Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct word choice and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with correct nouns and verbs. Avoid redundancies and incorrect phrases (e.g., “my keyboards”, “making decks”, “prepare ring”).

Exemplo: I prefer typing when I work because it is faster and more efficient. For example, I type presentations and meeting documents on my laptop, which saves time compared with handwriting.

Sugestão: Reduce hesitation and finish your sentences. Give a clear reason and one brief example. Use linking words like ‘because’ and avoid trailing off. Correct the vague ending by explaining what is difficult.

Exemplo: Yes, I use a desktop keyboard every day because I send many emails to my boss and teammates. However, it can be tiring when I have to type long reports for several hours.

Sugestão: Provide a clear time reference and one clear supporting detail. Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases. Use linking words like ‘so’ or ‘therefore’ to show cause and effect.

Exemplo: I learned to type at university. I practiced by taking lecture notes and preparing meeting minutes, so typing became a regular habit.

Sugestão: Be specific about methods and avoid repeating the same idea. Start with a topic sentence, then describe one or two concrete activities and their effects, using linking words like ‘also’ or ‘in addition’.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing daily at work and by playing online typing games at weekends. This combination helps me increase speed and accuracy over time.

× 'I prefer typing when I work in my company.'

✓ 'I prefer typing when I work at my company.'

'at' is the correct preposition for workplaces. Using 'in my company' is not idiomatic in this context; use 'at my company' to indicate place of work. Suggestion: Use 'at my company' or 'at work.'

× 'I usually use my keyboards to save time for making decks or prepare ring for the documents which will be used for the meetings.'

✓ 'I usually use my keyboard to save time preparing decks or preparing documents for meetings.'

'keyboards' should be singular when referring to the device you personally use (subject-verb agreement/number). 'to save time for making' is an incorrect verb pattern; use the gerund 'preparing.' 'prepare ring' is unclear and likely a typo; replaced with 'preparing documents.' 'which will be used for the meetings' is wordy; 'for meetings' is more natural. Suggestion: Use singular 'keyboard', replace 'to save time for making' with 'to save time preparing', and simplify 'for meetings.'

× 'I usually use my keyboards to save time preparing decks or preparing documents for meetings.'

✓ 'I usually use my keyboard to save time preparing decks or preparing documents for meetings.'

'my keyboards' is a plural/singular issue; if the student uses one device, use singular 'keyboard.' If they mean multiple, clarify context. Suggestion: Use singular 'keyboard' unless you really mean multiple keyboards.

× 'I type on a desktop keyboard every day because I use it for my daily umm routines to send emails to my boss and other teammates, for example.'

✓ 'I type on a desktop keyboard every day because I use it for my daily routines, such as sending emails to my boss and teammates.'

'use it for my daily umm routines to send emails' has incorrect verb form and word order. 'to send' should be a gerund 'sending' after 'such as' or 'for.' Removed filler 'umm' and 'for example' replaced with 'such as.' Suggestion: Use 'such as sending emails' and place commas for clarity.

× 'Umm, it's sometimes difficult to.'

✓ 'Sometimes it is difficult.'

'it's sometimes difficult to.' is a sentence fragment missing an object or infinitive phrase; the original likely omitted what is difficult. Changing to 'Sometimes it is difficult.' completes the sentence, or better: 'Sometimes it is difficult to do.' If referring to a specific action, include that action. Suggestion: Remove filler 'Umm' and complete the thought by specifying the action or use a complete clause.

× 'I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was in university.'

✓ 'I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was at university.'

'in university' is not incorrect but 'at university' is more idiomatic in many varieties of English. This is a preposition preference rather than tense error; kept as a style correction. Suggestion: Use 'at university' or 'when I was at university.'

× 'When I took classes I always took notes for meeting minutes and by typing on every day it makes my it helps my.'

✓ 'When I took classes, I always took notes for meeting minutes, and typing every day helped me.'

'by typing on every day it makes my it helps my' is ungrammatical and contains redundancy and word order errors. Rewriting to 'typing every day helped me' uses correct tense and structure. Commas added for clause separation. Suggestion: Simplify the clause: 'typing every day helped me.' Specify what it helped (e.g., 'helped me improve my speed' if intended).

× 'Because I use keyboards every day, it helps me to improve my typing skills.'

✓ 'Because I use a keyboard every day, it helps me improve my typing skills.'

'keyboards' plural should be singular if referring to the one the student uses; 'to improve' after 'helps me' is unnecessary — 'helps me improve' is correct. Removed 'to.' Suggestion: Use 'a keyboard' or 'my keyboard' and the phrase 'helps me improve'.

× 'Furthermore, I on weekends I usually play games for typing and it helps me improve my typing skills.'

✓ 'Furthermore, on weekends I usually play typing games, and they help me improve my typing skills.'

This sentence has number and word order issues: 'I on weekends I' is duplicated; 'play games for typing' is awkward — 'typing games' is natural. Use plural 'they help' to agree with 'typing games.' Suggestion: Remove duplicate subject, reorder adverbial phrase to 'on weekends,' and use 'typing games' with plural verb agreement.