Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition ("I do like") and slightly awkward phrases like "unfold the reality." Use simpler, precise language and vary vocabulary (e.g., "non-fiction").

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially non-fiction. I mostly read magazines such as Down to Earth and academic papers because I like learning about real-world issues and research.

Sugestão: Clarify and streamline the answer: begin with a direct statement of preference, then give two clear reasons with linking words. Replace vague phrases like "it hardly depends" with "it depends on my purpose."

Exemplo: It depends on my purpose. For productive reading I prefer a screen because I can highlight and look up words easily, but for casual or relaxing reading I usually prefer paper because it feels more comfortable.

Sugestão: This answer is unclear and contains errors and irrelevant phrases (e.g., "metallic cheese"). Provide a clear topic sentence stating when you read carefully, then give concrete examples and a contrasting situation. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when the text contains technical details or important instructions, for example product specifications or academic articles. In contrast, I don't read carefully when I'm browsing social media or reading light entertainment, where a quick skim is enough.

Sugestão: Correct vocabulary mistakes and make the response more concise. Start with a clear preference, explain reasons with linking words, and give a specific example of when you would scan. Avoid awkward phrases like "detailed shipping" and "leaves are some important part."

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it provides deeper understanding and more information. I usually only scan when I'm short on time or making quick decisions, for example skimming reviews before buying a book.

× Yes, I do like to read.

✓ Yes, I like to read.

Using 'do' for emphasis in affirmative present simple is unnecessary here and sounds unnatural in this context. Use 'I like to read' for a simple statement of preference. If emphasis is intended, 'I do like to read' is acceptable but usually reserved for contrast or emphasis.

× I do like to read the topics which are related to my interests.

✓ I like reading topics that are related to my interests.

When talking about general preferences, the gerund (reading) is more natural than the infinitive with 'like to read'. Also 'which' is less natural than 'that' in restrictive relative clauses in this context.

× I mostly read magazines like Down to Earth or some research papers because I love to unfold the reality and I prefer not to choose fiction.

✓ I mostly read magazines like Down to Earth or research papers because I love to explore reality, and I prefer not to choose fiction.

'Some research papers' can be simplified to 'research papers'. 'Unfold the reality' is not natural English; 'explore reality' is a better collocation. Add a comma before 'and' joining two independent clauses.

× It hardly depends on my mood.

✓ It mostly depends on my mood.

'Hardly depends' means 'almost never depends', which likely contradicts the intended meaning. Use 'mostly depends' or 'depends largely' to express reliance on mood.

× If I want to do something productive then I like to read it on the screen so that I can highlight.

✓ If I want to do something productive, I like to read on a screen so that I can highlight.

Omit 'it' because there's no specific object; use 'on a screen' rather than 'on the screen'. Add a comma after the conditional clause.

× I can go back and check for the meanings.

✓ I can go back and check the meanings.

Omit the unnecessary preposition 'for'. 'Check the meanings' is the correct verb-object structure.

× But also if I am reading it for casual then I prefer on the paper.

✓ But if I am reading casually, I prefer paper.

'Reading it for casual' is incorrect; use the adverb 'casually'. 'Prefer on the paper' is ungrammatical — say 'I prefer paper' or 'I prefer to read on paper'. No article needed before 'paper' when speaking generally.

× Since I'm looking at this phone, I need to read carefully the metallic cheese and some technical details, but otherwise.

✓ If I'm looking at my phone, I need to read the technical details carefully; otherwise I do not need to.

Original sentence is confusing and contains 'metallic cheese', which seems to be a misstatement. I replaced it with 'technical details' to match context. 'Since' can imply cause — 'If' fits better here. Place adverb 'carefully' after the object or before the verb as appropriate. Complete the contrast clause 'otherwise I do not need to'.

× I always prefer detailed shipping.

✓ I always prefer detailed reading.

'Shipping' is incorrect; the intended word is 'reading'. Ensure correct vocabulary to match the question.

× I feel that detailed reading gives a lot of information and I feel scanning leaves are some important part and I only scanned reading when it's necessary before, like buying a book.

✓ I feel that detailed reading provides a lot of information, and scanning can miss some important parts. I only scan when it is necessary, for example when buying a book.

Multiple issues: use 'provides' or 'gives' — 'provides' is more natural here. 'Leaves are some important part' is ungrammatical; correct is 'can miss some important parts'. Use present simple 'I only scan' rather than 'I only scanned' because it's a habitual action. Replace 'before' with 'for example' and 'when it's necessary' is clearer as 'when it is necessary'.