Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear, relevant and gives good supporting details. To improve, shorten the first clause to be more concise, use one linking word to connect ideas, and avoid redundancy (e.g., "low rise houses" and "open parks" are fine but "which makes it peaceful and spacious" could be tightened). Also correct minor article usage: say "low-rise houses."

Exemplo: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home because I live in a rural area. Instead, the neighborhood has low-rise houses and many gardens and parks, so it feels peaceful and spacious.

Sugestão: Good content and clear reason for liking building photography. Improve by correcting vocabulary errors ("historic creatures" is incorrect—use "historic structures" or "architectural features"), and add a linking word for coherence. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use more specific examples (e.g., facades, cornices, windows).

Exemplo: Yes, I do. Photography is a hobby of mine, and I especially enjoy capturing architectural features such as facades, cornices and windows because they tell a story about a place and reflect its culture and history.

Sugestão: Your answer expresses interest and gives vivid detail, which is good. However, there are several language errors and clarity issues: use "I can't remember" not "I can remember", say "a famous architect/artist" rather than "artistic," and fix repetition and typos ("see it in person"). Also combine sentences with a linking word and be specific about the building or location if possible.

Exemplo: Yes, there is. I can't remember its exact name, but it was designed by a famous architect and has sculptural features that look like skeleton hands reaching out from the walls, which I find striking and dramatic, so I would love to see it in person.

Sugestão: Solid direct answer with clear reasons and specific preferences. To improve, reduce minor repetition and adjust phrasing: use "single-storey" or "single-story" and "privacy" instead of "comfortable in private." Add a linking word to show contrast and keep sentences concise.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't. I prefer single-storey or low-rise homes because they offer more privacy and a garden or outdoor space, which you don't usually get in high-rise buildings.

× The neighborhood mostly has low rise houses, lots of gardens and open parks which makes it peaceful and spacious.

✓ The neighborhood mostly has low-rise houses, lots of gardens, and open parks, which make it peaceful and spacious.

Plural subject 'low-rise houses, lots of gardens, and open parks' requires plural verb 'make' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'low rise' should be hyphenated as 'low-rise' when used as a compound adjective before a noun, and commas are needed before 'and' in a list and before the nonrestrictive clause 'which make it...'. Suggestion: ensure compound adjectives are hyphenated and match verb number to a compound plural subject. Grammar problem type ID:27

× I especially like the architectural details and historic creatures because they tell a story about a place and reflect its culture and past.

✓ I especially like the architectural details and historic features because they tell a story about a place and reflect its culture and past.

'Historic creatures' is incorrect in this context; the intended noun is 'features' (or 'elements' or 'details'). This is a vocabulary/word-choice error that leads to a nonsensical phrase. Suggestion: choose nouns that logically match 'architectural details', such as 'features' or 'elements'. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Although I can remember its exact name, it was designed by a famous artistic and has sculptural features that look like skeleton hands reaching out from the walls, which I find striking and dramatic.

✓ Although I cannot remember its exact name, it was designed by a famous artist and has sculptural features that look like skeletal hands reaching out from the walls, which I find striking and dramatic.

Multiple issues: 'can remember' contradicts intended meaning; use 'cannot remember'. 'artistic' is an adjective, but a person is 'artist'. 'skeleton hands' should be 'skeletal hands' (adjective form). The clause 'which I find...' refers to the sculptural features (plural), so sentence structure is fine after these corrections. Suggestion: use the correct negation for inability, use nouns for people (artist), and use appropriate adjective forms (skeletal). Grammar problem type ID:12

× So I would like to see in in person.

✓ So I would like to see it in person.

There is a pronoun repetition and missing object: 'in in' is a typo; the correct phrase is 'see it in person.' Also 'in person' is the proper prepositional phrase meaning 'personally'. Suggestion: proofread for repeated words and ensure the correct object pronoun 'it' is used. Grammar problem type ID:11

× No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building.

✓ No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable. 'Wouldn't like to' correctly expresses preference. No correction needed. Suggestion: none. Grammar problem type ID:4

× I prefer houses that are more grounded like single story or low rise homes because they feel more comfortable in private and I like the sense of a garden or outdoor space that you don't usually get in a high rise building.

✓ I prefer houses that are more grounded, like single-story or low-rise homes, because they feel more private and I like the sense of a garden or outdoor space that you don't usually get in a high-rise building.

Improvements: hyphenate 'single-story' and 'low-rise' when used as compound adjectives; add commas around the 'like' phrase. 'Feel more comfortable in private' is awkward; 'feel more private' is clearer. 'a high rise building' should be 'a high-rise building.' Suggestion: hyphenate compound adjectives and choose clearer adjective phrases for sensations (private vs. comfortable in private). Grammar problem type ID:11