Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and finish ideas clearly. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unfinished clauses like “It's also a good way to talk with.” and minor grammar issues (use plural/singular consistently).

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For instance, I type university notes and emails, which I can easily edit and share with classmates. Additionally, instant messaging lets me communicate quickly during group projects.

Sugestão: Give a clear, natural answer and avoid repeating similar adjectives. Use one or two precise reasons and correct grammar (article use, verbs, adjective order). Remove vague words like “green sometimes” unless explained. Use linking words to connect reasons.

Exemplo: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and has good battery life. Furthermore, the laptop’s built-in keyboard is comfortable for long study sessions, so I rarely need a desktop.

Sugestão: Give a concise timeline and correct sentence structure. Use past tense consistently and remove unclear phrases like “type owners keyboard.” Add one specific detail about the learning method and outcome, linked with words like “because” or “so.”

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was about eight years old. My mother taught me at home, and I practised for around three years with typing games, so I became both faster and more accurate.

Sugestão: Be specific about the methods and results. Use one or two linking words to structure the answer (e.g., “for example,” “as a result”). Avoid repetition of synonyms (improve/enhance) and keep to the 1–3 supporting details limit.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practising daily with timed drills and typing games. For example, I do 10-minute accuracy drills each morning, which has increased my speed from 40 to 65 words per minute and reduced errors.

× It's also a good way to talk with.

✓ It's also a good way to communicate with others.

The original sentence ends with a preposition 'with' and lacks an object. 'Talk with' requires an object (who you talk with). Use 'communicate with others' to be complete and more natural. Also 'communicate' fits written register better than 'talk' here.

× Well, I usually type on laptop keyboard every day.

✓ Well, I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day.

The sentence omits the article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'. A singular countable noun requires an article. Add 'a' to satisfy article usage and subject-verb agreement context.

× It's quite amusing, entertaining to use a laptop keyboard every day, because everything become more and more convenient and green sometimes and it's also has a good battery life.

✓ It's quite amusing and entertaining to use a laptop keyboard every day, because everything becomes more and more convenient and, sometimes, greener, and it also has good battery life.

Multiple issues corrected: 1) Use 'and' to join adjectives rather than a comma splice. 2) 'Become' should be 'becomes' for third-person singular (subject 'everything'). This is a third-person singular issue (ID 2) but also subject-verb agreement; corrected here. 3) 'Green' used adjectivally needs comparative context or 'greener' if comparing; 'sometimes' is placed before adjective for clarity. 4) Remove extra 'a' in 'has a good battery life' -> 'has good battery life' or 'has a good battery life' both acceptable; I chose 'has good battery life' for naturalness. 5) Remove 'it's' before 'also has' to avoid extra pronoun; combine into one clause.

× I learned to type on the keyboard when I was quite young, it's quite a lengthy time, my mother told me in person at home and I practice regularly for about 3 years using typing games and exercise which helps me become faster and more accurate to type owners keyboard.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was quite young; it has been a long time. My mother taught me at home, and I practiced regularly for about three years using typing games and exercises, which helped me become faster and more accurate at typing on my own keyboard.

Multiple tense and word-choice errors: 1) 'it's quite a lengthy time' is ungrammatical when referring to past duration; use 'it has been a long time' or rephrase. 2) 'told me in person at home' -> 'taught me at home' is more natural for learning a skill. 3) 'I practice regularly for about 3 years' mixes present with a past learning period; use past 'practiced' to match 'learned'. 4) 'exercise' should be plural 'exercises' and 'which helps' -> 'which helped' to keep past. 5) 'to type owners keyboard' is unclear and ungrammatical; corrected to 'at typing on my own keyboard'. This addresses past tense consistency and clarity.

× Well, as I just mentioned earlier, I always improve and enhance my typing skills by exercise and typing games because they are really amusing and entertaining to use.

✓ Well, as I mentioned earlier, I always improve and enhance my typing skills by doing exercises and playing typing games because they are really amusing and entertaining.

Use gerunds after 'by' to indicate the method: 'by doing exercises and playing typing games'. 'Exercise' as a noun should be plural and combined with an appropriate verb. Also 'as I just mentioned earlier' is redundant; 'as I mentioned earlier' is concise.

× It can also help me get off from daily routine stress for a while.

✓ It can also help me get away from daily routine stress for a while.

'Get off from' is not idiomatic; use 'get away from' or 'relieve' for stress. Also place 'for a while' at the end is acceptable; the main issue was the incorrect prepositional verb.