Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence then give one specific reason with linking words. Correct plural/singular forms and article use (e.g., 'high-rise buildings', 'low-rise buildings').

Exemplo: No — there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. The local regulations ban high-rise buildings, and most people prefer low-rise housing because they want to keep trees and an open sky in the neighborhood.

Sugestão: Make the answer grammatically correct and give a brief reason using linking words. Use clearer vocabulary (e.g., 'experience' and 'memory') and correct verb forms.

Exemplo: Not usually. I rarely photograph buildings because I prefer to experience them directly; taking photos often distracts me and doesn’t capture the atmosphere as well as remembering it.

Sugestão: Answer directly with one clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details connected with linking words. Fix repetitions and grammar (e.g., 'it is warm and cozy').

Exemplo: I don’t have a famous building I want to visit; instead, I’d choose my old family home. It is warm and cozy, and I enjoy spending time there with my family because it helps me relax and feel comfortable.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer then two concise reasons with correct linking words. Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., 'high-rise building', 'evacuate', 'afford').

Exemplo: No, I wouldn’t want to live in a high-rise building. Firstly, I worry it would be hard to evacuate in an emergency, and secondly, such apartments are usually expensive so they may be unaffordable for my family.

× In my home, builders are not permitted to construct high rise buildings.

✓ In my area, builders are not permitted to construct high-rise buildings.

Use 'high-rise' with a hyphen as a compound adjective and 'area' or 'neighborhood' is more natural than 'home' when referring to local policy. 'Buildings' plural is correct; this correction addresses word choice and hyphenation rather than number. Suggestion: say 'in my area' and hyphenate 'high-rise' for correct idiomatic usage.

× Moreover, people prefer low rise building because they want to enjoy trees and open sky.

✓ Moreover, people prefer low-rise buildings because they want to enjoy trees and the open sky.

Use hyphenated compound adjective 'low-rise' and plural 'buildings' to match 'people prefer'. Include the definite article 'the' before 'open sky' to refer to a specific concept. Suggestion: use 'low-rise buildings' and 'the open sky'.

× I have never taken photos or building because I think seeing it with my real eyes can bring better experience and leave my mood instead of see it through photos.

✓ I have never taken photos of buildings because I think seeing them with my own eyes gives a better experience and affects my mood more than seeing them in photos.

Use the correct preposition 'of' with 'photos of buildings' (preposition error), plural 'buildings' to match context, and plural pronoun 'them' to refer back to buildings (pronoun agreement). Replace 'real eyes' with 'my own eyes' (natural phrasing), use 'gives' (subject-verb agreement and present tense consistency), and 'affects my mood more than seeing them in photos' for clarity. Suggestion: keep pronouns consistent and use natural collocations like 'photos of buildings' and 'my own eyes'.

× I think my old house is my favorite place so I would I would not choose any particular building.

✓ I think my old house is my favorite place, so I would not choose any particular building to visit.

Remove duplicated 'I would'. Add a comma before 'so' to connect clauses properly (sentence structure). Add 'to visit' to clarify the question's intent. Suggestion: avoid repetition and make the purpose explicit.

× I enjoy spending time with my family it because it my warm and cozy.

✓ I enjoy spending time with my family because it is warm and cozy.

Remove the extraneous 'it' and add the verb 'is' for a complete clause (sentence needed a verb). Use 'warm and cozy' as adjectives describing 'it' (the house). Suggestion: ensure each sentence has one subject and one verb and avoid extra words.

× And I can relax with my family.

✓ I can relax with my family.

Remove the unnecessary conjunction 'And' at the start for written form; the present tense 'can relax' is fine. Suggestion: avoid starting short responses with 'And' in formal answers.

× I don't really like to live in a high rise building because if we have any accident that's too difficult to escape then moreover the price to build a buildings like that is too expensive so it can afford it.

✓ I don't really want to live in a high-rise building because if there were an accident it would be difficult to escape, and building such buildings is very expensive so many people cannot afford them.

Use 'want to live' rather than 'like to live' for preference. Hyphenate 'high-rise'. Use conditional 'if there were an accident' and modal 'would be difficult' for hypothetical situations (conditional mood). Replace 'that's too difficult to escape' with 'it would be difficult to escape' (sentence clarity). Correct 'the price to build a buildings like that is too expensive' to 'building such buildings is very expensive' (article and plural agreement). Replace 'so it can afford it' with 'so many people cannot afford them' for subject clarity and correct modal/negation. Suggestion: use proper conditional forms and ensure subject-pronoun agreement; keep plurality consistent.