Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật tự câu: tránh lỗi về thì và cấu trúc (ví dụ: “In modern times, people often prefer typing”). Nói rõ lý do với 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể và dùng liên từ hợp lý để mạch lạc (ví dụ: “because I find handwriting more personal and it helps me express emotions”). Giữ câu ngắn gọn, tối đa 3–4 câu, tránh lặp từ và từ thừa.

Exemplo: In modern times, people often prefer typing, but I prefer handwriting because I’m not very familiar with keyboards. Also, handwriting feels more personal and helps me express emotions better. For example, when I write a note to a friend, I can add little drawings or vary my script to show how I feel.

Sugestão: Rõ ràng về thiết bị và mục đích: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp (desktop or laptop), sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn lý do. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: “I type every day on a laptop because I’m preparing for the IELTS”). Tránh câu lủng củng và dùng linking words đơn giản như “because” hoặc “so”.

Exemplo: I usually type on a laptop every day because I’m preparing for the IELTS. I practice writing and the other three skills on my laptop, so typing has become part of my daily study routine.

Sugestão: Sắp xếp ý theo thứ tự thời gian và dùng thì thích hợp: bắt đầu với mốc thời gian (“I learned to type about 10 years ago”) rồi nêu bối cảnh ngắn gọn. Tránh từ thừa và tiếng lắp (umm, uh). Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: ai đã dạy bạn, phương pháp luyện tập) để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

Exemplo: I learned to type about ten years ago when I was in primary school. My teacher showed us the basic keys and I practiced at home every day, which helped me become familiar with the keyboard quickly.

Sugestão: Nói rõ phương pháp cải thiện với các bước cụ thể: bắt đầu bằng chủ đề (how you improve), sau đó liệt kê phương pháp rõ ràng, dùng linking words như “first”, “then”, “finally”. Sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp (ví dụ: “practice every day” not “I everyday I must typing”). Thêm ví dụ cụ thể về thời lượng luyện tập hoặc công cụ sử dụng (typing tutor, games).

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing every day for about 30 minutes. First, I use online typing tutors to learn proper finger placement, then I do timed typing tests to increase speed, and finally I practice writing essays to build accuracy under pressure.

× So in a modern technology is people often prefer typing, but I prefer handwriting because I am not familiar with a keyboard.

✓ In modern times, people often prefer typing, but I prefer handwriting because I am not familiar with the keyboard.

The article 'a' before 'modern technology' is incorrect; use 'modern times' or 'modern technology' without 'a'. Also 'a keyboard' can be 'the keyboard' when referring generally to using keyboards; choose 'the keyboard' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'In modern times' and 'the keyboard' to sound natural.

× So in a modern technology is people often prefer typing, but I prefer handwriting because I am not familiar with a keyboard.

✓ In modern times, people often prefer typing, but I prefer handwriting because I am not familiar with the keyboard.

The clause 'is people often prefer' mixes an unnecessary 'is' causing disagreement between subject and verb. Remove 'is' and make the verb 'prefer' agree with plural subject 'people'. Suggestion: delete extraneous 'is' so subject and verb match.

× Besides, the handwriting is easy to me, expressed emotion is so perfectly.

✓ Besides, handwriting is easy for me and expresses emotion very well.

Use 'easy for me' (prepositional phrase) not 'easy to me'. 'The handwriting' is unnatural; use 'handwriting' generally. 'Expressed emotion is so perfectly' is incorrect word order and form; use 'expresses emotion very well'. Suggestion: reorder and choose correct preposition and adverb.

× Umm yeah, I do it every day because I start up take up a IELTS learning.

✓ Umm yeah, I do it every day because I have started IELTS preparation.

Use 'IELTS' without an article; say 'IELTS preparation' or 'an IELTS course'. 'Start up take up' is incorrect combination; use 'have started' for present perfect to show recent/ongoing action. Suggestion: simplify to 'have started IELTS preparation'.

× So every day I must typing on writing and the three skill order to umm to boost myself.

✓ So every day I must type for writing and the three skills in order to improve myself.

After modal 'must' use base verb 'type', not 'typing'. 'The three skill' should be plural 'three skills' and use 'type for writing' or 'type for the writing tasks'. Replace 'boost myself' with 'improve myself' for natural phrasing.

× Yeah, so I vividly is umm 10 years ago when I was when I still study in primary school.

✓ Yes, I remember vividly: it was about 10 years ago when I was studying in primary school.

Use past tense 'it was' and past continuous 'was studying' for past time. Remove extraneous 'is' and use 'remember vividly' to convey memory. Suggestion: use 'it was about 10 years ago' and 'I was studying'.

× I also fami familiar with a keyboard.

✓ I also became familiar with the keyboard.

Typo and word choice: 'fami familiar' is erroneous; use 'became familiar' to indicate acquisition of skill. Use 'the keyboard' when referring to that object in general. Suggestion: correct to 'became familiar with the keyboard'.

× Ya is a new experience for the child of me and every day is go home.

✓ It was a new experience for me as a child, and every day when I went home, I practiced typing.

'Ya is' should be 'It was'; 'the child of me' is unnatural—use 'me as a child'. 'Every day is go home' is incorrect tense and structure; use 'every day when I went home' to indicate habitual past action. Suggestion: use 'I practiced typing' to complete the idea.

× I always uh typing on a keyboard yeah.

✓ I always typed on a keyboard.

For past habitual action use past tense 'typed' (since the context is primary school). If speaker means present habit, use 'I always type on a keyboard.' Choose tense to match context. Suggestion: decide past or present and use base/past form accordingly.

× Umm, I think I uh, typing every day is step by step is a little by little.

✓ Umm, I think typing every day is a step-by-step, little-by-little process.

Use gerund 'typing' as subject is fine, but fix phrasing: 'is step by step is a little by little' duplicates 'is'. Use hyphenated adjectives 'step-by-step' and 'little-by-little' as modifiers and include 'process' for clarity. Suggestion: restructure to a concise noun phrase.

× It's make me more a professional format because I everyday I must typing for three for four, uh, skill and IELTS.

✓ It makes me more professional because every day I must type for three or four skills and IELTS.

Use 'makes' to agree with 'It'. 'More a professional format' is incorrect; use 'more professional'. 'I everyday I must typing' should be 'every day I must type'. Use 'three or four skills' not 'three for four'. Suggestion: correct verb agreement and word order.

× So it moves me too much in the skills.

✓ So it helps me improve a lot in those skills.

'Moves me too much in the skills' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'helps me improve a lot' and specify 'those skills' or 'my skills'. Suggestion: choose a clear verb like 'help' and common collocations 'improve skills'.