Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and relevant to the question. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + frequency), avoid confusing words (e.g., 'work a lot' when meaning 'walk a lot'), remove filler words, and limit to up to five concise sentences. Add one or two specific details (where, with whom, how often) using linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I walk quite often—usually three or four times a week. For example, I like to stroll in the nearby garden with friends after classes because it helps me relax and get some fresh air.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear answer (Yes/No) then give specific supporting details. Correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'farms' not 'forms'), avoid unnecessary fillers and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide one concrete example or memory.

Exemplo: Yes, I often went walking as a child because I grew up in the countryside. For instance, my friends and I used to walk to the nearby farms and explore the fields, which we found very exciting.

Sugestão: Answer directly and then support with two clear reasons using linking words. Avoid fillers like 'actually' and 'you know'. Use precise phrasing ('relieve stress' instead of 'relieve ourselves') and keep sentences concise.

Exemplo: People like walking in parks because they offer fresh air and natural scenery. In addition, walking there helps relieve stress after work and provides an easy way to exercise.

Sugestão: Provide a clear conditional reply (If I had the chance...). Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'north of China', 'distinct from the south', not 'eyes'). Give specific reasons and one detail about the experience, avoid fragmented sentences.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in northern China because the landscape and climate are very different from the south. I especially want to walk in snowy forests in winter to enjoy the quiet and the views.

Sugestão: Start with a direct past-tense answer (I went to...). Be specific about time and place, correct unclear words ('tattoo' seems wrong), and finish the thought. Limit to up to five sentences and use linking words to explain why you went and what happened.

Exemplo: Lately I went for a walk in the garden near my university. Yesterday a taxi driver mentioned a free park nearby, so I decided to visit the garden to explore the area and relax for an hour.

× Actually, I work a lot because I'm really into working at that time.

✓ Actually, I work a lot because I'm really into working at the moment.

Use present simple 'work' and 'at the moment' for current habitual or temporary situations; 'at that time' refers to a past time and is inconsistent with present tense.

× I can feel relaxing and free and sometimes I prefer to go to the garden with my friends or families for a walk.

✓ I can feel relaxed and free, and sometimes I prefer to go to the garden with my friends or family for a walk.

After 'feel' use the adjective 'relaxed' not the verb '-ing' form 'relaxing'. Use singular 'family' or 'families' depends on meaning; 'friends or family' is the usual expression.

× You know, we are very young and we enjoyed the.

✓ You know, we were very young and we enjoyed it.

Tense inconsistency: past context requires 'were' not 'are'. Also the sentence is missing an object after 'enjoyed' — add 'it' to complete the thought.

× When I was a child, I lived in the countryside, so there are many farms and trees.

✓ When I was a child, I lived in the countryside, so there were many farms and trees.

Past time context requires past tense 'were' not present 'are'.

× So usually I went out for a walk to the forms with my classmates and friends.

✓ So usually I went out for a walk to the farms with my classmates and friends.

Typo 'forms' should be 'farms'. Also 'to the farms' is correct preposition usage for going to a place.

× Actually, I think in parks there are many flowers and trees and it can give us some fresh air so that we can relieve ourselves after the work and, you know, we can exercise.

✓ Actually, I think parks have many flowers and trees and they can give us fresh air so that we can relax after work and, you know, exercise.

Use simple present 'parks have' for general statements. 'Relieve ourselves after the work' is unnatural: 'relax after work' is idiomatic. Remove unnecessary articles: 'after work' (no 'the').

× If Nigh had a chance, I prefer to go to the north of China because it is really different from our South of China and there are many eyes.

✓ If I had the chance, I would prefer to go to the north of China because it is really different from the south of China and there are many lakes.

Conditional sentence: use 'If I had ... I would prefer' for hypothetical present. 'Nigh' is a typo for 'I'. 'South of China' should be 'the south of China' or 'southern China'. 'eyes' is a wrong word; likely 'lakes' or 'cities' needed — choose 'lakes' here.

× In the winter it snows very much.

✓ In winter it snows a lot.

Use 'in winter' (no 'the' usually) and 'a lot' is the common adverbial phrase. 'Snows very much' is unidiomatic.

× Lately I went for a walk in the garden near my university because yesterday I took a taxi and the driver told me that there is a very nice park in the tattoo and it is free, so I really want to try that.

✓ Recently I went for a walk in the garden near my university because yesterday I took a taxi and the driver told me that there is a very nice park in the town and it is free, so I really wanted to try it.

Use 'recently' for a past action; 'lately' can be okay but keep tense consistent: past actions use past verbs ('wanted'). 'Tattoo' is a typo for 'town'. 'Try that' -> 'try it' is more natural.

× Then I.

✓ Then I went to see it.

Original fragment is incomplete and lacks a verb and object. Provide a complete clause that fits context: 'Then I went to see it.'