Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more coherent. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No + brief fact), then add one or two concise supporting details. Reduce hesitations and repetitions, use correct grammar (e.g., 'stairs' → 'stories'), and link ideas with a simple connector like 'but' or 'however.'

Exemplo: Yes. I live in a seven‑storey building and my flat is on the third floor. However, there are no taller buildings immediately around mine, although I can see a few high‑rises in the distance from the rooftop.

Sugestão: Use a clear topic sentence and streamline details. Avoid repeating words and tense inconsistency. Use linking words like 'especially' and 'when' appropriately, and vary vocabulary (e.g., 'sometimes' not 'sometime'; 'landscape' → 'view' or 'cityscape'). Keep to two or three sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially after I finish work. When I go to the rooftop with my daughters and see an interesting cityscape or a distant skyscraper, I take several photos with my phone.

Sugestão: Answer directly and add a clear reason. Avoid repetition and fix grammar (e.g., 'three‑storey'). Use past and conditional tenses correctly. Provide one specific detail about why you would visit (memory, architecture, or nostalgia).

Exemplo: Yes. I would like to visit the old school building where I studied as a child because it is a three‑storey building that used to be the tallest in our village and I have many fond memories there. If I have time, I will go back to see how it has changed.

Sugestão: Make a clear, direct statement and give a specific reason. Avoid unclear phrases ('huge chance of big artwork' is unclear). Use vocabulary relevant to safety or convenience if that is your concern (e.g., 'earthquake risk', 'evacuation difficulty', 'noise', 'crowding'). Link reason with 'because' and consider a brief contrast if needed.

Exemplo: No, I would not want to live in a tall building because in Bangladesh high‑rise living can be crowded and evacuation during emergencies may be difficult. I prefer a low‑rise home that feels safer and quieter.

× On the building I, uh, stairs tall building.

✓ On the building I live in, uh, there are stairs in the tall building.

Original sentence is fragmented and unclear (sentence structure error). It lacks a clear subject-verb-object order and preposition placement. Suggestion: rearrange into a full clause with subject and verb and include the correct preposition 'in' after 'live'. Use 'there are' to indicate existence of stairs.

× It's uh, seven story building and I live at third floor,

✓ It's a seven-story building and I live on the third floor,

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'seven-story building' and wrong preposition 'at' for floor location. Also hyphenate 'seven-story' as a compound adjective. Use 'on the third floor' for floors.

× but around this building there is no, uh, there is no, uh, taller building.

✓ but around this building there are no taller buildings.

Using singular 'is' with plural 'taller building' causes subject-verb disagreement. Expressing 'no taller buildings' requires plural verb 'are' and plural noun 'buildings'.

× Uh, but when I go to the rooftop, I can see some tall building at a distance.

✓ Uh, but when I go to the rooftop, I can see some tall buildings in the distance.

Use plural 'buildings' if more than one is visible and the common phrase is 'in the distance' not 'at a distance'. Also match number.

× Yes, sometime I take photos of building, especially after going back from my office.

✓ Yes, sometimes I take photos of buildings, especially after returning from my office.

Use 'sometimes' (adverb) not 'sometime'. Use plural 'buildings' and prefer 'returning from' rather than 'going back from' for natural phrasing.

× Sometimes I go to the rooftop with my daughters and when I see the, uh, the, the landscape and I can see a tall building in at a long distance, I take my phone and I took a lot of photos.

✓ Sometimes I go to the rooftop with my daughters and when I see the landscape and can see a tall building at a long distance, I take out my phone and I take a lot of photos.

Remove extra definite articles 'the, the, the'. Use consistent present tense 'take' to match habitual action. Use 'take out my phone' for natural phrasing and 'at a long distance' or better 'in the distance' (either acceptable). Avoid mixing past 'took' with present tense context.

× Yes, it's an interesting question question.

✓ Yes, that's an interesting question.

Duplicate word 'question question' and awkward contraction. Simplify to 'that's an interesting question' for clarity.

× Uh, when I was a kid, I used to study in a local school that was a three story building.

✓ Uh, when I was a kid, I used to study at a local school that was a three-story building.

Use preposition 'at' with 'study' and hyphenate 'three-story'. 'Used to' correctly indicates past habit; change 'in' to 'at' for natural collocation.

× It's not tall enough, but at that time it was the only three story building in our village and we I used to study there.

✓ It's not tall enough, but at that time it was the only three-story building in our village and I used to study there.

Remove extra pronoun 'we' leaving 'I'. Also hyphenate 'three-story'. Ensure subject consistency.

× If I have time, I will go there.

✓ If I have time, I will go there.

Sentence is grammatically correct given a real future condition; no change needed.

× Ah, I think I'll not live in a tall building because Bangladesh is a densely populated country and there is a huge chance of big artwork.

✓ Ah, I don't think I'll live in a tall building because Bangladesh is a densely populated country and there is a high chance of major damage in a big earthquake.

Original has awkward negation 'I'll not' and 'huge chance of big artwork' is incorrect word choice—likely meant 'earthquake' and 'major damage'. Use 'I don't think I'll' for natural negation and correct vocabulary 'earthquake' and 'major damage'.