Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và độ trôi chảy: sửa các lỗi về thì, mạo từ, và từ vựng (ví dụ: “I keen on” → “I prefer” hoặc “I’m keen on”; “specially” → “especially”; “take a very quick” không rõ nghĩa). Rút gọn câu để tránh lặp ý và dùng liên từ để nối mạch ý. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể ngắn gọn hơn (ví dụ loại tài liệu bạn chỉnh sửa).

Exemplo: I prefer typing, especially on a laptop, because it's faster and more convenient. For example, I can quickly edit an essay, copy and paste text, and easily share documents between apps, which saves me a lot of time.

Sugestão: Giảm tiếng lấp và lặp từ (uh, um, fast). Sử dụng cấu trúc rõ ràng: chủ đề → lý do → ví dụ. Sửa một số từ không chính xác (“thereby using keyboard on phone” nên là “I use my phone’s keyboard”). Nên giới hạn 2–4 câu, dùng liên từ như “so” hoặc “when” để mạch lôgic.

Exemplo: Not every day. I usually use a laptop keyboard at home and at school because I do most of my work there. When I travel, I use my phone's keyboard because it is lightweight and convenient.

Sugestão: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt để rõ ràng (ví dụ thì, danh từ số ít/ số nhiều, mệnh đề nguyên nhân). Loại bỏ từ không phù hợp (“fatigued”) nếu không cần thiết. Nên nêu thời điểm cụ thể, lý do rõ ràng, và nguồn học. Ví dụ: “I learned when I was in high school because…”

Exemplo: I learned to type in high school because there was an entrance requirement for a computing certificate. To improve, I watched tutorials and practice videos on TikTok and YouTube.

Sugestão: Cải thiện trật tự từ và dùng giới từ chính xác (“in my spare time”, “through social media”). Tránh lặp từ và cách diễn đạt cứng (“thereby improving”). Nêu rõ phương pháp cụ thể, tần suất và kết quả mong muốn. Giữ 2–4 câu.

Exemplo: In my spare time, I learn typing through short tutorials and exercises on TikTok and Facebook. I also take online typing tests regularly to track my speed and focus on daily practice to improve.

× To begin with, I keen on typing on laptop and desktop because it's specially faster and convenient for me.

✓ To begin with, I am keen on typing on a laptop and a desktop because it is especially faster and more convenient for me.

Original sentence omits the verb 'am' needed after 'I' with 'keen on' and misses articles before 'laptop' and 'desktop'. 'specially' is incorrect; use 'especially'. Also use comparative structure 'more convenient' and avoid contraction 'it's' in formal speech; here 'it is' is fine. Suggest practicing use of 'be' verbs with adjectives, correct article usage, and comparative forms.

× For example, I can easily edit and copy and paste, take a very quick.

✓ For example, I can easily edit, copy and paste, and take notes very quickly.

Original has awkward structure and missing object for 'take' and incorrect adverb form 'quick' instead of 'quickly'. Use parallel verbs without repeated 'and' and include an object. Practice making parallel lists and using adverb forms (add -ly).

× Beside, I can share my word between apps.

✓ Besides, I can share my work between apps.

Use 'Besides' not 'Beside' and 'work' instead of 'word'. 'between apps' is acceptable. Suggest checking similar words and common adverb forms.

× It saved me a lot of time.

✓ It saves me a lot of time.

Context is a general statement about a habitual benefit; use present simple 'saves' not past 'saved'. Use present tense for general truths or habitual effects.

× Umm, well, not really. I often use a laptop keyboard at home or school because I do most of my work and study on it.

✓ Umm, well, not really. I often use a laptop keyboard at home or at school because I do most of my work and study on it.

Missing article 'at' before 'school' for parallelism. Suggest maintaining parallel prepositional phrases ('at home' and 'at school').

× When I go on a trip, I rarely use a keyboard and uh, thereby using, uh, keyboard on phone because it's lightweight and fast.

✓ When I go on a trip, I rarely use a keyboard and instead use the phone keyboard because it is lightweight and fast.

Original uses 'thereby' incorrectly and has extra fillers. Use 'instead' to show contrast and include 'the' before 'phone keyboard' or 'the keyboard on my phone'. Remove disfluencies for clarity.

× Honestly when I was fatigued I learned how to type on a keyboard because of my high school have a entrance requirement of license computing and I want to improve my computer skill so I learn on TikTok and YouTube.

✓ Honestly, when I was in high school I learned how to type on a keyboard because my high school had an entrance requirement for computer literacy, and I wanted to improve my computer skills, so I learned from TikTok and YouTube.

Multiple tense and article errors: 'when I was fatigued' is incorrect meaning; likely 'in high school'. Use past tense consistently: 'had', 'wanted', 'learned'. Use 'an entrance requirement for computer literacy' and plural 'skills'. Use 'from' for sources. Practice consistent past tense and correct collocations.

× When I have a spare time, I often through social media to learn typing through tutorial and short exercise on Tiktok and Facebook, thereby improving my speed and skill.

✓ When I have spare time, I often use social media to learn typing through tutorials and short exercises on TikTok and Facebook, thereby improving my speed and skills.

Remove unnecessary 'a' before 'spare time', use verb 'use' not 'through', pluralize 'tutorials' and 'exercises', capitalize 'TikTok', and plural 'skills'. Suggest studying countable/uncountable nouns and common verbs for learning activities.

× Beside, I often take online typing tests and focus on practice.

✓ Besides, I often take online typing tests and focus on practicing.

Use 'Besides' not 'Beside' and 'focus on practicing' (verb+ing) rather than 'focus on practice' for natural phrasing. Alternatively 'focus on practice' is possible but 'practicing' is more common. Suggest using 'focus on' followed by -ing form.