Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I like typing because typing is more not tireless than handwriting. When I handwriting I'm so hurt my knee are list my list and also I can fix it easily the typing 1.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yes, because my school's education system introduce a student should have a laptop and they so I have we have to type some uh, homework or something doc.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
When I was a child, my mother led me to go to the PC commercial crime school and I go, I went there and I, I learned how to type on a keyboard and I cannot, I still cannot do it though.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
My teacher teach me how to typing and also I like gay. I like playing a game some game and I found some interesting games such as how I can learn about typing so I do it.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 38.0Sugestão: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., "I prefer typing.") then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid irrelevant or incorrect body-part references and correct vocabulary (e.g., "tiring" not "tireless"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.
Exemplo: I prefer typing because it is faster and less tiring than handwriting. Also, typing makes it easy to edit mistakes quickly, which saves time.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: Answer directly (Yes/No) and follow with a clear reason. Use simple correct sentence structures and more precise vocabulary. Connect ideas with a linking word (e.g., "because"). Limit to 2–3 sentences.
Exemplo: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because my school requires students to have laptops. I often type homework and class assignments on it.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: Provide a clear time reference and concise explanation. Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition. If you still struggle, state that briefly and give a reason or example. Limit to 2–3 sentences.
Exemplo: I learned to type when I was a child at a computer class arranged by my mother. I can type basic texts, but I am not very fast yet.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 35.0Sugestão: Explain specific methods clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Say what helps you improve (lessons, practice, typing games) and give an example of a game or practice routine. Keep answers natural and grammatically correct, 2–3 sentences.
Exemplo: My teacher gives me typing lessons and I also practice with typing games to improve speed and accuracy. For example, I play a typing game for 15 minutes a day to learn key positions and increase my speed.
× I like typing because typing is more not tireless than handwriting.
✓ I like typing because typing is less tiring than handwriting.
Original uses 'more not tireless' which is ungrammatical. Use comparative adjective 'less tiring' to convey that typing causes less fatigue. 'Tiring' is the correct adjective form from verb 'tire.' Suggestion: use 'less' + adjective to compare lower degree (less tiring).
× When I handwriting I'm so hurt my knee are list my list and also I can fix it easily the typing 1.
✓ When I write by hand my wrist and knee hurt, and I can fix things more easily when typing.
Original mixes forms and incorrect pronouns/word choices ('handwriting' used as verb, 'are list my list' unclear). Use 'write by hand' for the action, subject-verb agreement for 'wrist and knee hurt.' Replaced confusing fragment with clear comparison 'I can fix things more easily when typing.' Suggest writing simple clauses and checking pronoun and noun usage.
× Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
✓ Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Sentence is grammatically correct. No correction needed. It correctly uses the base verb 'type' in a question with 'do.' Kept unchanged.
× Yes, because my school's education system introduce a student should have a laptop and they so I have we have to type some uh, homework or something doc.
✓ Yes, because my school's education system introduces that students should have a laptop, so we have to type homework or documents.
Original has subject-verb agreement errors ('introduce' should be 'introduces' for singular 'system') and plural/singular mismatches ('a student' vs 'students'), and awkward wording. Use 'introduces that students should' or better 'requires students to have.' Also replace 'doc' with 'documents' for clarity.
× When I was a child, my mother led me to go to the PC commercial crime school and I go, I went there and I, I learned how to type on a keyboard and I cannot, I still cannot do it though.
✓ When I was a child, my mother took me to a computer class, and I went there and learned how to type on a keyboard, but I still cannot do it well.
Original uses awkward 'led me to go' and inconsistent tenses ('go, I went'). Use past tense 'took' and 'went' consistently. 'PC commercial crime school' appears incorrect; replaced with 'computer class' for clarity. Add 'well' to complete 'cannot do it well.' Ensure past tense throughout for past events.
× My teacher teach me how to typing and also I like gay.
✓ My teacher taught me how to type, and I also like games.
Original has incorrect verb tense 'teach' (should be past 'taught' if referring to past instruction) and wrong verb form 'how to typing' (use infinitive 'how to type'). 'I like gay' is likely a mistake; replaced with 'I also like games' to make sense in context. Use correct verb forms and appropriate nouns.
× I like playing a game some game and I found some interesting games such as how I can learn about typing so I do it.
✓ I like playing games, and I found some interesting typing games that help me learn, so I play them.
Original is run-on and ungrammatical. Reorganized into clear clauses: subject + verb + object. Use 'typing games that help me learn' to show purpose, and 'so I play them' to indicate result. Keep verb tenses consistent and use plural 'games' if talking generally.