Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a direct, concise topic sentence, avoid filler words and tense errors, and add one specific supporting detail. Use a linking word if adding detail.

Exemplo: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live in a small town in Guizhou where most houses are only two or three storeys. Because it’s a rural area with limited development, the skyline is quite low.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating phrases, and combine short sentences with a linking word to make your answer smoother. Add one specific example of a building type that attracts you.

Exemplo: I only take photos of buildings occasionally, when a design really stands out. For example, I photographed an old opera house last year because its ornate facade was unlike anything I’d seen. Otherwise I don’t usually photograph ordinary buildings.

Sugestão: Give a direct opening sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking words to connect reasons. Add a specific detail about which library or what you would do there.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit a large public library. For example, I’d love to see my city’s central library because it has extensive collections and quiet reading rooms. There I could borrow books on history and spend a peaceful afternoon reading.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear refusal, avoid unclear phrases and grammar mistakes, and give a concise reason with one specific example of how it would affect you. Use a linking word for clarity.

Exemplo: No, I don’t want to live in a tall building because I’m afraid of heights. For instance, I feel dizzy on high balconies, so living on the 20th floor would make me uncomfortable and anxious.

× MMM, No, there are no tall buildings near my home because I lived in a town in Guizhou province, uh, which is uh, which is poor and uh, uh, the buildings are very uh, uh, low.

✓ MMM, no, there are no tall buildings near my home because I live in a town in Guizhou province, which is poor, and the buildings are very low.

The sentence mixes past tense 'lived' with present context 'there are no tall buildings near my home'. Use 'live' to match the present situation (There be issue and present tense consistency). Also remove redundant filler phrases and simplify relative clause for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 3

× I just take photos of buildings when I think the building is amazing and is very different.

✓ I only take photos of buildings when I think a building is amazing and very different.

Use 'only' instead of 'just' for clarity; 'the building' is too specific—use 'a building' when speaking generally. No progressive or -ing needed; this corrects article use and noun reference (present participle not required). Grammar problem type ID: 10

× Different from any other buildings I have seen.

✓ It is different from any other building I have seen.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb; convert to a complete sentence with 'it is' and use singular 'building' to match 'any other' when referring to a single building. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× But everyday life I don't take buildings.

✓ But in everyday life I don't take photos of buildings.

The phrase 'everyday life' needs a preposition 'in'. 'Take buildings' is incorrect; use 'take photos of buildings'. This fixes a quantifier/phrase misuse and makes intent clear. Grammar problem type ID: 14

× I look would like to visit the library buildings. Library buildings.

✓ I would like to visit the library building.

'Look would like' is incorrect word order; use 'I would like'. 'Library buildings' is plural and unclear—likely one library building is meant, so use singular with the definite/indefinite article as needed. This corrects article and word order issues. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× There are many books, you can choose what you want or what you like.

✓ There are many books, so you can choose what you want or what you like.

Two independent clauses need a conjunction; use 'so' to show result. Preposition use is okay but sentence flow improves with correct conjunction. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× And the atmosphere is very silent, you can read it and calm down.

✓ And the atmosphere is very quiet; you can read and relax.

'Silent' is awkward for atmosphere—'quiet' is more natural. 'Read it' is incorrect; use 'read' (no object) and 'calm down' should be 'relax' for a natural collocation. Also join clauses appropriately. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× I don't want to live in a tall building because I am the person who is fair or who is fair of high places.

✓ I don't want to live in a tall building because I am afraid of high places.

'Fair' is a wrong word choice for 'afraid'; use 'afraid of'. 'The person who is' is wordy—simplify to 'I am afraid of high places.' This fixes pronoun/word choice errors. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I want I always felt that I will feel fall down when I in high places so I don't want to live in a topic.

✓ I have always felt that I would feel like I might fall when I am in high places, so I don't want to live in a tall building.

Multiple tense and structure errors: use present perfect 'have always felt' to show ongoing feeling, 'would' or 'might' for hypothetical feeling, 'feel like I might fall' is natural, include 'am' before 'in high places', and 'topic' is incorrect—use 'tall building'. This addresses present tense consistency and sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID: 6}]}}۔ Note: The JSON uses single quotes in strings and '\n' for newlines to follow instructions. The appended explanation lines include grammar problem type IDs for reference. }