Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Begin with a clear, grammatical topic sentence and avoid unnecessary words. Use one or two supporting details (why you like it and how you eat it) with correct vocabulary. Keep it within 1–3 concise sentences and correct collocations (e.g., “chicken bread” is unclear — say “chicken” or “bread” or “chicken sandwich”).

Exemplo: My favourite food is salad because it is fresh and healthy. I usually eat it with grilled chicken or a piece of bread for a light lunch.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly with a topic sentence about the food you liked as a child, then add one brief supporting detail (reason or memory). Avoid irrelevant words like “Hello.” Keep to 1–2 sentences.

Exemplo: When I was young, I liked pasta a lot because it was easy to eat and my parents often made it with a tomato sauce I enjoyed.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence, then give specific seasonal or time-of-day examples using correct vocabulary and linking words (e.g., “for example,” “in the morning,” “in summer”). Avoid repetition and unclear words (“sea shoe”). Keep answers concise and coherent with correct grammar.

Exemplo: Yes, I eat different foods at different times. For example, in the morning I like chicken soup or toast, while in the afternoon I usually eat rice with vegetables. In winter I prefer warm soups, but in summer I prefer salads and cold dishes.

Sugestão: Give a clear, grammatical response: state whether it changed, then explain why with specific details and correct vocabulary (use “dressing,” “ingredients”). Use linking words like “but” or “because.” Keep to 2–3 sentences and avoid contradictory phrases (e.g., saying both “No” and “had changed”).

Exemplo: No, my favourite food hasn’t changed; I have always loved salad. I still prefer it because it is fresh and healthy, and I enjoy trying different dressings and ingredients such as avocado or grilled chicken.

× That's my favorite food is salad.

✓ My favorite food is salad.

The original sentence redundantly uses the demonstrative 'That’s' with 'my favorite food is...' creating an incorrect sentence structure. Replace 'That’s my favorite food is salad.' with 'My favorite food is salad.' to use a correct subject and verb. Suggestion: start simple with 'My favorite food is...' and then the noun.

× I love to eat a little with a chicken bread.

✓ I like to eat it with chicken and bread.

The phrase 'eat a little with a chicken bread' is ungrammatical: 'a little' is an unclear quantifier here, and 'chicken bread' is not a standard noun phrase. Use 'like to eat it with' to refer to the favorite food and separate 'chicken and bread' as two items. Suggestion: use 'it' to refer back to the food and list accompaniments with 'and'.

× Hello.

✓ When I was young, I liked simple foods like rice and vegetables.

A single word 'Hello.' does not answer the examiner's question and lacks relevance. This is a sentence structure/content error. Provide a complete sentence matching the past tense question 'What kind of food did you like when you were young?' Use past tense 'liked' and give examples. Suggestion: answer directly and use past simple for past preferences.

× Yes I do eat a different food at different time.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times.

Use plural 'foods' and 'times' for general habits; 'a different food' and 'different time' are incorrect quantifier/number choices. Also the auxiliary 'do' is unnecessary in a statement. Suggestion: say 'I eat different foods at different times.' for general routines.

× Example in the morning I love to eat too, example chicken soup or a sea shoe and and afternoon I love to eat rice with some.

✓ For example, in the morning I like to eat chicken soup or seafood, and in the afternoon I like to eat rice with some side dishes.

Multiple problems: 'Example' repeated and punctuation missing; 'love to eat too' is awkward; 'a sea shoe' is likely a misspelling of 'seafood'; missing 'in' before 'the afternoon'; 'some' is vague. The corrected sentence uses 'For example' to introduce examples, 'like to eat' for preference, corrects 'sea shoe' to 'seafood', and clarifies 'side dishes'. Suggestion: use clear connectors ('For example', 'and') and correct nouns and plurals.

× No, my favorite food had changed.

✓ No, my favorite food has not changed.

The question asks whether the favorite food changed since childhood; 'had changed' is incorrect here. Use present perfect 'has not changed' to indicate a state continuing from the past to the present. Suggestion: answer negative about change with 'has not changed'.

× I have always loved salad.

✓ I have always loved salad.

This sentence is correct. It uses present perfect 'have always loved' appropriately to express a continuing preference. No change needed.

× I still prefer salad because it's fresh, healthy, and I enjoy trying a different dress, dressing and in a ingredient.

✓ I still prefer salad because it's fresh and healthy, and I enjoy trying different dressings and ingredients.

Multiple issues: 'a different dress, dressing and in a ingredient' is incorrect word choice and articles. Use plural 'dressings and ingredients' without 'a' and fix repetition 'dress, dressing'. Also remove redundant commas. Suggestion: list qualities with commas and use plural nouns for general statements about variety.