Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and clear. Start with a simple topic sentence stating whether there are tall buildings near your home. Then add one or two specific supporting details (location names, relative height, or how common they are) using linking words like "but" or "however." Avoid unclear phrases and unnecessary words.

Exemplo: No, there are not many tall buildings near my home. Dongdaemun is mostly low-rise residential blocks, unlike Gangnam or Yeouido which have many skyscrapers, so the skyline around my neighborhood is quite low.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then explain briefly with specific reasons and an example. Use correct tense and smoother linking phrases like "but" or "when." Avoid repetition and ungrammatical phrases.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually photograph buildings at home. However, when I travel I often take pictures of interesting architecture because buildings abroad can look very different from those in Korea; for example, I photographed traditional temples in Japan last year.

Sugestão: Start with a clear statement of which building you want to visit. Give specific reasons (shops, restaurants, atmosphere) and finish the sentence. Use linking words such as "because" and keep it within a few concise sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the large department stores in Seoul. I enjoy going there because they have many international brands, a wide variety of restaurants, and interesting displays, so I can shop and try different foods in one place.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer about whether you want to live in a tall building, then explain clearly why, with specific details about future plans (house, garden, pets). Use correct grammar for tenses and possessives and avoid fragmented sentences.

Exemplo: I don't plan to live in a tall building in the future. Although I currently live in an apartment, I hope to buy a house with a yard after I get married so my dog can play outdoors.

× I live in sorrow but there aren't have a toy building like Gangnam and Yoyido has a lot of tour ratings, but my home in Dongdaemungu has, uh, that.

✓ I live in Seoul, but there aren't any tall buildings like in Gangnam and Yeouido; my neighborhood in Dongdaemun does not have them.

The sentence had several problems: 'sorrow' is a wrong word for the city name (Seoul) and is a lexical error rather than grammar; 'aren't have' is an incorrect combination of 'there are' with 'have' (incorrect use of pronouns/verb construction) and should be 'there aren't any'; 'toy building' is likely intended as 'tall buildings' and 'Yoyido' is a misspelling of 'Yeouido'. Use 'in' with neighbourhoods and 'does not have them' correctly refers back to 'tall buildings'. Suggestion: use 'there is/there are' + quantifier (any) and match pronouns properly to refer back to plural noun.

× No, I don't usually take a pic take a picture of buildings in daily basis, but when I'm traveling I try to do that because there has a surprising things different from Korea. So I just picture take a picture at this.

✓ No, I don't usually take pictures of buildings on a daily basis, but when I'm traveling I try to, because there are surprising differences from Korea. So I just take pictures then.

Issues corrected: repeated fragments ('take a pic take a picture') removed; 'in daily basis' is wrong preposition and article—use 'on a daily basis' (preposition error); 'there has a surprising things' is ungrammatical: use 'there are surprising differences' (there be issue and subject-verb agreement) and plural noun 'differences' instead of 'surprising things'. 'picture take a picture at this' is incorrect word order; use 'take pictures then'. Suggestion: simplify to clear subject-verb-object order, use 'on a daily basis', and use 'there are' for plural existence statements.

× I love joking so I like to go to department store there has a lot of shopping centers and brands that I like and also there has a lots of restaurants and when I'm go there I.

✓ I like joking, so I enjoy going to department stores because they have a lot of shopping areas and brands that I like, and there are also many restaurants. When I go there, I ...

Errors fixed: 'I love joking' is acceptable but 'so I like to go to department store' needs plural or article: use 'going to department stores' (article/number issue). 'there has' is incorrect for existence—use 'they have' (pronoun reference to department stores) or 'there are' for restaurants; 'a lots of' is incorrect quantifier—use 'many' or 'a lot of'. 'when I'm go there' is wrong verb form—use 'when I go there'. Suggestion: use consistent plural nouns and correct 'there is/are' and pronoun references; ensure verb forms after 'when'.

× Now I live in apartment 2 buildings, but later I like to own my own house. And I was married so I want to had a dog outdoor.

✓ Now I live in an apartment building with two units, but later I'd like to own my own house. I am married now, so I want to have a dog and keep it outdoors.

Multiple corrections: 'live in apartment 2 buildings' is ungrammatical—needs article and clearer structure ('an apartment building with two units' or 'in a two-bedroom apartment'); 'later I like to own' should be future intention 'I'd like to own' (modal verb/tense); 'I was married' is wrong tense—if currently married use 'I am married'; 'I want to had a dog outdoor' mixes tenses and wrong verb form—use 'want to have' and 'outdoors' as adverb. Suggestion: use correct articles ('an'), correct modal constructions for desires ('I'd like'), correct present tense for current status, and 'have' not 'had' after 'want to'.