Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify and make the response more natural and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence naming your favourite food, then give one or two specific reasons (taste, occasion, cultural significance). Avoid vague phrases like "foodie person" and incorrect phrases like "religious food" unless you explain what you mean. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words such as "because" or "particularly".

Exemplo: My favourite food is jalebi, a sweet Indian dessert. I particularly enjoy it because it is crispy on the outside and syrupy inside, and I often eat it during festivals and family celebrations.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence about past preferences, then briefly contrast with current habits using a linking word such as "but" or "however." Remove fillers like "uh" and correct grammar (e.g., "these kinds of food" or "this kind of food"). Add a specific reason why you changed and one example of a current choice.

Exemplo: When I was young I liked eating junk food such as pizza and burgers. However, I avoid them now because I realised they made me feel sluggish, so I prefer homemade meals and salads.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly about seasonal variation. The student repeated previous points and used many fillers. State whether you change your diet by season, give one or two specific examples of seasonal foods and a reason, and use linking words like "for example" or "because." Keep sentences concise and grammatically correct.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. In summer I eat more cooling fruits like watermelon and cucumbers, while in winter I prefer hot soups and root vegetables because they keep me warm and provide more energy.

Sugestão: Provide a direct, concise answer: state clearly whether your favourite food has changed, then explain how and why with specific details. Avoid repetition and fillers. Use linking words like "because" or "so" and finish the thought (e.g., "makes our body stronger"). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood. I used to prefer fast food, but now I prefer green vegetables and balanced dishes because they make me feel healthier and give me more energy.

× Actually I'm a foodie person so mostly I like the Indian style food like jalebi and it is very religious food.

✓ Actually I'm a foodie, so I mostly like Indian-style foods like jalebi, and it is a traditional (or 'celebratory') food.

The original sentence uses awkward adjective/adverb combinations ('foodie person', 'mostly I like', 'Indian style food') and misuse of 'religious' to describe food. 'Foodie' functions as a noun without 'person'. 'Mostly' should come before the verb or clause. Use hyphen for 'Indian-style' and plural 'foods' when speaking generally. 'Religious' is incorrect; use 'traditional' or 'celebratory' depending on intended meaning. Revise word order and choice of adjectives for clarity.

× When I was young I would like to eat like uh mostly junk food like pizza and burgers.

✓ When I was young I liked to eat mostly junk food like pizza and burgers.

The modal 'would' is sometimes used for habitual past but here it is followed by 'like' causing tense confusion. Use simple past 'liked' to state a past habitual preference. Also remove filler 'like' repetition and place 'mostly' before the object.

× Now I avoid these kind of food as it is not good for health.

✓ Now I avoid these kinds of food because they are not good for my health.

'These kind of food' is incorrect—use 'these kinds of food' or 'this kind of food' for singular. Pronoun agreement: 'it is' referring to plural is wrong; use 'they are'. Also use 'because' for reason and specify 'my health' for clarity.

× Yes, of course, as I mentioned before in in uh, in my younger age, I mostly like to eat uh, junk food like pizza and burger, but mostly now I like to eat mostly, uh, green vegetables as it is very healthy for.

✓ Yes, of course. As I mentioned before, when I was younger I mostly liked to eat junk food like pizza and burgers, but now I mostly eat green vegetables because they are very healthy.

Tense consistency: refer to the younger time with past tense 'was younger' and 'liked'. Use plural 'burgers'. For current habitual actions use present simple 'I mostly eat'. The clause 'as it is very healthy for' is incomplete and mismatches number; change to 'because they are very healthy'. Remove repeated 'mostly' and fillers for fluency.

× Yes, my eating habits change as, uh, child, but now I like to eat mostly, uh, healthy, healthy food like, uh, healthy vegetable, green vegetables, as it's, uh, not only good for our health, but uh, uh, also it makes uh, our body more.

✓ Yes, my eating habits changed when I was a child, but now I mostly eat healthy foods like green vegetables, as they're not only good for our health but also make our bodies stronger.

Use past tense 'changed' for a change that occurred since childhood. 'When I was a child' is the correct phrase. Use plural 'foods' and 'green vegetables'. Contractions: 'it's' -> 'they're' to match plural. The ending 'make our body more' is incomplete; specify 'make our bodies stronger' or similar. Remove filler words and duplicate 'healthy' for clarity.