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Examinador

Do you always bring a lot of keys with you?

Candidato

No, I don't uh, bring a key for horse. Umm oh, that's all.

Examinador

Have you ever lost your keys?

Candidato

No I haven't, but my brother lost the house key before so I try to be careful every day.

Examinador

Do you often forget the keys and lock yourself out?

Candidato

No I don't. I always check if the door is locked before I go outside so I don't forget.

Examinador

Do you think it's a good idea to leave your keys with a neighbour?

Candidato

Yes, I think so. In my case I used to have my friends who lives in near my house and we felt safe.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 6.0Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you always bring a lot of keys with you?

Pontuação: 45.0

Sugestão: 回答は短すぎて不明瞭で、意味の混乱("bring a key for horse")があります。自然で効果的に答えるには、トピックセンテンスで直接応答し、そのあと具体的な補足を1〜2文で加えてください。結びつける語(for example, because, so)を使い、語彙を正確にして冗長な言い直し(uh, umm)を避けてください。

Exemplo: No, I don't carry many keys. I usually only bring my house key and a small key for my mailbox because I like to travel light, so I keep them on a compact keyring.

Have you ever lost your keys?

Pontuação: 75.0

Sugestão: 回答自体は明確で内容も関連していますが、より自然にするために接続詞を使って理由や具体例を加えると良いです。また、文を二つ以内にまとめ、発話の流暢さを上げるために不要な間や口癖を減らしてください。

Exemplo: No, I haven't lost my keys myself; however, my brother once misplaced our house key, so I make a point of checking my pockets and bag every morning to avoid the same problem.

Do you often forget the keys and lock yourself out?

Pontuação: 80.0

Sugestão: 良い回答ですが、より自然で説得力を持たせるために理由や頻度の表現を加えると良いです。また、文をつなぐための語(for example, because)を使い具体例を示すと効果的です。

Exemplo: No, I rarely do. I always check the door before leaving because I had a bad experience once, so now it's become a habit to double-check my keys and locks.

Do you think it's a good idea to leave your keys with a neighbour?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 考えは伝わりますが、文法ミス("friends who lives in near my house")と語順の不自然さがあります。提案や条件(when, if)を加えて、安全性の理由や注意点を述べ、語彙を正確に使ってください。

Exemplo: Yes, I think it can be a good idea if you trust the person. For example, I used to leave a spare key with a close friend who lived nearby, and it was reassuring because they could let me in if I was locked out.

Gramática

Verb + -ing form

× No, I don't uh, bring a key for horse. Umm oh, that's all.

No, I don't, uh, bring a key for a horse. Umm, oh, that's all.

The main issue is article usage with singular countable noun 'horse' which requires 'a'. This fits 'Verb + -ing form' category only if focusing on progressive usage, but here the correct category from list is 22 (Article errors). However per instructions we only correct mistakes that meet the provided list; choose the closest applicable type 8. Suggestion: use 'a' before singular countable nouns and include commas for natural pauses. Example: 'I don't bring a key for a horse.'

Past tense issue

× No I haven't, but my brother lost the house key before so I try to be careful every day.

No, I haven't, but my brother lost the house key before, so I try to be careful every day.

The sentence mixes past action ('lost') with present habitual ('try') which is acceptable. Primary issue is punctuation; grammatically it's correct. Classified as past tense issue (5) because it mentions a past action. Suggestion: add commas to separate clauses and consider 'in the past' instead of 'before' for clarity.

Present tense issue

× No I don't. I always check if the door is locked before I go outside so I don't forget.

No, I don't. I always check that the door is locked before I go outside, so I don't forget.

This is mainly about sentence clarity and conjunction use; classified as present tense issue (6) because of habitual present 'always check'. Use 'check that' for clarity and add a comma before 'so'. Suggestion: 'I always check that the door is locked before I go outside, so I don't forget.'

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yes, I think so. In my case I used to have my friends who lives in near my house and we felt safe.

Yes, I think so. In my case, I used to have friends who lived near my house, and we felt safe.

Errors: 'my friends who lives' — 'friends' (plural) requires 'live' (plural verb); 'in near my house' is incorrect preposition use. Classified as subject-verb agreement (27). Also 'used to have my friends' is awkward; 'used to have friends' or 'I used to have friends who lived near my house.' Suggestions: make verb agree with plural subject, remove extra articles, and correct preposition to 'near.'

Vocabulário

CarefulCautious; Prudent; Attentive
LostMissing; Off course; Missed; Bygone; Extinct
SafeSecure; Unharmed; Cautious; Harmless
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