Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail using a linking word. Correct grammar: use present simple, proper verb forms and articles. Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I walk a lot, especially in the evenings. For example, I usually walk with my family and friends for about 30 minutes because it helps me relax and stay healthy.

Sugestão: Answer directly about past habits using past tense. Give one clear example and avoid fillers. Use linking words like 'usually' or 'often' to show frequency and correct verb forms.

Exemplo: Not really; when I was a child I usually played games outside with my friends rather than going for walks. For instance, we often played running games in the street, which kept us active.

Sugestão: Give a clear, structured answer: state main reasons then support with a specific detail. Use linking words (because, for example, and) and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, countable nouns). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: People like walking in parks because the air is fresh and the environment is peaceful. For example, parks are quiet and pleasant, so many people go there to relax, exercise, or meet friends.

Sugestão: Start with a direct statement in conditional form, then add one specific reason or detail. Use correct distance phrasing and past reference (childhood). Avoid unclear phrases like 'child holder'.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would walk to the Gurdwara Shah, which is about ten kilometres from my house. I would like to do this because it is a traditional pilgrimage I enjoyed since childhood, and I would go with my family.

Sugestão: Use past simple for a recent activity and a clear subject-verb order. Be concise: one sentence stating where and when, and a second giving a specific reason or detail. Reduce fillers and repetition.

Exemplo: Lately, my friends and I walked to SH Market in the evening. We went there to eat ice cream and spend time together.

× Yes, of course, it's a help to improve our body and we feel relaxed when we do walking.

✓ Yes, of course, it helps to improve our health and we feel relaxed when we walk.

The original uses an unnatural noun phrase 'it's a help' and the gerund 'do walking'. Use simple present 'helps' for general truth and the verb 'walk' instead of 'do walking'. Also 'our body' is better as 'our health'. Replace with 'it helps' to match present tense and subject-verb agreement.

× I always do work with my family and friends in the evening because that I have at that time I have a spare time to spend with my family.

✓ I always spend time with my family and friends in the evening because I have spare time then.

The phrase 'do work with' is incorrect for 'spend time'. The clause is repetitive and awkward: 'because that I have at that time I have a spare time'. Use simple present 'spend' and concise adverbial phrase 'then' for time. This fixes verb usage and sentence structure.

× I don't go for a walk, I go outside in to play some games with my friends like a playing a Lotto Cam and another games, which is uh, help us to improve our body circulation well.

✓ I didn't go for walks; I went outside to play games with my friends, like playing Lotto Cam and other games, which helped improve our circulation.

Question asks about past habit, so use past tense ('didn't go', 'went', 'helped'). Also correct preposition 'go outside to play' and remove extra articles. Use plural 'other games' and past form 'helped' to match timeframe.

× Well, it's depend on people mood because they go to the park to spend their spare time because there is a, most of people, uh, already there to, uh, to walk.

✓ Well, it depends on people's moods because they go to the park to spend their spare time; many people are already there to walk.

Use third-person singular present 'depends' and possessive 'people's moods'. Replace 'most of people' with 'many people' and correct sentence structure. This matches present general reason.

× So we also talk with other peoples in the park with that area is very clear and quiet.

✓ So we also talk with other people in the park because the area is very clean and quiet.

Use plural noun 'people' (not 'peoples') and correct conjunction 'because' for reason. 'Clear' is incorrect for describing environment; use 'clean' and maintain simple present 'talk' for habitual action.

× So that's why people want to go in.

✓ So that's why people want to go there.

Preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'go' in this context; use 'go there'. This fixes sentence structure and preposition use.

× Well, I want to go to the Gurdwara Shah by walk which is 10 kilometer to my house.

✓ Well, I want to walk to Gurdwara Shah, which is 10 kilometers from my house.

Use 'walk to' instead of 'by walk', and pluralize 'kilometers'. Use 'from my house' for distance. This corrects verb phrase and preposition.

× Most of people go there by walk instead of using transportation.

✓ Most people walk there instead of using transport.

Use 'most people' rather than 'most of people'. Use verb 'walk' rather than 'go there by walk'. 'Transport' is more natural than 'transportation' here; keep simple present for habitual action.

× It is my wish from my child holder.

✓ It has been my wish since childhood.

The original phrase is unclear and ungrammatical. Use 'has been my wish since childhood' to express a longstanding desire; 'childhood' is the correct noun and present perfect fits the ongoing desire.

× If I get time, I go with my family and my friends by walk.

✓ If I have time, I go with my family and friends on foot.

Use 'have time' (present simple) for conditional habit and 'on foot' is the natural phrase for walking. Remove redundant 'my' before 'friends'.

× Well, uh, me and my friend go for, for to the, uh, SH uh, market lately because, uh, we go there in the night to eat some ice cream and, uh, to spend some time outside.

✓ Well, my friend and I went to the SH market recently because we went there at night to eat ice cream and spend time outside.

The question asks about recent past, so use past tense 'went' and adverb 'recently'. Use subject order 'my friend and I' and 'at night' for time. Remove filler words and duplicate 'go'.

× I often go in the night with my friend there.

✓ I often go there at night with my friend.

Use 'at night' for time expression, and place 'there' after the verb phrase for natural word order. Keep simple present for habitual action.