Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with correct grammar and smoother phrasing. Avoid filler words and repetition (e.g. "especially mainly"). Use linking words like "because" to show reason.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. I often bring a novel when I commute because reading on the train helps me relax and use my time well.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and a concise reason with smoother language; remove hesitations and correct small grammatical errors (e.g. "on a paper" -> "on paper"). Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it helps me rest my eyes and feel less distracted compared with reading on a screen.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly: give two contrasting situations (when careful reading is necessary and when skimming is acceptable). Use a topic sentence, then link with "for example" or "whereas" and provide specific situations.

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when I study or review official documents because details matter; whereas I skim articles or news when I just want a general idea and don't need every detail.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear statement of preference and follow with a concise, specific example. Fix tense and phrasing (e.g. "I preferred or detailed reading" -> "I prefer detailed reading"). Use linking words like "for example" and avoid filler words such as "like."

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading. For example, in high school I took Japanese literature classes where we analyzed each sentence carefully, which helped me understand themes and language use.

× Yes, I do like reading every time I go out and might have some time to do something.

✓ Yes, I like to read whenever I go out and have some free time.

The original uses 'do like' unnecessarily and mixes modal 'might' which weakens certainty; use simple present 'like' for habitual actions and 'have' for possession of time. Also 'to read' is clearer than 'reading' in this context.

× I always bring my favorite novel and read especially mainly during on the train and it's very comfortable time for me.

✓ I always bring my favorite novel and read mainly on the train; it's a very comfortable time for me.

Remove redundant adverbs ('especially mainly') and correct preposition order: 'on the train' not 'during on the train'. Use a semicolon or separate sentences for clarity.

× I do prefer reading on a paper because I the reading is for me, uh, kind of a way to uh, relax my mind from the screen of the device.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because reading is, for me, a way to relax my mind from device screens.

Use 'reading on paper' not 'on a paper'; drop the extra 'the' before 'reading'. 'Device screens' is more natural than 'the screen of the device'. Also simplify 'I do prefer' to 'I prefer'.

× So paper is better.

✓ So paper is better for me.

Add 'for me' to clarify the subjective preference. Tense is fine but sentence was abrupt; adding the phrase improves naturalness.

× I don't I don't understand the questions.

✓ I don't understand the question.

Remove the duplicated 'I don't'. Use singular 'question' if the examiner asked a specific question; use plural if multiple questions. Here 'question' fits the context.

× I preferred or detailed reading.

✓ I prefer detailed reading.

Mismatch between 'preferred' and present discussion; use present 'prefer' to state a general preference. Also remove stray 'or'.

× So in my high school life I do. I did take Japanese novel classes and it was not just to read but to analyze the like each sentence's mean.

✓ In high school I took Japanese literature classes; it was not just reading but analyzing the meaning of each sentence.

Use simple past 'took' for completed actions in high school. Remove 'I do' which is inappropriate. Replace 'Japanese novel classes' with 'Japanese literature classes' and correct 'each sentence's mean' to 'the meaning of each sentence'.

× So it was very meaningful time for me.

✓ So it was a very meaningful time for me.

Add the indefinite article 'a' before 'very meaningful time'. Alternatively, 'It was a very meaningful experience for me.' would be more natural.