Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise, correct minor errors and avoid irrelevant fragments. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Remove unclear phrase “which says JOIN.”

Exemplo: I prefer typing because I use electronic devices for work and study, so it is faster and more convenient. For example, when taking lecture notes I can quickly edit and reorganize text, which helps me review more efficiently.

Sugestão: Correct grammar (articles, word order) and avoid repetition. Give one clear reason with a linking word and a short example of when you use it away from home.

Exemplo: I usually type on a laptop because I own one and it is portable. For instance, I often take my laptop to the café to work on assignments, so mobility is important.

Sugestão: Provide a clear, grammatically correct time reference and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use a linking phrase to explain who taught you and give one brief detail about what you learned.

Exemplo: I don't remember exactly, but I think I learned to type in sixth or seventh grade. My computer teacher showed us the proper finger placement and basic typing exercises, which helped me improve quickly.

Sugestão: Answer directly with specific methods and use linking words to organise the response. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Mention concrete practice strategies and frequency or results.

Exemplo: I improved my typing through regular practice and exercises. For example, I completed daily typing drills and used online typing tests twice a week, which gradually increased my speed and accuracy.

× I type mostly on laptop because I have one, but I don't own an desktop and it is convenient for me to take laptop at any place to do some study or work on the laptop.

✓ I mostly type on a laptop because I have one, but I don't own a desktop and it is convenient for me to take my laptop anywhere to study or work.

Pronoun and determiner errors: 'on laptop' needs the article 'a' and should be 'on a laptop'; 'an desktop' is wrong because 'desktop' begins with a consonant sound and needs 'a desktop'; 'take laptop' requires a possessive determiner 'my laptop'; 'at any place' is unnatural; use 'anywhere'. Also word order improved to 'I mostly type on a laptop' to sound natural.

× I type mostly on laptop because I have one, but I don't own an desktop and it is convenient for me to take laptop at any place to do some study or work on the laptop.

✓ I mostly type on a laptop because I have one, but I don't own a desktop and it is convenient for me to take my laptop anywhere to study or work.

Article errors: 'on laptop' needs 'a laptop'; 'an desktop' should be 'a desktop'; 'the laptop' at the end is unnecessary when 'my laptop' is used earlier. Correct articles and consistent reference improve clarity.

× To be honest I don't remember but I think I had learned in like 6th or 7th standard.

✓ To be honest, I don't remember, but I think I learned in about sixth or seventh grade.

Tense and phrasing: 'had learned' suggests past perfect and is unnecessary here; simple past 'learned' fits. 'Like 6th or 7th standard' is informal and nonstandard in this context; 'about sixth or seventh grade' is more natural. Also added commas for clarity.

× My computer teacher was had teach to me how to type the how to type on the keyboard in the computer lectures.

✓ My computer teacher taught me how to type on the keyboard during computer lessons.

Pronoun and verb form issues: 'was had teach to me' is ungrammatical; use simple past 'taught me'. Remove the duplicated phrase 'the how to type'. 'In the computer lectures' is better as 'during computer lessons' for natural English.

× I think 3.

✓ I think it was around third grade.

Fragment and vague expression: 'I think 3' is a fragment and unclear. Providing a full clause 'I think it was around third grade' clarifies meaning and fits expected sentence structure.

× As I said before, my computer teacher was. My computer teacher taught me how to type and he.

✓ As I said before, my computer teacher taught me how to type and encouraged me to keep practicing.

Incomplete sentences: 'my computer teacher was' and 'and he' are sentence fragments lacking verbs or objects. Combine ideas into a complete sentence and supply the missing information: 'encouraged me to keep practicing' explains the intended meaning and completes the thought.

× He motivated me for typing and I slowly, slowly I learnt how to type.

✓ He motivated me to type, and slowly I learned how to type.

Incorrect preposition and tense: use 'motivated me to type' (not 'for typing'). 'Learnt' is acceptable (British) but 'learned' is common; ensure consistency. Remove the extra comma and duplicate 'I' for correct sentence flow.