Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: open with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), correct grammar (e.g., "one of my favourite pastimes", "learn new things"), and limit to 3–4 sentences. Add a specific example to make it more vivid.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. It’s one of my favourite pastimes because I often learn new things and improve my English vocabulary. For example, I recently read a novel about modern life which taught me new phrases and helped me understand different expressions.

Sugestão: Start directly with your preference, avoid repetitions and vague phrases (e.g., "more original"). Use clearer reasons and a short example. Correct phrasing: "I prefer reading on paper" and explain benefits (touch, focus, imagination). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because holding a book helps me concentrate and imagine the story better. For instance, when I read novels on paper I find it easier to remember details and enjoy the characters.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence that distinguishes the two situations, fix grammar, and use linking words (e.g., "however", "for example"). Be specific about tasks that need careful reading (assignments, legal documents) and when skimming is OK (emails, adverts). Limit to 3–4 polished sentences.

Exemplo: I read carefully when I need to learn something new or complete homework, because I must understand details and avoid mistakes. However, I skim short messages or simple emails when I only need the main idea.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct statement of preference, correct grammar (e.g., "I prefer detailed reading"), and give specific reasons and an example. Avoid redundant phrases like "I myself" and "more professional and more convenient than preferred scanning." Keep it to 2–3 clear sentences and use linking words like "because" and "for example."

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I want to fully understand a topic and remember important facts. For example, when researching for a school project I read articles carefully to gather accurate information rather than just scanning them.

× I like reading, uh, because, uh, I think the reading is my, one of the favorite pastime activities.

✓ I like reading because I think reading is one of my favorite pastimes.

The original sentence uses incorrect word order and redundant articles/phrases ('the reading is my, one of the favorite pastime activities'). Use 'one of my favorite pastimes' (correct adjective order and noun form). Remove filler words and extra commas. 'Pastimes' is the correct plural noun and 'one of my favorite' places the possessive 'my' before 'favorite.'

× when I'm reading something, I always learn something new information and I can enhance my English vocabulary because I read every book in English.

✓ When I read something, I always learn new information and can improve my English vocabulary because I read books in English.

Use simple present 'read' for habitual actions rather than continuous 'I'm reading' here; 'something new information' is ungrammatical—use 'new information' (information is uncountable). 'Enhance' is acceptable but 'improve' is more natural with 'English vocabulary.' Remove 'every' before 'book' and change to plural 'books' for general habit.

× I prefer read read on a paper because when I read from a paper, you know, when I hold the book, it makes me feel more original and I can imagine what's what's going on on story or on a topic.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because when I hold a book it feels more authentic and I can imagine what is happening in the story or in the topic.

After 'prefer' use the infinitive 'to read' or gerund 'reading'; 'prefer read' is incorrect. 'On a paper' should be 'on paper' or 'on a paper' depending, but idiomatic is 'on paper.' 'More original' is unnatural; 'more authentic' fits better. Remove repeated words and extra 'on' prepositions. Use 'what is happening' for clarity.

× So that's why I prefer written on paper.

✓ So that's why I prefer writing on paper.

The phrase 'prefer written on paper' is ungrammatical: 'written' is a past participle and needs an object. Use the gerund 'writing' or 'reading' depending on intended meaning. 'Writing on paper' or 'reading on paper' are correct forms.

× It depends on situation when I need to learn something new things or once it's my home task.

✓ It depends on the situation: when I need to learn something new or when it is my homework.

Missing article 'the' before 'situation.' 'Something new things' mixes singular and plural—use 'something new' or 'new things.' 'Once it's my home task' is awkward; use 'when it is my homework' or 'when it is a home assignment.' Fix sentence structure and conjunction use.

× Home task I I read it's very carefully and I always try to concentrate about this topic.

✓ When it's homework, I read it very carefully and I always try to concentrate on the topic.

'Home task' is better as 'homework.' Word order was incorrect ('Home task I I read it's very carefully'). Place adverb 'very' before 'carefully' is fine but must attach to verb: 'read it very carefully.' Use 'concentrate on' not 'concentrate about.' Remove repeated words.

× But when this an important things I always read to it more likely.

✓ But when this is important, I am more likely to read it carefully.

Missing verb 'is' after 'this' (therefore subject-verb agreement/type). 'An important things' mixes article and plural—use 'important' (no 'an') with singular 'thing' or plural 'things' without 'an.' 'Read to it more likely' is ungrammatical; use 'I am more likely to read it carefully.'

× I myself prefer detailed reading because when I want to learn something new information, I always try to cover all information about this topic because it's more professional and more convenient than preferred scanning.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because when I want to learn something new, I try to cover all the information about the topic; it is more thorough and more useful than scanning.

'I myself' is unnecessary; 'something new information' is incorrect—use 'something new' or 'new information.' 'Cover all information' should be 'cover all the information.' 'More professional' is odd in this context; 'more thorough' or 'more useful' is better. 'Than preferred scanning' is wrong word order—use 'than scanning' or 'than using scanning.'