Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct countable nouns and article usage, and choose simpler, accurate words. Keep answer to 2–3 clear sentences: state preference then give one or two specific examples. Also vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., "fantasy novels").

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading a lot, especially fantasy novels. For example, I have many books on my bedroom shelf such as the Harry Potter and Percy Jackson series.

Sugestão: Clarify and simplify your reason. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and avoid vague phrases. State preference, give one clear reason with a linking word (because/so) and one brief supporting detail. Avoid hesitation words and unclear references.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it is more comfortable for my eyes. For instance, screens often cause eye strain and make me feel tired after a short time.

Sugestão: Make sentences grammatically correct and more concise. Start with a topic sentence answering the question, then use a linking word (for example/for instance) and give a specific situation. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Exemplo: I need to read carefully at turning points in the story, such as when a character makes an important decision that affects the plot. For example, I slow down and reread chapters that reveal a major twist or crucial information.

Sugestão: Use past and present tenses correctly and avoid contractions and extra fillers. Provide a clear contrast with linking words (but/so) and give a specific reason or result. Keep to two or three sentences and correct grammar (I tried, it didn't work, I don't understand).

Exemplo: I used to try scanning when I was younger, but it didn't work for me because I couldn't grasp the details. So now I prefer detailed reading because it helps me concentrate and understand the story better.

× Yes, I spend a lot of time on reading, especially for leading novel.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time reading, especially novels.

'Spend a lot of time' should be followed by the gerund 'reading' not the prepositional phrase 'on reading'. 'Leading novel' is awkward and likely intended to mean 'popular' or simply plural 'novels'. Use 'novels' as a general plural noun. Suggestion: say 'I spend a lot of time reading, especially novels.'

× I have a many books on my shelf in my bedroom like Harry Potter or maybe Percy Jackson.

✓ I have many books on my shelf in my bedroom, like Harry Potter and Percy Jackson.

The phrase 'a many' is incorrect; use 'many' without 'a'. Also use 'on my shelf' is fine; add a comma before examples and use 'and' between examples. Suggestion: 'I have many books on my shelf in my bedroom, like Harry Potter and Percy Jackson.'

× I am actually preferably on paper because it give me more comfortable for my eyes since I have a short side already and I uh no from somewhere else they are leading our skin uh have a negative impact for my like polite.

✓ I actually prefer paper because it is more comfortable for my eyes, and screens can have a negative impact on my eyesight.

Multiple issues: 'preferably' is an adverb but the verb needed is 'prefer' (modal/choice structure). 'It give' should be 'it is more comfortable' (subject-verb agreement and adjective use). The latter part is unclear; interpret as 'screens negatively affect eyesight' and express with correct nouns and verbs. Suggestion: keep sentences simple and clear: 'I actually prefer paper because it is more comfortable for my eyes, and screens can have a negative impact on my eyesight.'

× When that detail are very delicate or maybe there is something turning point of the book, like some part that character are trying to do something really important and affect the whole whole book, I will really concentrate and take a long time on that part and the other one.

✓ When the details are delicate or there is a turning point in the book, for example when a character is doing something important that affects the whole story, I really concentrate and spend a long time on that part.

Several agreement and word choice errors: use plural 'details are' or singular 'detail is' consistently; 'turning point' needs article 'a turning point' or 'the turning point', here 'a turning point in the book' is natural. 'Character are' should be 'a character is' or 'characters are'. 'Affect the whole whole book' -> 'affects the whole story' with correct verb agreement. 'I will really concentrate and take a long time' should be present tense 'I really concentrate and spend a long time' to match habitual action. Suggestion: simplify clauses and ensure subjects and verbs agree and tenses are consistent.

× I'm try scanning leading when I was younger but this technique doesn't work on me.

✓ I tried scanning when I was younger, but this technique didn't work for me.

'I'm try' is incorrect form; use past simple 'I tried' to match 'when I was younger'. 'Scanning' as a gerund is fine after 'tried'. 'Doesn't work on me' should be past 'didn't work for me' because referring to past experience. Suggestion: use past tense for past habits: 'I tried scanning when I was younger, but it didn't work for me.'

× I found out I'm don't understand any detail of the book and doesn't get anything.

✓ I found that I didn't understand the details of the book and didn't get anything from it.

'I'm don't' is ungrammatical; use 'I didn't' for past negative. 'Any detail' should be 'the details' or 'any of the details' depending on meaning. 'Doesn't get anything' needs subject 'I' and past tense 'didn't get anything'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and include the subject with each verb: 'I found that I didn't understand the details and didn't get anything from it.'

× So nowadays I prefer detailed reading more because it give me like a longer concentration and.

✓ So nowadays I prefer detailed reading because it gives me longer concentration.

'It give' should be 'it gives' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Prefer detailed reading more' is redundant; 'prefer detailed reading' suffices. The ending is incomplete; remove filler 'like' and extra 'and'. Suggestion: use correct third-person singular verb form and complete the sentence: 'So nowadays I prefer detailed reading because it gives me longer concentration.'