Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar; use a clear topic sentence, then 1–2 specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and correct collocations (e.g., “science books,” “useful for me,” “broaden my knowledge”). Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially in my free time. I mostly read personal development and science books because they give practical advice and expand my understanding of topics I’m interested in. For example, a recent book on habit formation helped me improve my daily routine.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly, then give 1–2 concise, specific reasons. Fix phrasing and avoid repetition. Use linking words (because, also) to connect ideas and correct collocations (e.g., “read on paper,” “better for my eyes”).

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more immersive and helps me picture scenes better. Also, paper is easier on my eyes than reading from a screen, so I can read for longer without discomfort.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence and give specific examples. Correct grammar (e.g., “read carefully,” “homework,” “scientific information”) and use linking words (for example, however). Keep sentences shorter and more precise.

Exemplo: I usually try to pay attention, but I read very carefully when material is important, for example my homework or scientific articles because I need to understand details. However, I skim lighter material like comics or news items when I just want entertainment.

Sugestão: Answer directly and confidently, reduce hesitations, and use correct forms (e.g., “I scan it quickly”). Provide clear contrasting reasons with linking words (especially, however). Limit to 2–3 sentences and give a brief example.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading, especially for study materials because I need to understand concepts fully. However, if I’m looking for a specific fact, I scan quickly to find the information I need.

× I have. I have always enjoyed reading books, especially when I have some free time.

✓ I have always enjoyed reading books, especially when I have some free time.

Unnecessary repetition 'I have.' before the sentence is redundant. Use a single present perfect 'I have always enjoyed' to express a past habit continuing to present.

× I always read about books about personal development and science book because I think it's you very useful for me and I think books are very good for broaden my knowledge and learning.

✓ I always read books about personal development and science because I think they are very useful for me and that books are good for broadening my knowledge and learning.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'about books about', singular 'science book' should be plural or uncountable, wrong pronoun 'you' instead of 'they', and verb forms 'broaden' should be gerund 'broadening'. Fix by using correct noun number, pronoun agreement, and gerund after 'for'.

× I myself prefer reading books from the paper because when I read from the paper I feel more realistic and I can feel and I imagine myself into the action.

✓ I prefer reading paper books because when I read from paper I feel it is more realistic and I can imagine myself in the action.

Issues: unnecessary 'myself' and awkward 'reading books from the paper' — use 'paper books' or 'on paper'. 'Feel more realistic' needs subject 'it is more realistic'. 'Imagine myself into the action' should be 'imagine myself in the action' or 'in the scene'. Correct pronoun and prepositional usage.

× On the other hand, when I read from the paper it's it's very good for my eyes more than reading the on the screen.

✓ On the other hand, when I read on paper it's much better for my eyes than reading on a screen.

Problems: duplicate 'it's it's', incorrect preposition 'read from the paper' -> 'read on paper', awkward comparative 'very good for my eyes more than' -> 'much better for my eyes than'. Also 'the on the screen' contains extra article 'the'.

× Actually, I always try to keep my attention about what I'm reading, but there's some situations that I really need to be carefully.

✓ Actually, I always try to pay attention to what I'm reading, but there are some situations when I really need to be careful.

Errors: 'keep my attention about' is incorrect — use 'pay attention to'. 'There's some situations' should be plural 'there are some situations'. 'Need to be carefully' uses adverb instead of adjective; use 'need to be careful'.

× And for example, when I read something about my home task or about scientific information, I in order to understand, I really need to be carefully.

✓ For example, when I read something about my homework or scientific information, in order to understand I really need to be careful.

Corrections: 'home task' is unnatural — use 'homework'. Remove redundant 'about'. 'I in order to understand, I' is wordy; reorder to 'in order to understand I'. Again use adjective 'careful' not adverb.

× But when I read about something else, comics or something else, it's not necessary.

✓ But when I read other things, like comics, it is not necessary.

Redundant phrase 'something else' repeated; simplify to 'other things'. Match pronoun 'it is' and natural phrasing.

× Uh, I would say I prefer a detailed reading, uh, especially, uh, when this information related to my studies, Uh, however, umm, if I am attempt to, uh, read something specific information, uh, I scanning it, uh, quickly, uh, because it's more quick, quicker and.

✓ I would say I prefer detailed reading, especially when the information is related to my studies. However, if I attempt to read specific information, I scan it quickly because it is faster.

Many structural errors: 'a detailed reading' -> 'detailed reading'; missing verb 'is' in 'when this information related' -> 'when the information is related'; 'if I am attempt to' -> 'if I attempt to'; 'read something specific information' -> 'read specific information'; 'I scanning it' -> 'I scan it'; 'more quick, quicker and' is ungrammatical -> 'it is faster'. Reorder into two clear sentences and use correct verb forms.