Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatical, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect word forms (e.g., “more faster,” “efficiency”).

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more efficient. For example, when I have a lot of notes or a long report, I can organize my ideas with headings and edit mistakes quickly, which saves time and makes my work neater.

Sugestão: Clarify the main point and use correct vocabulary. Give a single clear answer (desktop or laptop) and follow with one or two coherent reasons. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and avoid unclear phrases like “replying smell.”

Exemplo: I usually type on a laptop every day because it is portable and I can work anywhere. For example, I use it to join online classes and finish homework, and its compact keyboard is comfortable for long typing sessions.

Sugestão: Make the timeline clear and improve sentence grammar. Begin with a direct topic sentence stating when, then give a brief explanation of the learning process with linking words (e.g., at first, later, eventually). Correct verb forms and word order.

Exemplo: I learned to type in secondary school. At first I typed slowly because I kept looking at the keys, but after years of using a computer for study and work, I gradually became much faster and more accurate.

Sugestão: Provide a clearer strategy and concrete examples of practice. Start with a topic sentence and then explain specific activities you do (e.g., timed drills, touch-typing websites, regular typing of emails). Fix grammar and use linking words to show cause and effect.

Exemplo: I improve my typing through daily practice and specific exercises. For instance, I do 10–15 minutes of timed typing drills on a practice website every morning and type emails and reports at work, which has steadily increased my speed and accuracy.

× So typing is much more faster and efficiency, so it can deal with heavy workload and allowed to organize my idea more clearly and edit my work effortlessly.

✓ Typing is much faster and more efficient, so it can handle a heavy workload and allows me to organize my ideas more clearly and edit my work effortlessly.

Errors: 'much more faster' is incorrect comparative form (double comparative). Use 'much faster' or 'faster' and 'more efficient' (not 'efficiency'). 'deal with heavy workload' needs article and correct verb: 'handle a heavy workload'. 'allowed to organize my idea' uses wrong verb form and lacks subject agreement; change to 'allows me to organize my ideas'. Use plural 'ideas'. Suggestions: use correct comparative structures (adjective or 'more' + adjective), correct noun/verb forms, include articles and pronouns for clarity.

× So for laptop keyboard I use it for sturdy online and do homework and replying smell from workplace and for the keyboard so when I spend hours in the front of the screen when I feel and I use keyboard for feel comfortable.

✓ I use a laptop keyboard for studying online, doing homework, and replying to messages from work. When I spend hours in front of the screen, I use the keyboard because it feels more comfortable.

Errors: 'for laptop keyboard' needs article: 'a laptop keyboard'. 'sturdy online' is wrong word choice; likely 'study online'. 'do homework and replying smell from workplace' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'doing homework, and replying to messages from work'. 'in the front of the screen' should be 'in front of the screen'. 'I use keyboard for feel comfortable' should be 'I use the keyboard because it feels more comfortable' (correct preposition and clause structure). Suggestions: use correct prepositions ('in front of'), articles, gerunds after 'for' when listing activities, and choose appropriate verbs/nouns.

× So I learned how to tap on the keyboard in my secondary school.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard in secondary school.

Errors: 'tap on the keyboard' is an unusual verb choice; 'type' is correct. 'in my secondary school' is acceptable but 'in secondary school' is more natural. Tense 'learned' is correct past tense. Suggestion: use appropriate verbs ('type') and natural noun phrases ('secondary school').

× So at first I type it quite slowly because I keep looking at the screens and the keys.

✓ At first I typed quite slowly because I kept looking at the screen and the keys.

Errors: Tense inconsistency: referring to a past learning process requires past tense 'typed' and 'kept looking'. 'the screens' should be singular 'the screen' when referring to one computer. Remove the pronoun 'it' after 'type'. Suggestions: keep past narrative in past tense and use correct noun number.

× So after using computer for work and studying I gradually much more fluent and accurate.

✓ After using computers for work and study, I gradually became much more fluent and accurate.

Errors: Missing auxiliary verb 'became' to link state change. 'using computer' should be 'using computers' or 'using a computer'. 'studying' parallelism: use noun 'study' or 'studying' but adjust structure. 'gradually much more fluent' requires 'became' and adverb placement: 'gradually became much more fluent and accurate'. Suggestions: include appropriate linking verbs for state changes and keep parallel structure.

× So I improve it through my daily practice.

✓ I improve it through daily practice.

Errors: 'So' is unnecessary. 'my daily practice' is acceptable but 'through daily practice' is more natural. Present tense 'improve' is fine if speaking about ongoing habit. Suggestion: remove filler words and prefer concise phrasing.

× So seeing I have to write emails report regularly so I have a natural become faster overtime.

✓ Because I have to write email reports regularly, I naturally become faster over time.

Errors: 'emails report' should be 'email reports' (noun compound/plural). 'So seeing' is incorrect connector; use 'Because' or 'Since'. 'I have a natural become' is ungrammatical; use 'I naturally become' or 'I have naturally become'. 'overtime' should be two words 'over time' meaning gradually. Suggestions: use correct connectors, pluralize nouns correctly, and choose appropriate adverb placement ('naturally').