Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, avoid grammar errors and redundancy, and add one specific reason with a linking word. Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences. Focus on accurate verb forms and articles (e.g., “the technology era,” “easier than handwriting”).

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient for everyday tasks. For example, I can edit emails and save documents quickly on my computer, which saves time. However, handwriting is more meaningful when writing personal letters or cards.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer about which devices you use daily, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., “for example,” “also”). Remove filler words and general statements. Use correct plurality and articles.

Exemplo: Yes, I type every day, mostly on my laptop and smartphone. For example, I use my laptop for work emails and my phone to message friends. Also, I sometimes use a tablet for quick notes.

Sugestão: Give a direct time statement, then explain briefly why or how you learned, with clearer grammar and linking words. Use correct tense and phrasing (e.g., “because the school believed technology was important”).

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was in primary school. My school believed technology was important, so every student had basic computer lessons and regular typing practice.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a method and give a concrete example of your practice routine. Use linking words (e.g., “for instance,” “also”) and correct verb forms. Avoid repeating phrases and filler words.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing regularly. For instance, I type for 20 minutes each day using online exercises and school assignments, which has increased my speed and accuracy.

× I think it's maybe because in this era that everything run by technologies and typing, it's the way that easier than high write handwriting.

✓ I think it's maybe because in this era everything is run by technology and typing; it's a way that is easier than writing by hand.

Errors: incorrect prepositions ('by technologies' -> 'by technology'), missing auxiliary and passive construction ('everything run' -> 'everything is run'), awkward phrase 'high write handwriting' should be 'writing by hand' or 'handwriting'. Suggestion: use correct preposition 'by' with 'technology' (uncountable), include auxiliary 'is' for passive, and replace awkward phrases with standard expressions. Ensure subject-verb agreement and use clear comparative structure 'easier than writing by hand'.

× By the way, handwriting it's really meaningful when you wrote a letter or something meaning.

✓ By the way, handwriting is really meaningful when you write a letter or something meaningful.

Errors: redundant pronoun/verb contraction ('handwriting it's' -> 'handwriting is'), incorrect verb tense ('wrote' past instead of general present 'write'), and wrong adjective form ('meaning' -> 'meaningful'). Suggestion: use present simple for general statements ('handwriting is... when you write'), avoid contractions that create redundancy, and choose correct adjective 'meaningful'.

× Umm, I think like we have many device that we have to type like smartphone or iPad or and also computers.

✓ Umm, I think we have many devices that we have to type on, like smartphones, iPads, and computers.

Errors: singular/plural mismatch ('many device' -> 'many devices'), missing preposition for action ('type on'), inconsistent plural forms for examples and extra conjunction 'or and'. Suggestion: make countable nouns plural when used with 'many', include appropriate preposition 'type on', and list examples with parallel plural forms separated by commas and 'and'.

× So when we want to communicate to each other, we have to type.

✓ So when we want to communicate with each other, we have to type.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'communicate to' should be 'communicate with'. Suggestion: use 'communicate with' for reciprocal communication; 'communicate to' is used for one-way communication to an audience.

× I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school.

Errors: 'learned how to type' is not wrong but less concise than 'learned to type'; this keeps past tense appropriate. Suggestion: use 'learned to [verb]' for succinctness. No tense change needed.

× Umm, my school believed that the role that driven by technology, so they require all children to study, listen about computer and basic practice, especially typing skills.

✓ Umm, my school believed in the role of technology, so they required all children to study computers and basic practices, especially typing skills.

Errors: incorrect phrase 'believed that the role that driven by technology' should be 'believed in the role of technology'; wrong verb forms ('driven' misplaced), wrong verb tense/agreement ('require' -> 'required' to match past), awkward nouns ('listen about computer'). Suggestion: use 'believed in', change verbs to past for consistency, use 'study computers' or 'receive basic computer practice', and use 'practices' or 'practice sessions'.

× I think I improve my typing skill by practicing.

✓ I think I improve my typing skills by practicing.

Errors: 'typing skill' is better as plural 'typing skills' when referring to overall ability. Present simple 'I improve' is acceptable for habitual action; keep consistent. Suggestion: use plural 'skills' and optionally say 'I improve my typing by practicing regularly.'

× I think something that practice everyday will improve and my school encourage everyone to type every day so that's why I can.

✓ I think something you practice every day will improve, and my school encourages everyone to type every day, so that's why I can.

Errors: missing subject ('something that practice' -> 'something you practice' or 'what you practice'), incorrect adverb spelling 'everyday' (should be 'every day' when meaning each day), subject-verb agreement ('my school encourage' -> 'my school encourages'), and awkward ending 'so that's why I can' (better 'so that's why I can do it' or 'so that's why I can type well'). Suggestion: use correct relative clause or pronoun, correct 'every day', ensure verb agrees with singular subject, and complete the idea after 'can'.

× So when we want to communicate to each other, we have to type. It's the best way to communicate.

✓ So when we want to communicate with each other, we have to type. It's the best way to communicate.

Errors: first sentence corrected earlier for preposition; second sentence 'It's the best way to communicate.' is grammatically correct. No third-person singular change needed beyond prior fix. Suggestion: ensure preposition 'with' is used as above.