a laptop'. 'I learn to get done skills' is ungrammatical; intended past learning -> 'I learned the skills needed'. Suggestion: correct 'every day', add articles, split clauses, and use proper verb form for learning.

× I learned to type on a keyboard at a young age because, uh, whenever I admitted into a university, my father got me an laptop. So then that I started practice every day on a time limit and have to work.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard at a young age because when I was admitted to university my father bought me a laptop. After that I started practicing every day with timed exercises and working to improve.

Errors: 'whenever I admitted into a university' lacks subject and correct tense; use passive 'was admitted' and 'to university' (no article). 'got me an laptop' article error: 'a laptop' and verb choice: 'bought' (past). 'So then that I started practice' is ungrammatical; use 'After that I started practicing'. 'on a time limit and have to work' unclear — clarified as 'with timed exercises and working to improve'. Suggestion: use correct past passive for admission, correct articles, past tense verbs, and gerund 'practicing'.

× Basically I do a lots of practice every day on typing and also I do watch a lot of YouTube channel so that I want to professionals advises. I want to have professional advisors to write faster and efficiently.

✓ Basically I do a lot of typing practice every day, and I watch many YouTube channels because I want professional advice. I want to have professional guidance so I can write faster and more efficiently.

Errors: 'a lots of' incorrect quantifier; use 'a lot of' or 'lots of' and 'practice' is uncountable so 'a lot of practice' or 'a lot of typing practice'. 'I do watch' is awkward; simple 'I watch' is natural. 'a lot of YouTube channel' needs plural 'channels' and correct quantifier 'many'. 'so that I want to professionals advises' is ungrammatical: use 'because I want professional advice' (advice uncountable) or 'professional advisers' if plural noun. 'professional advisors to write faster and efficiently' needs 'so I can write faster and more efficiently'. Suggestion: correct quantifiers, plurals, verb forms, and use 'advice' or 'advisers' appropriately; use comparative adverb 'more efficiently'.