Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear and concise: start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, and give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and keep sentences natural. Also use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., 'because', 'so', 'therefore').

Exemplo: No, there are no tall buildings near my home. I live in a village near Amritsar where most houses are single-storey brick dwellings because land is inexpensive and families prefer large plots for gardens and livestock.

Sugestão: Answer directly, correct word choice and grammar, and give one clear reason and one brief detail. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so'. Avoid irrelevant phrases and unclear vocabulary.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes take photos of buildings because I find modern and historical architecture interesting. For example, I photograph impressive facades and post a few pictures on Snapchat to share them with friends.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct statement and fix grammar and vocabulary errors. Give specific reasons and one or two supporting details, using linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Clarify unclear phrases (e.g., 'unpaid brickworks').

Exemplo: Yes. My favorite building is Khalsa College, which was designed by a British architect and built in the 19th century. I would like to visit because its Victorian architecture and ornate brickwork reflect the college's strong historical significance.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, correct minor grammar issues, and give two specific reasons linked with a brief example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to make your answer coherent and natural.

Exemplo: No, I would not want to live in a tall building because I grew up in a village and prefer the space and affordability of a house. For example, a house usually has a large living area and garden where I can relax and entertain guests, which many high-rise apartments lack.

× I'm no my village near Amritsar doesn't have tall buildings.

✓ No, my village near Amritsar doesn't have tall buildings.

The original sentence combined a negation 'I'm no' incorrectly with the clause; this is a sentence structure error. Use a clear response 'No,' followed by the full clause. Suggestion: start with 'No,' then the subject and verb: 'my village near Amritsar doesn't have tall buildings.'

× The area is mostly residential with this single story brick houses because land is inexpensive and people refer large plots.

✓ The area is mostly residential with single-story brick houses because land is inexpensive and people prefer large plots.

Errors include incorrect article and adjective-noun form and wrong verb choice. 'This' is incorrect before a plural noun; use no article or 'the' depending on context. 'Single-story' needs a hyphen as a compound adjective. 'Refer' is wrong; correct verb is 'prefer.' Fix: 'with single-story brick houses' and 'people prefer large plots.'

× Buildings I do take photos of buildings, sometimes I escapally live photographing moderns currency rapid history phase because they look impressive and I often post the pictures on Snapchat to keep my streak with friends.

✓ Yes, I do take photos of buildings. Sometimes I especially enjoy photographing modern and historic buildings because they look impressive, and I often post the pictures on Snapchat to keep my streak with friends.

Multiple problems: repeated noun, wrong adverb 'escapally' should be 'especially,' incorrect adjectives 'moderns currency rapid history phase' unclear and should be 'modern and historic' or 'historic' to contrast time periods. Also sentence needed punctuation and conjunctions. This is mainly sentence structure and incorrect word usage; provide clearer words and punctuation.

× She would like to visit.

✓ I would like to visit.

The student is speaking about themselves; using 'She' is the wrong pronoun. Replace with first-person 'I.' This fixes pronoun reference.

× It was designed by a British architect and built in 19th century.

✓ It was designed by a British architect and built in the 19th century.

Omission of the definite article 'the' before '19th century' is incorrect. When referring to centuries, use 'the' + ordinal + 'century.'

× I would like to visit because it's impressive Victorian architecture and unpaid brickworks which gives you a strong historical.

✓ I would like to visit because of its impressive Victorian architecture and unique brickwork, which give a strong sense of history.

Problems: 'it's impressive Victorian architecture' should be 'its impressive Victorian architecture' (possessive). 'Unpaid' is wrong; likely meant 'ornamental' or 'unique'—use 'unique' here. 'Brickworks' refers to factories; use 'brickwork.' Also subject-verb agreement: 'architecture and brickwork' are plural ideas, so use 'give.' 'A strong historical' is incomplete; use 'a strong sense of history.'

× Live in a tall building? No, no I would not.

✓ Live in a tall building? No, I would not.

This sentence is acceptable, but punctuation and spacing improved. 'No, no I would not.' is colloquial repetition; keep one 'No' with comma for clarity.

× I grew up in a village and feel more comfortable in a house because houses tend to be more spacious and affordable than apartments.

✓ I grew up in a village and feel more comfortable in a house because houses tend to be more spacious and affordable than apartments.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses past tense 'grew up' and present 'feel' appropriately. No change needed.

× For example, families, houses large and when I can relax and entertain guests, which is something many taller buildings lack.

✓ For example, houses allow families to have more space where I can relax and entertain guests, which is something many taller buildings lack.

Original fragment is ungrammatical and disordered. Reconstruct sentence to show cause and effect: 'houses allow families to have more space where I can relax and entertain guests.' This corrects sentence structure and clarifies meaning.