Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words for coherence and correct small grammar issues (e.g., 'looking out of the window' and remove duplicate 'I think'). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel and I prefer a window seat because it helps me relax. For example, I enjoy watching changing landscapes and noticing small details like local architecture, which makes the journey more interesting.

Sugestão: Organize your answer: give a direct yes/no plus reason, then a specific example. Avoid filler phrases and incomplete sentences. Watch for repetition and finish your thoughts. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of scenery because they let me remember places I may not revisit. For example, when I pass a mountain or an interesting skyline I take a quick photo to capture the view and look back at it later.

Sugestão: Good clear answer and well-organized. To improve, make the topic sentence tighter and add one specific contrasting detail. Use concise linking words like 'however' and avoid small grammar slips ('have a breath' -> 'take a deep breath'). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I like both equally, but it depends on my mood: mountains when I want fresh air and quiet hiking, however I choose the sea when I want to relax and listen to the waves.

× Yes, I'm definitely looking at the windows when traveling and I personally prefer the seats near the window because it just calms me whenever I look outside the window when traveling.

✓ Yes, I definitely look out of the window when traveling, and I personally prefer seats near the window because it calms me whenever I look outside.

Original used present continuous 'I'm definitely looking' which implies a temporary action; simple present 'I definitely look' is more appropriate for habitual actions. Also 'looking at the windows' is awkward; use 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window'. Remove redundant 'when traveling' and repeated 'window' to improve clarity. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and avoid repetition.

× Yes, I love taking pictures, especially of sceneries.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures, especially of scenery.

The word 'scenery' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'sceneries.' Use 'scenery' or 'scenic views.' Suggestion: replace plural with uncountable noun or a countable phrase like 'scenic views.'

× I love taking pictures of the mountain views of of the cityscapes as well.

✓ I love taking pictures of mountain views and of cityscapes as well.

The sentence had a repeated word 'of of' and mixed plural forms. Correct by removing duplication and parallelizing the two items ('mountain views' and 'cityscapes'). Suggestion: proofread to remove repeated words and keep parallel structure.

× And I think I like keeping pictures because these are something that you can revisit anytime.

✓ I like keeping pictures because they are something you can revisit anytime.

The original contains filler 'And I think' which is unnecessary and 'these are something' is ungrammatical; use 'they are something' or better 'they are things you can revisit.' Suggestion: remove fillers and ensure subject pronoun agrees with plural 'pictures.'

× If you can't just 'cause you can't just go back to the place that you.

✓ If you can't, it's because you can't just go back to the place.

The original is an incomplete and colloquial fragment ending with 'that you.' Rephrase to a complete conditional: 'If you can't, it's because you can't just go back to the place.' Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and finish clauses clearly.

× Honestly, I equally like both and it just depends on my mood of which view will I appreciate more looking at.

✓ Honestly, I like both equally, and it just depends on my mood which view I will appreciate more.

Word order 'which view will I appreciate more looking at' is incorrect for indirect question structure; use 'which view I will appreciate more.' Also move 'equally' to 'like both equally.' Suggestion: use correct word order for subordinate clauses and place adverbs appropriately.

× So there are times that I would just like to look at mountain views and just have a breath of fresh air.

✓ Sometimes I like to look at mountain views and take a breath of fresh air.

'There are times that I would just like to' is wordy; 'sometimes I like to' is more natural. Use 'take a breath of fresh air' rather than 'have a breath.' Suggestion: simplify phrasing and use common collocations ('take a breath of fresh air').

× And there are also some days that I would appreciate looking at the seascape more and just listen to the sound of the waves.

✓ There are also days when I prefer looking at the seascape and listening to the sound of the waves.

Use 'days when' rather than 'days that.' 'Would appreciate looking' is awkward; 'prefer looking' fits better. Use parallel verbs 'prefer ... and listening' or 'prefer to look ... and listen.' Suggestion: ensure parallel structure and use 'when' for time clauses.