Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), correct errors (use 'There aren’t any' or 'There aren't many'), and add one or two concise supporting details using a linking word. Avoid redundancy and keep it under 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home because it’s a quiet residential area. Most houses here are two-storey family homes, so the skyline is low and leafy.

Sugestão: Use natural phrasing and clear reasons. Instead of double negatives, say 'I don't usually' and give a specific example of what you prefer to photograph. Use a linking word such as 'because' or 'so' to connect your reason.

Exemplo: I don’t usually take photos of buildings because I find them less interesting. Instead, I prefer photographing landscapes and sunsets, as they change and feel more beautiful to me.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly. Say 'No' or 'I can't think of one' and then offer a specific reason or a condition when you might visit, using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid asking the examiner a question in your answer.

Exemplo: I can’t think of a specific building I want to visit at the moment because I’m not familiar with notable buildings nearby. However, if I learn about an interesting historic building, I would definitely go and explore it.

Sugestão: Be clear and correct sentences. Start with a direct response ('No, I don't') and give concise reasons with linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Mention specific concerns (privacy, noise, community) to make your answer more informative.

Exemplo: No, I don’t want to live in a tall building because I prefer the privacy and space of a single-family house. Tall flats often feel crowded and noisy, and I value having a small garden and quieter surroundings.

× There are any tall buildings near my home because we live in a residential area so most of the people staying here construct homes rather than big tall buildings.

✓ There aren't any tall buildings near my home because we live in a residential area, so most people here build houses rather than tall buildings.

The original sentence used 'There are any' which is incorrect for negation; use 'There aren't any' (quantifier + negation). 'Most of the people staying here' is wordy and unidiomatic; 'most people here' is natural. 'Construct homes' is formal; 'build houses' is more natural in this context. Also add a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'so' connecting two independent clauses. ID:14

× I generally never take pictures of buildings because that doesn't make me feel so beautiful to see after a while.

✓ I generally never take pictures of buildings because they don't look appealing to me after a while.

The phrase 'that doesn't make me feel so beautiful to see' is awkward and ungrammatical. 'Generally never' is redundant; keep 'generally' or 'never' (kept 'generally never' meaning usually not, but corrected to natural 'I generally don't take' would be acceptable; here 'I generally never' kept as strong phrasing but corrected sentence uses natural structure). Use 'they don't look appealing to me' to express that photos of buildings stop being attractive over time. Also replace 'that' with 'they' to refer to 'pictures'. ID:20

× I like taking pictures of beautiful sceneries.

✓ I like taking pictures of beautiful scenery.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun and does not take the plural form 'sceneries'. Use 'scenery' to refer to pleasant landscapes in general. ID:26

× That is not a particular building that I would like to visit because I'm not aware of it most of the time.

✓ There isn't any particular building that I would like to visit because I'm not familiar with many of them.

The original is awkward: 'That is not a particular building' and 'I'm not aware of it most of the time' are unnatural. Use 'There isn't any particular building' to answer the question and 'I'm not familiar with many of them' to explain lack of awareness. Also 'aware of' is usually followed by what you are aware of; 'familiar with' fits better. ID:26

× Does it doesn't bother me to have a research on the buildings that are nearby?

✓ It doesn't bother me to do research on the buildings that are nearby.

The original uses an incorrect auxiliary 'Does' with a negative 'doesn't' (double auxiliary). For a statement use 'It doesn't bother me'. Also 'have a research' is ungrammatical; use 'do research' or 'conduct research'. ID:4},{