Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and avoid unnecessary words. Use a linking phrase to give a brief reason (one or two specifics).

Exemplo: Not really. I don't walk much these days because I usually use my car for short trips, so I only walk when I need to exercise or run quick errands.

Sugestão: Give a clear past-tense topic sentence, remove repetition, and add one specific detail (where and who you went with). Use a linking word to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I often went for walks as a child. For example, I used to walk to the local park with my parents almost every weekend to play and enjoy the outdoors.

Sugestão: Begin with a concise main idea, then add one or two specific reasons and a linking word. Correct pronoun use and verb forms for natural speech.

Exemplo: People often walk in parks to be close to nature and relax. Additionally, parks offer open space and fresh air, which helps reduce stress after a busy day.

Sugestão: Use a conditional structure naturally, avoid repeating phrases, and include a specific reason or image to enrich the answer.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I'd take a long walk along a mountain road because the scenery and fresh air would be peaceful and inspiring.

Sugestão: Answer directly in past simple, remove filler words, correct article and verb forms, and give one specific detail about the walk to make it vivid.

Exemplo: Recently I went to a nearby park for a walk because the fresh air helped me unwind after a busy day; I also enjoyed watching people jogging and the ducks on the pond.

× In no. In recent times I'm not able to walk a lot because of personal vehicle.

✓ No. Recently I am not able to walk much because I have a personal vehicle.

The original contains awkward fragments and word choice. 'In no.' is incorrect; use 'No.' or 'Not really.' 'In recent times' is wordy; 'Recently' is natural. 'Walk a lot' is better as 'walk much' in negative sentences. 'Because of personal vehicle' lacks an article and subject; use 'because I have a personal vehicle.' Also ensure complete sentences and proper word order. Suggestion: Use complete clauses, include articles before singular nouns, and prefer 'recently' and 'much' with negatives.

× Yes, when I was a child we usually go outside to have a walk, such as in a park.

✓ Yes, when I was a child we usually went outside for a walk, for example to a park.

The time reference 'when I was a child' requires past tense. 'Go' should be 'went.' 'To have a walk' is unnatural; 'for a walk' is idiomatic. Use 'for example' instead of 'such as' before phrases. Suggestion: Match verb tense to time markers and use idiomatic expressions.

× We usually we often go to groove walk.

✓ We often went for a walk together.

The sentence repeats subjects and adverbs ('We usually we often') and contains an unclear phrase 'groove walk.' It should be simplified: use one frequency adverb ('often') and a clear verb phrase ('went for a walk'). If meaning is 'stroll in a grove,' use 'We often went for a walk in the grove.' Suggestion: Avoid duplicate words and choose clear nouns.

× There are many reasons behind this, but one crucial reason is that people want to spend time with nature and to feel and to relax yourself after busy day.

✓ There are many reasons for this, but one crucial reason is that people want to spend time in nature and relax after a busy day.

Problems: 'reasons behind this' is acceptable but 'reasons for this' is more natural. Parallelism: avoid mixing infinitives and imperative pronouns. 'To feel and to relax yourself' is incorrect pronoun use and unnecessary 'to feel' (what to feel?). Use 'spend time in nature and relax.' Also include the article 'a' before 'busy day.' Suggestion: Keep parallel verb forms and use correct reflexive/non-reflexive pronouns.

× If I get the opportunity to take a long walk, I would love to take a long walk in the road that is surrounded by mountains.

✓ If I had the opportunity to take a long walk, I would love to walk on a road surrounded by mountains.

The conditional mixes present/past incorrectly. For a hypothetical situation use 'If I had...' with 'would.' Also avoid repeating 'take a long walk'; use 'walk' once. Use 'on a road surrounded by mountains' or 'a road that is surrounded by mountains' but shorter is better. Suggestion: Use consistent conditional structure and avoid repetition.

× Recently I went to the park for a walk because, uh, it gives me a fresh air and. Unwind from a busy day.

✓ Recently I went to the park for a walk because it gave me fresh air and helped me unwind after a busy day.

Mixes past reference 'Recently I went' with present 'gives' and sentence fragments. After describing a past visit, use past tense: 'gave me fresh air' and 'helped me unwind.' Remove filler 'uh' and combine fragments into one sentence. Use 'fresh air' (no article) and 'after a busy day.' Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and avoid sentence fragments.