Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise, correct grammar, and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by one specific detail. Avoid filler words (umm) and redundant phrases. Use correct structures: "There aren't many tall buildings near my home" and give a clear example (e.g. the tallest are two-storey offices).

Exemplo: There aren't many tall buildings near my home because I live in a small town. For example, the tallest structures are only two small office blocks of about three storeys, so the skyline is mostly low houses and shops.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence and follow with one or two specific reasons or examples. Remove hesitation and finish your sentences. Use linking words like "however" or "when" for coherence. Provide a concrete example of a landmark you would photograph.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes take photos of buildings. For example, when I travel abroad I photograph famous landmarks such as cathedrals or modern skyscrapers because their architecture and details are interesting to me.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer and one specific reason or detail. Remove hesitation and keep it within 2–4 sentences. Mention a particular castle or country to be more specific and show knowledge.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit historic castles in Europe because I enjoy old architecture and history. For instance, I'd love to see Edinburgh Castle in Scotland to learn about its history and admire its stonework.

Sugestão: Answer directly, finish your thought, and give one or two concrete reasons. Correct grammar (e.g. "I used to live on the 20th floor") and avoid trailing off. Use linking words like "because" to explain why it was uncomfortable.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building now. I used to live on the 20th floor and it felt uncomfortable because the elevator was often slow and I sometimes felt isolated from street life.

× No, there's not that much of tall buildings near my home because my home it my hometown is really a small town and I think the tallest buildings are usually just umm, one or two companies or nothing.

✓ No, there aren't that many tall buildings near my home because my hometown is really a small town, and I think the tallest buildings are usually just one or two small office buildings.

Errors: 'there's not' is incorrect with plural noun; use 'there aren't'. 'That much of tall buildings' mixes uncountable structure with countable noun; use 'that many tall buildings'. Redundant subject 'my home it my hometown' should be 'my hometown'. 'One or two companies or nothing' is informal and unclear; 'one or two small office buildings' is clearer. Suggestions: match 'there be' to plural form, use 'many' with countable nouns, remove redundant pronouns, and choose precise nouns.

× Yes, but I think it depends on some circumstances. If umm, it's in my daily life, I don't really take pictures of just normal buildings, but if I'm traveling another country and if there's a big building like some landmarks or something that I think.

✓ Yes, but I think it depends on the circumstances. If it's in my daily life, I don't really take pictures of ordinary buildings, but if I'm traveling to another country and there is a big building or a famous landmark, I might take photos.

Errors: 'depends on some circumstances' is better as 'depends on the circumstances' (article and collocation). 'Traveling another country' requires preposition 'to'. 'If there's a big building like some landmarks' mixes singular/plural and 'like' is informal; use 'a big building or a famous landmark'. The sentence also ends incomplete; supply 'I might take photos' to complete the idea. Suggestions: use correct prepositions, ensure parallel number (singular/plural), and finish clauses with a main verb.

× Umm, I'm not sure if this counts as a building also, but I would really love to visit some castles, uh, in foreign countries because I really love those historical places and especially the structure of old castles.

✓ I'm not sure if this counts as a building, but I would really love to visit castles in other countries because I love historical places, especially the architecture of old castles.

Errors: 'in foreign countries' is acceptable but 'in other countries' is more natural. 'Those historical places' is vague; 'historical places' is sufficient. 'Structure of old castles' is awkward; 'architecture' is the correct noun. Suggestions: prefer natural collocations ('other countries'), avoid redundant words ('uh, really'), and use precise vocabulary ('architecture').

× No, not now. I used to live in a umm tall apartment and I lived at more than umm 20th floor upper than that and it was quite uncomfortable experience because all I.

✓ No, not now. I used to live in a tall apartment on the twentieth floor, and it was quite an uncomfortable experience because of the height and other issues.

Errors: 'in a tall apartment' is OK but 'on the twentieth floor' requires preposition 'on' and ordinal form 'twentieth'. 'I lived at more than 20th floor upper than that' is ungrammatical and redundant; rephrase as 'on the twentieth floor'. Missing article before 'uncomfortable experience' — use 'an uncomfortable experience'. The final clause is incomplete; complete the thought ('because of the height and other issues'). Suggestions: use correct prepositions for floors, use ordinal numbers, include articles before singular countable nouns, and finish sentences with a clear reason.