Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be careful with grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles, and verb forms) and choose clearer vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, "because" or "however"). Keep sentences concise (max 4–5). Replace vague phrases like "it makes me entertain" with a precise reason (e.g., "it helps me remember").

Exemplo: I prefer typing or handwriting depending on my mood. For example, I usually type when I am in a hurry or feeling lazy because typing is faster and more convenient. However, I like handwriting when I write letters or take lecture notes because writing by hand helps me remember information better.

Sugestão: Good direct answer and reason. Improve fluency by using more natural phrasing and correct collocations (e.g., "ongoing thesis" is fine, but say "working on my thesis" and "rephrasing and rewriting sections"). Avoid wordiness and correct minor grammar ("requires a lot of time" not "so much time on").

Exemplo: Yes, I type on my laptop every day because I am working on my thesis. It often requires a lot of time for rephrasing and rewriting sections, so I spend hours typing and editing drafts.

Sugestão: Organize answer with a clear time reference and simplify grammar. Use past tense consistently and avoid awkward phrases. Provide one or two specific details (age or school level, frequency) and linking words ("because"/"so").

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was at primary school. We had a computer class with a lab every weekday, so I practised typing regularly and gradually became faster.

Sugestão: Good main idea but fix grammar ("Practice is key", "my typing gets faster"). Be more specific about methods: timed practice, online exercises, touch-typing lessons, or accuracy drills. Use linking words ("for example", "as a result"). Keep it concise.

Exemplo: Practice is key. For example, I type every day and use online typing tests to track my speed and accuracy, and as a result my typing has become much faster and less error-prone.

× My preferences is depends on my mood.

✓ My preference depends on my mood.

The subject 'preferences' (plural) and the verb 'is' disagree; also 'depends' requires a singular subject. The intended meaning uses singular 'preference'. Use 'My preference depends on my mood' to match singular subject with singular verb.'

× I prefer typing whenever I get to rush as well as lazy, while I prefer handwriting whenever I write letters as well as noting our lectures because it makes me entertain.

✓ I prefer typing when I am in a rush or feeling lazy, while I prefer handwriting when I write letters or take notes during lectures because it entertains me.

Several errors: 'get to rush' is incorrect—use 'am in a rush'; 'lazy' needs 'feeling lazy'; 'noting our lectures' should be 'take notes during lectures' (plural/singular and collocation); 'it makes me entertain' is incorrect phrasing—use 'it entertains me'. Corrections improve collocation, verb forms and plurality.'

× Yes, I type on my laptop keyboard every day because I have my ongoing thesis and it requires so much time on focusing on how to rephrase and rewrite our study.

✓ Yes, I type on my laptop keyboard every day because I am working on my thesis and it requires a lot of time to focus on how to rephrase and rewrite our study.

'Ongoing thesis' is awkward; use 'am working on my thesis' (present continuous). 'Requires so much time on focusing' is ungrammatical—use 'requires a lot of time to focus'. This corrects verb form and preposition use.'

× On my earlier years we have our computer subject which gives me enough learning how to use and type with a keyboard because we have a laboratory every weekdays to know how to use a computer as well as to type faster.

✓ In my earlier years we had a computer class that taught me how to use and type on a keyboard because we had a lab every weekday to learn how to use a computer and to type faster.

Tense and article issues: 'On my earlier years' should be 'In my earlier years'; use past tense 'we had' and 'taught' because talking about the past. 'Computer subject' is better as 'computer class'; 'every weekdays' incorrect—use 'every weekday' or 'on weekdays'. 'Learn' fits better than 'know' here.'

× Practice is the key. I improve my typing because I use my keyboard every day and as the day passes by I notice that my typings gets faster unlike before that it is so slow.

✓ Practice is the key. I improved my typing because I use my keyboard every day, and as the days pass I notice that my typing gets faster, unlike before when it was very slow.

Mixed tenses and noun form: use consistent tense—'improved' or 'have improved'; here past simple 'improved' fits with observation. 'Typings' is wrong—use uncountable 'typing'. 'As the day passes by' should be 'as the days pass' for general change over time. 'Unlike before that it is so slow' is ungrammatical—use 'unlike before when it was very slow'. Corrections fix tense, noun number, and adverb placement.'