Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Reduce hesitations and filler words (e.g. “I I”, “wanna”).

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because I enjoy writing in cursive and it feels more personal. For example, when I take notes or write letters, neat handwriting helps me remember information better. However, if I need speed or convenience, I choose typing instead.

Sugestão: Provide a direct short answer, then add one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid repeating the same idea and correct minor grammar (everyday → every day).

Exemplo: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I don't own a desktop. In addition, I like the built-in Dell keyboard since it is comfortable and portable for my daily work.

Sugestão: Give a clear time reference and one or two specific details. Use linking words (for example, “when”, “because”) and avoid vague phrases like “I think”.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was in fifth grade at school. At that time, we had computer classes where the teacher taught typing practice and basic programs, which helped me become comfortable with the keyboard.

Sugestão: Answer directly and add a specific method or example of practice. Use formal vocabulary (avoid “wanna”) and explain briefly how practice helps with measurable improvement.

Exemplo: The best way to improve typing is regular practice, for instance by using online typing exercises for 20 minutes a day. As a result, your speed and accuracy improve because frequent repetition builds muscle memory.

× I do prefer handwriting.

✓ I prefer handwriting.

The sentence uses 'do prefer' which is grammatically acceptable for emphasis but sounds unnatural in this context. Use the simple present 'I prefer handwriting' to match the question and maintain natural speech. (Note: This falls under subject-verb emphasis rather than a listed ID; map to closest listed ID 6: Present tense issue.)

× When I'm feeling lazy and I don't wanna write properly, then I will prefer typing over handwriting.

✓ When I'm feeling lazy and I don't want to write properly, I prefer typing to handwriting.

Use the standard 'want to' instead of informal 'wanna'. Also prefer consistent present-tense general preference: 'I prefer typing to handwriting' is more natural than 'I will prefer'. Use 'prefer X to Y' not 'prefer X over Y' for this structure. (ID 6: Present tense issue and ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions for 'prefer to' choice.)

× But in other cases I do like handwriting.

✓ But in other cases I like handwriting.

'Do like' is used for emphasis; in neutral response use simple present 'I like handwriting.' This keeps tense and style consistent. (ID 6: Present tense issue.)

× I do like to write in a good handwriting.

✓ I like to write in good handwriting.

'Handwriting' is uncountable here, so do not use the indefinite article 'a'. Also simplify 'do like' to 'like.' (ID 22: Article errors.)

× I I, I write in cursive write handwriting, so it makes me feel good when I have I can write.

✓ I write in cursive handwriting, so it makes me feel good when I can write well.

Remove repeated words and fix word order. 'Cursive handwriting' is the correct collocation. 'When I can write well' expresses the intended meaning; 'have I can write' is ungrammatical. Also add 'well' to describe manner. (ID 26: Sentence structure errors and ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs for 'well'.)

× I don't have a desktop keyboard, so I use a laptop keyboard everyday.

✓ I don't have a desktop keyboard, so I use a laptop keyboard every day.

Write 'every day' as two words when meaning 'each day'. 'Everyday' (one word) is an adjective meaning ordinary. Keep present tense 'use'. (ID 6: Present tense issue and ID 11: Incorrect use of adverb form/word choice.)

× I have a laptop, it's a Dell laptop and I didn't buy a separate keyboard for that, but because I quite enjoy the built in keyboard which the laptop comes in.

✓ I have a Dell laptop and I didn't buy a separate keyboard because I quite enjoy the built-in keyboard that comes with it.

Combine clauses more naturally: remove the comma splice, use 'because' to connect reason, use hyphen 'built-in', and replace 'which the laptop comes in' with 'that comes with it.' Also avoid repeating 'laptop.' (ID 26: Sentence structure errors and ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions for 'comes with'.)

× I think I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was a kid.

✓ I think I learned to type on a keyboard when I was a kid.

Use 'learned to type' or 'learned how to type' — both are acceptable. 'Learned to type' is slightly more concise and common. Tense 'learned' is correct for past. (ID 5: Past tense issue — minor form.)

× I remember when I was in fifth standard, there was computer classes in my school and there the teacher used to teach us how to type and how to write, as well as how to make different things in a computer.

✓ I remember when I was in fifth grade there were computer classes at my school and the teacher used to teach us how to type and write, as well as how to create different things on a computer.

Use 'fifth grade' (or 'standard' regionally — 'grade' is more common), change 'there was computer classes' to 'there were computer classes' for subject-verb agreement, use 'at my school' instead of 'in my school', simplify 'how to type and how to write' to 'how to type and write', and use 'create different things on a computer' instead of 'make different things in a computer.' (ID 1: Singular and plural issue for 'classes' with 'was' and ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions.)

× I think the best way to improve your typing is to type more.

✓ I think the best way to improve your typing is to type more.

This sentence is correct. No change needed. (ID 6: Present tense issue — but sentence is correct, so kept as is.)

× The more you practice, the better you wanna be at that.

✓ The more you practice, the better you will become at it.

Replace informal 'wanna' with 'will' + verb or 'become'. Use 'become at it' is improved to 'become at it' though better is 'get' or 'become better at it.' I used 'will become at it' and changed 'that' to 'it' to refer to typing. Prefer 'the better you will become at it.' (ID 4: Modal verb usage / colloquialism and ID 12: Incorrect use of pronouns.)

× This theory applies everywhere.

✓ This idea applies everywhere.

'Theory' is acceptable but 'idea' is more natural in spoken English here; sentence is grammatically correct. No tense error. (ID 26: Sentence structure errors — minor stylistic suggestion.)