Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatical, concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct article and plural usage, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep within 1–3 sentences.

Exemplo: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. I live in a small hometown, so most structures are only two or three stories high, and the landscape is mostly low-rise houses and shops.

Sugestão: Answer clearly and avoid filler sounds. Use correct verb forms and specific reasons. Give one clear example of when or why you photograph buildings, using a linking word to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, sometimes I take photos of buildings when I travel because their architecture reminds me of the places I've visited; for example, I photographed old brick warehouses last month to remember that trip.

Sugestão: Be specific and confident. Begin with a clear statement about whether you have a particular building in mind, then name the building and give one or two reasons why you want to visit, using linking words for clarity. Correct tense and article usage.

Exemplo: I don't usually think about buildings, but if I had the chance I would visit the ‘Mushroom’ building in Sweden because its unusual design fascinates me, and I would like to see its interior layout and photo its exterior.

Sugestão: This answer is clear but could be more concise and natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one specific reason. Avoid repetition and use linking words to join sentences logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building, provided it has a reliable elevator, because I prefer easy access and it would be inconvenient to climb many flights of stairs every day.

× No we don't have a tall buildings near our home.

✓ No, we don't have any tall buildings near our home.

The noun phrase 'a tall buildings' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'buildings'. Use 'any' with plural nouns in negative sentences: 'any tall buildings'. Also add a comma after 'No' for natural speech pauses.

× Since I live in a hometown we don't have so much but we have buildings but not higher.

✓ Since I live in a small hometown, we don't have many tall buildings; we have some buildings, but none are very high.

Errors: 'a hometown' is acceptable but 'in a hometown' is unnatural; 'so much' is uncountable and incorrect for countable 'buildings' — use 'many'. 'Not higher' is awkward; use 'none are very high'. Added commas and clearer phrasing.

× Yes uh, sometimes if I in the mood to take off pothos and it helps me to MMM reminds me of things when it comes to the other sessions or other day.

✓ Yes, sometimes if I'm in the mood to take photos, I take them; they help me and remind me of things from other occasions or days.

Multiple issues: missing auxiliary 'am' for 'I'm' (present continuous), wrong verb 'take off pothos' should be 'take photos', unnecessary 'to' and 'reminds' should match plural subject 'they'. Also 'sessions' unclear; 'occasions or days' is clearer. Use consistent present tense.

× I think I've been visit this once.

✓ I think I've visited it once.

'I've been visit' is incorrect: after 'I have' use past participle 'visited'. Also use appropriate pronoun 'it' for 'the mushroom building' and 'once' at end.

× Umm, to be honest, I don't have so much umm building when it comes something building, I don't have so much umm know about that.

✓ To be honest, I don't know much about buildings; I don't have many specific ones in mind.

'so much building' is ungrammatical: use 'much' with uncountables and 'many' with countable 'buildings'. Sentence was repetitive and unclear; rephrase to 'I don't know much about buildings' and 'I don't have many specific ones in mind'.

× Yes, if I have a chance to live in a tall building, why not as long as there is an elevator?

✓ Yes, if I had the chance to live in a tall building, why not, as long as there's an elevator?

Mix of real and unreal conditional: speaking hypothetically about preference often uses 'if I had the chance' or 'if I have the chance'. Using 'had' makes it clearly hypothetical; also contracted 'there's' is more natural. This aligns verb forms consistently.

× Because if I live in a tall building and if I have to walk in a stairs then I don't want it.

✓ Because if I lived in a tall building and had to walk up stairs, I wouldn't want that.

Use consistent conditional structure: 'if I lived' + 'I wouldn't want'. 'Walk in a stairs' is incorrect: say 'walk up stairs' or 'use the stairs'. 'I don't want it' should be 'I wouldn't want that' to match hypothetical.