Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No or frequency), then give one reason with a linking word. Reduce fillers (umm, uh) and avoid vague percentages.

Exemplo: Not really, I don't walk a lot. I usually drive my own car because it is much more convenient for getting around the city, so I only walk when places are nearby.

Sugestão: Give a clear past-frequency statement and one or two specific examples using past tense. Use linking words like 'for example' correctly and avoid contradictory time phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I often went for walks as a child. For example, my parents used to take me to the beach or local parks almost every weekend so we could relax and play outdoors.

Sugestão: State a clear reason, then support it with specific details and a linking word. Use singular/plural and collocations correctly (e.g., 'in my opinion', 'feel relaxed'). Avoid hesitations.

Exemplo: In my opinion, people like walking in parks because they are spacious and full of trees; as a result, visitors often feel relaxed and enjoy fresh air.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use conditional structure correctly. Be specific about the location and reasons, use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'on the beach', 'waves', 'cool breeze'), and limit to 2–3 concise sentences.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk on the beach because I enjoy listening to the waves and feeling the cool breeze; there are also benches where I could rest.

Sugestão: Give a clear past-tense answer with a specific time and a brief detail about the activity. Use appropriate verbs (e.g., 'talking' instead of 'yapping') and avoid vague phrases like 'many today'.

Exemplo: Last Sunday I went for a walk on the beach with my boyfriend. We walked along the shore and talked about plans for the coming week.

× Umm, it's just 50%, uh, you know, I have my own, umm, vehicle so that I usually use it to, umm, travel around my city because it's really convenient to me.

✓ Umm, it's only about 50%. I have my own vehicle, so I usually use it to travel around my city because it is really convenient for me.

Pronoun and phrasing issues: 'it's just 50%' is vague; 'just' better as 'only about'. 'so that I usually use it to, umm, travel' is awkward; use 'so I usually use it to travel'. 'convenient to me' is incorrect preposition use; correct is 'convenient for me'. Also split into two sentences for clarity.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside to take a walk when you were a child?

Verb collocation: 'have a walk' is nonstandard in this context; English commonly uses 'take a walk'. The auxiliary 'Did' indicates past, so keep base verb 'go' or better 'take'. Here 'Did you often go out to take a walk...' or the provided correction preserves tense and correct collocation.

× Uh, yes I did. When I was a child I used to, umm, go out for a week, umm, for example, on weekends my parents will take me to the uh, the beach or the umm, parks to umm, relax.

✓ Uh, yes I did. When I was a child I used to go out on weekends; for example, my parents would take me to the beach or parks to relax.

Tense and modal consistency: 'go out for a week' is incorrect meaning; likely 'go out on weekends'. Mix of 'used to' (past habit) with 'will take' is inconsistent; replace 'will' with 'would' to match past habitual context. Removed extra articles and filler words for clarity.

× Uh, in my opinions, I think that park is such a, umm, spacious place and very umm, and there are a lot of uh, trees so people feel very umm, unwind.

✓ Uh, in my opinion, I think that a park is a very spacious place and there are a lot of trees, so people feel very relaxed.

Pronoun and article errors: use singular opinion 'in my opinion'. Use 'a park' when speaking generally. 'very umm, and' redundant; 'unwind' is a verb, use adjective 'relaxed'. Rephrase for natural word order.

× I think I would like to take a long break in a beach because I love to hear the wavings and the winds are outside the beach very cold and it's also have bench for me.

✓ I think I would like to take a long break on a beach because I love to hear the waves, the wind at the beach is very cold, and there are also benches for me.

Article and vocabulary errors: use 'on a beach' or 'at the beach' not 'in a beach'. 'wavings' incorrect; use 'waves'. 'the winds are outside the beach very cold' is ungrammatical—rephrase to 'the wind at the beach is very cold'. 'it's also have bench' incorrect subject-verb and article; use 'there are also benches'.

× Uh, I think it's beach. Umm, I remember on the last Sunday I went to the beach for a walk with my boyfriend and we umm, yapping together about many umm, today.

✓ Uh, I think it was the beach. I remember last Sunday I went to the beach for a walk with my boyfriend and we chatted a lot about many things.

Tense and word choice: 'it's beach' should be past 'it was the beach' to match question about where you went recently. 'on the last Sunday' should be 'last Sunday'. 'yapping' is informal and awkward here; 'chatted' is appropriate. 'about many umm, today' unclear; likely 'about many things'.