Keys— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two brief supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because, so) correctly and correct small grammar issues (e.g., “on a regular basis,” “I keep them at home”).

Exemplo: I usually only carry my car key and my apartment key because they are the ones I need every day. The spare keys and other keys are kept at home for safekeeping, so I don't have to carry them around.

Sugestão: Organize the answer chronologically and correct tense/grammar. Begin with a direct statement, then give one or two specific examples, and finish with a current situation or result. Avoid informal or religious interjections like “God willing.”

Exemplo: Yes, I have lost my keys a few times in the past—for example, once I left them in a taxi and another time I misplaced them at a café. Since then, I make a point of checking my bag before I leave, and I haven't lost them for some time.

Sugestão: Give a concise direct answer, then provide a clear reason with a linking phrase (because/so). Fix small grammar (e.g., “when I come home,” “they are on vacation”). Keep it to two or three sentences.

Exemplo: No, I rarely lock myself out because I live with my family and someone is usually at home. Also, I always check that I have my keys before leaving the house to avoid that situation.

Sugestão: Clarify the condition and avoid contradictory phrasing. Begin with a clear opinion, then give a reason and a personal example. Correct grammar (e.g., “if you have a good relationship and can trust them,” “I don't know my neighbours well”).

Exemplo: I think leaving keys with a neighbour can be useful if you have a good relationship and trust them. Personally, I wouldn't do it because I don't know my neighbours well, so I prefer other options like a trusted friend or a secure key safe.

× However, all the spare ones and all the keys for all.

✓ However, I keep all the spare ones and the keys for everything at home.

Sentence fragment and incorrect verb form: the original sentence lacks a finite verb and uses an unclear phrase 'keys for all.' Use a present simple verb 'keep' to match habitual action and rephrase 'keys for everything' to clarify meaning. Suggestion: always include a main verb and a clear object when describing habitual actions.

× For all the other things I have, I kept it safe and sound at home because I don't need them in a regular basis or in a daily basis.

✓ For all the other things I have, I keep them safe and sound at home because I don't need them on a regular basis.

Multiple errors: 'kept' (past) should be 'keep' (present) to match habitual action; 'it' does not agree with plural 'things' so use 'them'; preposition phrase is 'on a regular basis' not 'in a regular basis'; 'in a daily basis' is incorrect—use 'on a daily basis' but only one phrase is needed. Use present simple for routines and ensure pronoun and verb number agreement.

× Yes, I have lost my key several times in the past and I've lost them inside a taxi and I've misplaced them somewhere.

✓ Yes, I have lost my keys several times in the past; I've lost them in a taxi and misplaced them somewhere.

Mismatch between singular 'my key' and plural 'them': keep consistent plural 'keys' when referring to multiple losses. Also 'inside a taxi' is unnatural—use 'in a taxi.' Maintain pronoun agreement and consistent number when referring to repeated events.

× So yes, I tended to forgot them.

✓ So yes, I tended to forget them.

Incorrect verb form: after 'tended to' use the base form 'forget,' not past 'forgot.' 'Tended to' indicates a habitual past tendency, so pair with the base infinitive 'forget.'

× But now I'm keeping an eye on them and God willing, I'm not.

✓ But now I keep an eye on them, and God willing, I do not lose them.

Inconsistent and unclear clause 'I'm not'—it lacks an object and does not match meaning. Use simple present 'I keep' for habitual action and a clear negative 'I do not lose them' to convey prevention. 'God willing' is fine but needs a complete clause after it.

× No, I've never done that, mainly because I don't live on my own. I live with my family and they are often at home so whenever I came home I found them and even if they are out in a vacation or travelling, I make sure that I have them with me before I left my house.

✓ No, I've never done that, mainly because I don't live on my own. I live with my family and they are often at home, so whenever I come home I find them, and even if they are on vacation or traveling, I make sure that I have them with me before I leave the house.

Tense inconsistencies and preposition errors: 'came' and 'found' are past but refer to habitual actions, so use present 'come' and 'find.' Use 'on vacation' not 'in a vacation.' 'Travelling' can be 'traveling' (American) or 'travelling' (British)—keep consistent. 'Before I left my house' should be present habitual 'before I leave the house.' Maintain consistent present tense for habitual behavior.

× It's a good idea only if you have a good relationship with your neighbor and can't trust them.

✓ It's a good idea only if you have a good relationship with your neighbor and can trust them.

Negation error: original 'can't trust them' contradicts 'good relationship.' Use 'can trust them' to express the intended condition. Also ensure pronoun 'them' refers back to 'your neighbor'—this is acceptable for gender-neutral singular.

× But in my case, I don't have that neighbor and all of my neighbor I don't know them very well, so I can't keep my keys with them because I don't often talk with them or even let their own trust in them.

✓ But in my case, I don't have such a neighbor, and all of my neighbors I don't know very well, so I can't keep my keys with them because I don't often talk to them or trust them.

Multiple pronoun and noun-number errors: 'that neighbor' should be 'such a neighbor'; 'all of my neighbor' should be plural 'neighbors'; remove redundant pronoun 'them' after 'I don't know'; use 'talk to' rather than 'talk with' (both possible, but 'talk to' is more common here); 'let their own trust in them' is ungrammatical—replace with 'trust them.' Ensure number agreement and concise phrasing.

× So it's not a good idea for me, but might be a good idea for others.

✓ So it's not a good idea for me, but it might be a good idea for others.

Missing subject 'it' in the second clause causes sentence fragment. Add 'it' to form a complete clause: 'but it might be a good idea for others.' This keeps parallel structure and clarity.