Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct grammar (articles, prepositions, verb forms) and avoid redundancy. Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

Exemplo: Yes. There is a tall tower near my home next to the ocean. It takes me about 30 minutes to get there, and at night you can enjoy panoramic views of the city. The view is very memorable, especially when the city lights are on.

Sugestão: Answer directly, give one clear reason and a specific example with correct countable/uncountable usage. Use linking words (for example, because) and avoid exaggeration like "a millions." Keep sentences grammatically correct and concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because photos help me remember architectural details. For example, last week I visited Image Castle and took many pictures of its towers and carvings, which helped me recall those features later.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear statement naming the building you'd like to visit. Use correct tense and give one or two specific reasons, linked logically. Avoid vague phrases like "illustrated building" and redundant words like "memorable and special memory."

Exemplo: I would like to visit the Tokyo Skytree. From its observation decks you can see many beautiful buildings and wide panoramic views of the city, especially impressive at night when the lights are on.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer, then give two specific reasons with linking words (firstly, secondly). Correct collocations ("expensive to live in" or "higher cost of living") and article use. Keep it concise and natural.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't. Firstly, I am afraid of heights, and secondly, living in a tall building would be more expensive. For those reasons I prefer a low-rise house that is more affordable and comfortable for me.

× Yes, there is a tall tower which is located in the next to the ocean.

✓ Yes, there is a tall tower located next to the ocean.

Use of 'the' before 'next to the ocean' and 'which is located in the next to the ocean' is ungrammatical. Omit 'in' and 'which is' to make a natural 'there is' sentence: 'a tower located next to the ocean.' This corrects the 'there be' construction and improves concision.

× It around takes me 30 minutes to get there, especially at night.

✓ It takes me around 30 minutes to get there, especially at night.

Word order is incorrect. The verb phrase 'takes me around 30 minutes' should place 'around' before the time expression. This fixes present tense sentence structure and improves natural word order.

× You can see it was already building and panoramic views of the city which would be a memorable experience.

✓ You can see it being built and panoramic views of the city, which would be a memorable experience.

The original mixes tense and forms incorrectly: 'was already building' is awkward and 'see it being built' is the correct progressive passive perception expression. Also add a comma before the nonrestrictive clause 'which would be a memorable experience.' This fixes sentence structure and verb form.

× Yes I do, because taking photos help me to remember the building and details I might otherwise forget.

✓ Yes I do, because taking photos helps me remember the building and details I might otherwise forget.

Subject 'taking photos' is singular gerund, so verb must be 'helps' (third-person singular). Also 'help me to remember' can be simplified to 'helps me remember.' This corrects verb agreement with a gerund subject.

× For example, last week I went to the Image Castle and I took a millions of photos which made me memorable and helped me to remember.

✓ For example, last week I went to Image Castle and I took millions of photos, which helped me remember.

Use 'Image Castle' without 'the' if it is a proper name; 'a millions' is incorrect plural article—use 'millions of photos' or 'a million photos.' 'Made me memorable' is incorrect context; likely 'helped me remember' suffices. Removed redundant words and corrected article/number usage and past tense clarity.

× Yesterday the Tokyo Sky Tree and there you can see beautiful buildings up there.

✓ I visited the Tokyo Skytree yesterday, and there you can see beautiful buildings around.

Original lacks a main verb and mixes time/place. Adding 'I visited' provides the past action. 'Tokyo Skytree' is one word commonly; 'up there' redundant with 'there.' 'Around' fits better to indicate surrounding area.

× From up there at night especially you can see illustrated building and panoramic views of the city, which would be a memorable and special memory for you.

✓ From up there at night, you can see illuminated buildings and panoramic views of the city, which would be a memorable experience for you.

'Illustrated building' is incorrect; likely 'illuminated buildings.' Also 'a memorable and special memory' is redundant; 'a memorable experience' is clearer. Added comma for adverbial phrase placement.

× No I don't because I am afraid of heights and I think tall buildings offer us more expensive cost of living which I think I cannot afford so I prefer low rise building to live.

✓ No, I don't because I am afraid of heights, and I think living in tall buildings is more expensive, which I cannot afford, so I prefer to live in a low-rise building.

Original has awkward noun phrases and repetition. Use 'living in tall buildings is more expensive' to express cost idea; 'offer us more expensive cost of living' is ungrammatical. Insert commas and change word order: 'prefer to live in a low-rise building.' This corrects modal/phrase usage and sentence structure.