Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify meaning, use correct grammar and concise structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details (location, number, or examples). Use correct nouns and articles (e.g., "tall buildings", "the capital city"). Avoid redundancy and keep within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes. There are many tall buildings near my home because I live in Bangkok, the capital of Thailand. For example, there are several office towers and condominiums within a five-minute walk from my apartment. They make the area feel very busy and modern.

Sugestão: Make a direct, grammatically correct response and give a clear reason. Say whether you take photos, then explain when or why with specific details. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas and keep sentences short.

Exemplo: Sometimes I take photos of buildings, especially when I see interesting modern architecture. I usually photograph facades and details like glass fronts or decorations because they look unique. I don’t take photos often, only when I have my camera or phone with me.

Sugestão: Answer directly naming the building you want to visit and give a clear reason with specific details. Use linking words such as "because" or "for example". Keep to 2–3 sentences and correct word choice (e.g., "library", "museum").

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the main city library because I enjoy reading and learning about different cultures. For example, it has an extensive international collection and unique architecture that I’ve seen in photos. I think visiting it would be both relaxing and inspiring.

Sugestão: Give a clear yes/no and explain with specific reasons (e.g., views, convenience, noise). Use correct future expressions ("I plan to save money", "I hope to live"). Keep sentences concise and logical with linking words like "because" and "so".

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building someday because it would offer nice views and modern facilities. I plan to save money so I can afford a small apartment in a high-rise near my workplace. However, I’m also concerned about noise and prefer a building with good soundproofing.

× Yes, there are appeals for tall building near my home because I live in the Bangkok of capital city of Thailand.

✓ Yes, there are appealing tall buildings near my home because I live in Bangkok, the capital city of Thailand.

The sentence has multiple adjective and article problems. 'appeals for tall building' is incorrect; 'appealing tall buildings' or 'appealing tall buildings' fits; also 'the Bangkok of capital city of Thailand' is wrong - use 'Bangkok, the capital city of Thailand'. Use plural 'buildings' to match 'are'. Improve by placing adjectives before nouns and using correct noun forms. Suggestion: Use adjective + noun order and correct proper noun forms: 'appealing tall buildings' and 'Bangkok, the capital city of Thailand'.

× I have the building many and sore more than.

✓ I have many buildings and more besides.

This sentence shows incorrect noun number and word order. 'the building many' is ungrammatical; use 'many buildings' for plural. 'sore more than' is unclear; 'and more besides' or 'and several more' conveys intended meaning. Suggestion: use quantifier before plural noun: 'many buildings'.

× Actually I trained for the of building in sometime though because the building soar modern and the traffic north struck many people living in the in building and have 4 door.

✓ Actually I trained in photographing buildings sometime because the buildings are very modern and the heavy traffic affects many people living in the buildings, which have four doors.

Multiple issues: 'trained for the of building' likely means 'trained in photographing buildings' (verb + -ing). 'sometime' -> 'sometime' or 'sometimes'; 'soar modern' should be 'are very modern' (adjective use); 'traffic north struck' should be 'heavy traffic affects' (verb choice); 'living in the in building' -> 'living in the buildings'; 'have 4 door' -> 'have four doors' (plural and number words). Suggestion: use correct verb + -ing for activities ('photographing'), correct subject-verb agreement, and proper plural nouns and number words.

× Yes, I think app the app board would like to visit a building.

✓ Yes, I think the rooftop observation deck would be a building I would like to visit.

The original is unclear and uses incorrect words ('app the app board'). Likely intended 'app board' meaning 'observation deck' or 'rooftop'. This requires choosing correct noun and adjective order. Suggestion: replace unclear phrase with a precise noun and keep correct article usage: 'the rooftop observation deck'.

× For instance the building for library especially I usually see international visit to rivalry of building in.

✓ For instance, the library building is especially interesting; I often see international visitors there competing to photograph the building.

Prepositions and word choices are incorrect: 'building for library' -> 'library building' or 'building for a library'; 'I usually see international visit to' -> 'I often see international visitors'; 'rivalry of building in' unclear -> 'competing to photograph the building'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('in', 'at', 'to') and proper noun forms ('visitors').

× Yes, I have believed in tour building.

✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall building.

The original 'I have believed in tour building' is ungrammatical and misuses verb forms and modal meaning. The question asks 'Do you want to live in a tall building?' so use modal 'would like' or 'want to' to express desire. Suggestion: use appropriate modal verbs for wishes: 'I would like to live in a tall building' or 'I want to live in a tall building'.

× In the future I find information and I plan a save money I find visitor building.

✓ In the future I will find information and I plan to save money so I can visit such buildings.

Problems: tense and infinitive use. 'I find information' should be future 'I will find information' or 'I will look for information'; 'plan a save money' should be 'plan to save money' (use infinitive after 'plan'); 'I find visitor building' should be 'I can visit such buildings' or 'visit the buildings'. Suggestion: use future tense 'will' for future actions and use 'plan to + verb' for intentions.