Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and relevant: state clearly whether you walk a lot, give 1–2 specific reasons or examples, and avoid unrelated details. Use correct verb forms and simple, coherent sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk for about 30 minutes every day because it helps my fitness and boosts my immunity. For example, I walk to and from university most days, which keeps me active.

Sugestão: Use past tense when talking about childhood, give a concise memory with one or two specific details (where, who, how you felt). Avoid confusing age statements and redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I often went for walks with my parents when I was a child. I remember being about eight years old and enjoying walks in the park near our house because the trees and flowers looked very pretty.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add 2–3 specific reasons with linking words (for example, because, so, also). Use appropriate adjectives and countable nouns correctly.

Exemplo: People like to walk in parks for several reasons. Firstly, the greenery is relaxing and easy on the eyes, so it reduces stress. Also, parks provide space to meet friends and to exercise, such as doing yoga or jogging.

Sugestão: Use a conditional sentence correctly and give clear reasons with specific details about the place (scenery, activities). Avoid invented words and repetition; use correct nouns (mountains) and verbs.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in Shimla, Himachal Pradesh. I would enjoy walking there because of the pine forests and mountain views, and I could try gentle hiking on the trails and visit small hill towns along the way.

Sugestão: Answer in past tense for a recent event, be specific about when and where you walked, and keep sentences clear and structured: topic sentence plus one supporting detail (duration, companions or purpose).

Exemplo: Recently, I cycled with friends from my town to a nearby village and then walked there for about an hour. We walked along the river path to enjoy the fresh air and scenery.

× Yes, I work a lot because it is beneficial for our health and immunity system.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot because it is beneficial for our health and immune system.

The student said 'work' but question asks about walking, so use 'walk'. 'Immunity system' is incorrect; the common term is 'immune system'. Use the definite article 'our' is acceptable. Also 'walk a lot' matches the present habitual action.

× With the help of bot, we will improve our booking system and remain healthy.

✓ With the help of a bot, we will improve our booking system and remain healthy.

Before a singular countable noun 'bot' an indefinite article 'a' is required. The sentence otherwise is grammatical.

× Yes, I go outside to walk with my parents when my I was a child.

✓ Yes, I went outside to walk with my parents when I was a child.

The time reference 'when I was a child' requires past simple tense 'went'. Also remove the extra 'my' before 'I'.

× I am 18 year old on that time, first time I walked with my parents, I was really enjoying that moment with my parents that was invariable because the environmental looking so pretty.

✓ I was 18 years old at that time. The first time I walked with my parents, I really enjoyed that moment because the environment looked so pretty.

Use past tense 'was' and plural 'years' with age. Use 'at that time' for timing. Split into sentences for clarity. 'Was really enjoying' should be simple past 'really enjoyed' for a completed event. 'Environmental' should be 'environment' and 'looking' should be 'looked' in past tense. 'Invariable' is incorrect in context and removed.

× They like because it is greenly which interact to our eyes and they meet peoples there and see the greenery so they can also do yoga and exercise there.

✓ They like it because it is green, which is pleasant to the eyes. They meet people there and see the greenery, so they can also do yoga and exercise there.

Add the pronoun 'it' after 'like'. 'Greenly' is not an adjective; use 'green'. 'Which interact to our eyes' should be 'which is pleasant to the eyes' or 'which is pleasing to the eyes'. 'Peoples' is incorrect plural; use 'people'. Sentence split and commas improve clarity.

× Also walking there is also beneficial because it connect with our environment.

✓ Also, walking there is beneficial because it connects us with our environment.

Subject-verb agreement: singular subject 'walking' requires 'connects'. Add 'us' to show the connection. Remove duplicate 'also' and add comma for flow.

× If I got to a chance to walk, I choose Shimla in in Himachal Pradesh, India.

✓ If I got the chance to take a long walk, I would choose Shimla in Himachal Pradesh, India.

Conditional form: For a hypothetical present/future condition, use 'If I got' with 'would choose' or better 'If I got the chance' use 'would choose'. Also 'take a long walk' is clearer than 'to walk'. Remove duplicate 'in'. Place 'Himachal Pradesh, India' after Shimla.

× I choose it because it is so greenable mounting and climbing which which covers all the activities of a daily life.

✓ I choose it because it has green mountains and many climbing opportunities, which offer a variety of outdoor activities for daily life.

'Greenable mounting and climbing' is ungrammatical. Use 'green mountains' and 'climbing opportunities'. Remove duplicate 'which'. 'Covers all the activities of a daily life' changed to 'offer a variety of outdoor activities' for natural phrasing.

× I go to work in my village from my town to another town with my friends on cycle and after some time I walk up to one hour.

✓ I went to work in my village from my town to another town with my friends by bicycle, and after arriving I walked for about one hour.

The question asked 'Where did you go for a walk lately?' so use past tense 'went'. 'On cycle' is unidiomatic; use 'by bicycle'. Use 'walked for about one hour' for duration. Add 'arriving' to clarify sequence.