Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and natural: start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one specific detail. Avoid repetition and incorrect word choice. Use linking words if adding more than one point.

Exemplo: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, a cluster of apartment towers and a glass office block stand about ten minutes from my house, which makes the area feel very urban.

Sugestão: Give a concise direct answer, then explain briefly with specific details and correct verb forms. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid fillers and repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I often photograph buildings because I'm a photographer. For instance, I like shooting from rooftops to capture city skylines, and I usually post the best shots on social media.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a clear reason with specific details; avoid hesitations and incorrect grammar (use 'an expensive car' or 'expensive cars'). Keep to one or two supporting sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'however'.

Exemplo: No, there's no particular building I want to visit. I rarely feel interested in tourist skyscrapers because they often cater to wealthy visitors and seem expensive to enter.

Sugestão: Start with a clear yes/no and give 1–2 specific reasons using correct prepositions ('live in one' not 'in there') and avoid vagueness. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building if I had the chance, because high-rise apartments usually offer great views and good facilities such as a gym and security.

× There are a lot of buildings in our home.

✓ There are a lot of buildings near my home.

The phrase 'in our home' is unnatural when referring to buildings nearby; 'near my home' or 'near our home' is correct. No plural error but context required preposition change (fits 'Singular and plural issue' category as listed). Use 'near' to indicate location outside the house.

× I think too much, too much tower.

✓ I think there are too many towers.

'Too much' is used with uncountable nouns; towers are countable, so use 'too many'. Also use plural 'towers' to match the quantifier.

× Yes, sometime I usually check the photo from the tower to pause it on the social media because I'm I'm a photographer.

✓ Yes, sometimes I usually take photos from the tower and post them on social media because I'm a photographer.

Use 'sometimes' (adverb) not 'sometime'; 'check the photo' and 'pause it' are incorrect verbs here—use 'take photos' and 'post them'. 'From the tower' is acceptable. Remove duplicated 'I'm'. Ensure adverb placement 'sometimes' before main verb.

× There are a lot of building, but I don't want to go there because, uh, I think that it, we, we, we need to, uh, have a expensive cars to go in there.

✓ There are a lot of buildings, but I don't want to go there because I think we need to have expensive cars to go there.

Use plural 'buildings' to match 'a lot of'. 'A expensive cars' is wrong: 'expensive cars' (no 'a') or 'an expensive car' for singular. Remove filler repetitions and correct 'go in there' to 'go there.'

× Well, of course, when I have the opportunity, I want to try to live in there for a long time maybe.

✓ Well, of course, when I have the opportunity, I want to try to live there for a long time.

Use 'live there' not 'live in there'. Remove 'maybe' at end unless uncertain; place it earlier ('I might...') if needed. 'Live there' is the correct prepositional phrase.