Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, fluency and clarity: use correct singular/plural and articles, combine short fragments into clear sentences, and add one specific detail. Use linking words to make it natural (e.g., “because,” “so,” “which”). Keep answers within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: My favourite food is boiled eggs with crispy bacon and some cheese. I usually eat this for breakfast because it gives me a lot of energy for work. I particularly like it when the bacon is slightly salty, which pairs well with creamy cheese.

Sugestão: Correct tense and sentence structure, avoid unnecessary words, and be specific about reasons. Start with a clear topic sentence about childhood preference, then give one or two supporting reasons using linking words like “because” or “so.”

Exemplo: When I was a child, I liked to eat boiled eggs mixed with milk. I avoided bacon and cheese because my stomach was sensitive, so my parents preferred to give me simple, easy-to-digest food.

Sugestão: Clarify the meaning and organize into coherent sentences. If you mean seasonal changes, state it directly and give one clear example. Use linking words (e.g., “in summer,” “in winter,” “so”) and avoid filler words.

Exemplo: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in winter I prefer warmer, richer breakfasts like bacon and eggs, while in summer I choose lighter options such as fruit and yogurt because it feels more refreshing.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence about change, then explain specifically how it changed using linking words (“but,” “now,” “because”). Correct grammar: use present perfect or simple present and correct verb forms.

Exemplo: My favourite food has changed a little since I was a child, but not much. I still eat boiled eggs, but now I usually add cheese and crispy bacon for extra flavour because I enjoy richer breakfasts.

× My favorite food is a boiled eggs with crispy bacons and probably cheese.

✓ My favorite food is boiled eggs with crispy bacon and probably cheese.

Incorrect use of the article 'a' with plural noun 'eggs' and incorrect plural form 'bacons'. Remove 'a' before the plural 'eggs' and use the uncountable or mass form 'bacon' for the meat. Also plural agreement: 'boiled eggs' (plural) matches predicate without 'a'. Suggestion: Use 'boiled eggs' and 'bacon' when referring to the dish in general.

× I like to eat it when I have breakfast because it's give me a lot of energy.

✓ I like to eat it when I have breakfast because it gives me a lot of energy.

Subject-verb agreement in present simple requires third-person singular 'gives' with subject 'it'. Remove contraction 'it's' (it is) and use 'it gives' for habitual fact. Suggestion: Use present simple 'gives' for general truths or habits.

× To work. Yeah, to work.

✓ Before I go to work. Yeah, before I go to work.

Fragment 'To work.' lacks a subject and verb, so sentence is incomplete. Expand to a full clause that fits context, e.g., 'before I go to work' to explain when the student eats it. Suggestion: Use a complete clause to indicate time.

× When I was child, so I'm also enjoying to eat only boiled eggs, mix it with milk without cheese or crispy but bacons because I was very small and I know that it will be hard my tummy.

✓ When I was a child, I only enjoyed eating boiled eggs, mixing them with milk without cheese or bacon because I was very small and I knew it would be hard on my stomach.

Multiple errors: missing article 'a' before 'child' (article error), incorrect tense 'I'm also enjoying' should be past 'I only enjoyed' (past tense), incorrect verb form 'to eat' should be 'eating' (verb + -ing), incorrect object pronoun 'them' for eggs, 'crispy but bacons' is ungrammatical — use 'bacon' and remove 'but', 'I know that it will be hard my tummy' has wrong tense and word order — use 'I knew it would be hard on my stomach'. Suggestions: Use 'a child', past simple for past habits, gerund 'eating' after verbs like 'enjoy', and 'on my stomach' for idiomatic expression.

× That's why I'm just eating eggs with milk.

✓ That's why I just ate eggs with milk.

Context refers to past habit; present continuous 'I'm just eating' is incorrect. Use past simple 'I just ate' or past habitual 'I used to eat'. Suggestion: Match tense to context; use past form for past events.

× Yeah, I was sitting different food, like it's just.

✓ Yeah, I ate different foods, like ...

'I was sitting different food' is ungrammatical — likely intended 'I ate different foods'. Also 'like it's just' is incomplete. Use clear verb 'ate' and plural 'foods' if referring to various items. Suggestion: Use simple past 'ate' for past actions and complete the comparison clause.

× Crispy bacon with a warmer and I eat it on the breakfast but they uh finish it but problem with my tongue.

✓ Crispy bacon when it's warmer, and I eat it for breakfast, but it sometimes causes a problem with my tongue.

Original has awkward phrase 'with a warmer' and wrong preposition 'on the breakfast' (should be 'for breakfast'), subject confusion 'they ... finish it' is unclear. Also 'problem with my tongue' needs a verb 'causes' and adverb 'sometimes'. Suggestion: Use 'for breakfast', 'when it's warmer', and a clear subject-verb structure.

× Probably it's changed but not too much because I still enjoying to eat boiled eggs but now I eat it with more.

✓ Probably it has changed but not too much because I still enjoy eating boiled eggs, but now I eat them with more additions.

Mix of tenses and verb forms: use present perfect 'has changed' for change since childhood, 'I still enjoy' not 'I still enjoying', use gerund 'enjoy eating', and plural 'them' for eggs. 'Eat it with more' is vague; 'eat them with more additions' or 'eat them with more toppings' is clearer. Suggestion: Use present perfect for life changes, present simple for habitual likes, gerund after 'enjoy', and correct pronoun agreement.

× Like cheese and crispy bacon.

✓ Like cheese and crispy bacon.

This fragment is acceptable as a continuation but is a sentence fragment lacking a main verb. It can stand as a short answer in speech, but written form would be 'I add cheese and crispy bacon.' Suggestion: Include a verb in formal contexts: 'I add cheese and crispy bacon.'

× Yeah, I still enjoying to eat boiled eggs.

✓ Yeah, I still enjoy eating boiled eggs.

Incorrect verb form 'enjoying' after 'still' — should be base form 'enjoy' for present simple habit, and use gerund 'eating' after 'enjoy'. Also avoid 'to eat' in this construction. Suggestion: Use 'I still enjoy eating...' for habitual preferences.